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sajid_ghayel
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Tera chehra bhi to kitna raushan nazar aata hai
Q na aate who dulhan banke teri mayyat pe ghayel
Baad marne ke tu dulha nazar aata hai
Aasoo ab bhi aakho me jama nazar aata hai
Q na muskara de teri is ada pe woh ghayel
Jo mar gaya hazar dard liye sine me, uska chehra mano muskurata hai
Koi jata nahi hain sath har shaks dafna ke laut aata hai
Q na kare aitraz is shariat* par ghayel
Ek bas aaye na aurat meri mazar pe, yu to achcha bura har mard aata hai
Har hath duao me utha nazar aata hai
Q na mange sath sabke rab se meri maghfirat** katil mera
Dil me uske ab bhi thoda reham nazar aata hai
-Sajid Ghayel-
* Islamic Laws
** Asking Forgiveness from from Allah
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«Reply #1 on: November 20, 2008, 08:28:14 AM » |
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bahut khoob ghayal sahab  Baadal
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #2 on: November 20, 2008, 08:39:12 AM » |
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Thank you baadal
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«Reply #3 on: November 20, 2008, 02:59:49 PM » |
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sajid_ghayel ji!
Revolutionary ho kyaa?
"Koi jata nahi hain sath har shaks dafna ke laut aata hain
Q na kare aitraz is shariat* par ghayel
Ek bas aaye na aurat meri mazar pe, yu to achcha bura har mard aata hain"
Khudaayee kaanoon key khilaaf to naheen hai yeh?
In teen laainoun mein, 'hain' ki jagah 'hai' hotaa to mazah aur bhi badhh jaataa! Urdu mein aisee jagah 'hai' hi isteymaal kiyaa jaataa hai!
Mein koyee barhaa jaankaar to naheen hoon, aap kisee barhey jaankaar ki salaah bhi leykar deykhiyegaa!
- abd bundeli
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«Reply #4 on: November 20, 2008, 03:05:17 PM » |
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Abd bhai bohat shukriya hausla afzai ke liye waise main samjha nahi aap kya chah rahe hain anyway aapke hukm ki tameer hui hain aur aainda ke kalamo me bhi hogi
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«Reply #5 on: November 20, 2008, 03:35:50 PM » |
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Abd bhai bohat shukriya hausla afzai ke liye waise main samjha nahi aap kya chah rahe hain anyway aapke hukm ki tameer hui hain aur aainda ke kalamo me bhi hogi
Thanks! I'm obliged! I want to see you a 'big one'! - abd bundeli |
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«Reply #6 on: November 20, 2008, 03:38:42 PM » |
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very nice shayari for sajid ghayel ji well done
waise hum aapke derd ki izzat karte hai
apne door se hi kisi ko apna samjh liya
itni toh hum aapki samjh ki kadr karte hai
kisi ka chehra aapke liye kafi hai
ye sunkar aapke irado ki kadr kartein hai
duniya mein kitne log hote hai jo
zindagi ke pahloon ke naye chahre dekhte hai
kisi ko naseeb ka chahera milta ,
toh kisi ko khudgarzi ka chahera milta
kya kahe in chaheron ke baarein mein
in chaheron mein kai raaz chupe hote
magar masumiyat bhi bahut khoob hoti
isliye toh har kisi ke dil mein ye masumiyat achi lagti
kya karein ye chahere bhi toh kudart ki dein hai
jiko lubha gaye woh bhi toh sabse meen hai
har chahere mein koi na koi baat hoti hai
kisi mein dukh toh kisi mein khushi nazar aati hai
kisi mein dillagi toh kisi nafrat nazar aati hai
kisi ka chahera phool jaisa muskurata hua
toh kisi ka murjhata hua nazar aata hai
kisi ke dil ka bayaan chahre ke jhil si ankhon zahir hota
toh kisi ke liye woh chahra hi kafi hota
kya kahe in chaheron ke kitne roop hote
jo jitne kareeb hote woh utne door hote
ye zindagi ke do pahloon hote
na jane koun samjhe jane
ye toh zindagi do rule hote
chahere ke kai roop hote'
*************************************MUSKAN**********************
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«Reply #7 on: November 20, 2008, 03:47:37 PM » |
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Bohat Shukriya muskan aur bohat khoobsurat jawab tha tumhara well done
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muskan_bye
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«Reply #8 on: November 20, 2008, 03:57:34 PM » |
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THANKS 'SAJID GHAYEL' JI
AAP BHI HUMARE JAWAB MEIN
JAWAB DETE TOH ACHA HOTA
TARIF DI USKE LIYE SHUKRIYA
SHAYARI DETE TOH ACHA HOTA
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«Reply #9 on: November 20, 2008, 09:33:29 PM » |
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Sawal mukhtasar kar main jawab mukhtasar karu
Jo lage bojh dil aur dimag ko woh baat main q karu
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«Reply #10 on: November 20, 2008, 09:35:42 PM » |
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Anyway i am very thankful to baadal Abd bhai and muskan jee kam se kam aapne me mere ghatiya kalam ki izzat to rakh li.
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«Reply #11 on: November 20, 2008, 09:46:50 PM » |
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Sawal mukhtasar kar main jawab mukhtasar karu
Jo lage bojh dil aur dimag ko woh baat main q karu
yah parr kar ek he shabd man main ayya hai aor wo hai.. Suchi muchi?  ? |
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«Reply #12 on: November 20, 2008, 09:53:25 PM » |
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sachchi muchchi
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«Reply #13 on: November 20, 2008, 10:25:04 PM » |
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HER BAAT MAIN ZEHAR, HER LAFZ LAGE TEERA SA
WO KARE BAAT CHEHRE KI, LAGA HUME BAHOOT AJEEB SA
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«Reply #14 on: November 20, 2008, 10:36:30 PM » |
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Main zehar hu to muje peeti q ho
Jo main teer hu to yeh zakhm sehti q ho
Ishq hain mujse ya nafrat ya faisla karo abhi
Guma fira ke har baat apni kehti q ho
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