tera bina dil bahut udas hai....

by soudagar on June 23, 2012, 09:39:26 AM
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mera dil mehsus karta hai ab bhi ke tu mere aas-paas hai
duriyan hai tere mere darmiyan,phir bhi tujhse miln ki aas hai

mana naraj ho tum mujhse, main manna lunga tumhe ek din
tere bina meri zindgi adhuri, tu hi to meri khaas hai

 teri yeh baat ke - nahi saha jata hai dukh tujhse kisi ka
mera dukh dekh, mujhe teri baat par khud se jyada vishwas hai

tumhe dekhe bina palak jhapkati nahi,tumhe dekhte hi aaye sukun
mere in tarse hontho par tumhare pankhuri jaise hontho ki pyas hai

bheed mein tanhai mein, khud ki hi parchai mein tujhko dhundh raha
har ghadi meri najar ko bas ab teri hi talash hai

bhula de ab gile -shikwe , mita de ab sab faasle
aur saza na de dil ko,dil ki tujhse yahi fariyad hai

tere bin din suna lagta hai, tere bin raat veerani hai
lout aa ab "soudagar" ki bahon mein, tere bina dil bahut udas hai
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«Reply #1 on: June 23, 2012, 09:43:01 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: June 23, 2012, 09:48:17 AM »
beautiful one rau sir
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«Reply #3 on: June 23, 2012, 02:44:21 PM »
shukriya saini sir...
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«Reply #4 on: June 23, 2012, 04:28:55 PM »
boht khub janab
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«Reply #5 on: June 23, 2012, 05:46:30 PM »
waaah sir bohooot he umdaa likha hai
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boohoot khoob
dheeeeroon daad !!
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«Reply #6 on: June 24, 2012, 02:24:16 AM »
shukriya kamlesh ji.
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«Reply #7 on: June 24, 2012, 10:05:25 AM »
Quote from: soudagar on June 23, 2012, 09:39:26 AM
mera dil mehsus karta hai ab bhi ke tu mere aas-paas hai
duriyan hai tere mere darmiyan,phir bhi tujhse miln ki aas hai

mana naraj ho tum mujhse, main manna lunga tumhe ek din
tere bina meri zindgi adhuri, tu hi to meri khaas hai

 teri yeh baat ke - nahi saha jata hai dukh tujhse kisi ka
mera dukh dekh, mujhe teri baat par khud se jyada vishwas hai

tumhe dekhe bina palak jhapkati nahi,tumhe dekhte hi aaye sukun
mere in tarse hontho par tumhare pankhuri jaise hontho ki pyas hai

bheed mein tanhai mein, khud ki hi parchai mein tujhko dhundh raha
har ghadi meri najar ko bas ab teri hi talash hai

bhula de ab gile -shikwe , mita de ab sab faasle
aur saza na de dil ko,dil ki tujhse yahi fariyad hai

tere bin din suna lagta hai, tere bin raat veerani hai
lout aa ab "soudagar" ki bahon mein, tere bina dil bahut udas hai


Bahut Khoob Saudagar Ji..

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«Reply #8 on: June 25, 2012, 02:40:39 AM »
bahut b ahut shukirya roy sir .. icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #9 on: June 25, 2012, 02:41:06 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya sahil ji
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«Reply #10 on: June 25, 2012, 02:46:15 AM »
Quote from: soudagar on June 23, 2012, 09:39:26 AM
mera dil mehsus karta hai ab bhi ke tu mere aas-paas hai
duriyan hai tere mere darmiyan,phir bhi tujhse miln ki aas hai

mana naraj ho tum mujhse, main manna lunga tumhe ek din
tere bina meri zindgi adhuri, tu hi to meri khaas hai

 teri yeh baat ke - nahi saha jata hai dukh tujhse kisi ka
mera dukh dekh, mujhe teri baat par khud se jyada vishwas hai

tumhe dekhe bina palak jhapkati nahi,tumhe dekhte hi aaye sukun
mere in tarse hontho par tumhare pankhuri jaise hontho ki pyas hai

bheed mein tanhai mein, khud ki hi parchai mein tujhko dhundh raha
har ghadi meri najar ko bas ab teri hi talash hai

bhula de ab gile -shikwe , mita de ab sab faasle
aur saza na de dil ko,dil ki tujhse yahi fariyad hai

tere bin din suna lagta hai, tere bin raat veerani hai
lout aa ab "soudagar" ki bahon mein, tere bina dil bahut udas hai


bahut bahut khoob  Applause Applause Applause

Raat baithi hai bahen pasare
siskiyan le rahe hain sitare koyi toota hua dil pukaare
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«Reply #11 on: June 25, 2012, 02:48:55 AM »
bahut  bahut shukirya aunty ji...... notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy
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«Reply #12 on: June 25, 2012, 03:32:12 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Soudagar ji... bahut bahut khoob....!!!
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«Reply #13 on: June 25, 2012, 03:50:52 PM »
bahut bahut bahut shukriya hriday ji.... notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #14 on: August 10, 2012, 03:09:07 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya bhai...
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