~~"TERA PYAAR NA BHULA PAAYENGE"~~

by k.shael on January 24, 2009, 10:00:26 AM
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«Reply #1 on: January 24, 2009, 10:11:25 AM »
Mil jaaye beshak bahut pyaar hame,
Par ham tera pyaar na bhula paayenge,

Nayi khushiyaan hasa to dengi hame pal
bhar ke liye,
Par ham tere saath beeti muskano ko na
bhula paayenge,

Wat badal jaata hai iss par kisi ka jorr
nahi,
Par ham waqt ke saath khud ko na badal
paayenge,

Saansoo ka aana jaana to ram-e-rawangi hai
zindagi ki,
Teri uss pehli mohabbat ki rawangi ko khud
me behne se na rok paayenge,

Aankhon me kajal lag jaayega magar tujhse
bichadne ke gamm me behte aansoo ko na rok
paayenge,

Mana ki ham ho jaayenge kisi aur ke par tere
ho jaane ke uss pehle ehsaas ko ta-umar na
khud se juda kar paayenge...

Shally.


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honeyrose
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«Reply #2 on: January 24, 2009, 10:12:58 AM »
 Applause Applause

Very beautifull shally with images aur khoob likha hai dear... Thumbs UP
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salil2002
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«Reply #3 on: January 24, 2009, 10:17:50 AM »

gud one shally

kuch khata jo ho agar toh maaf karna
dil ka bura nahin yeh khayal rakhna
nahin chahta tha dil todna tera
jo tujhe dard hua toh mujhe maaf karna
nahin chahta tu door jaaye ek pal ko bhi
dhadkan hai tu dil kii yeh yaad rakhna
rehna har pal ban k haqeeqat meri zindgi mein
jo na ho yeh mumkin toh bas ek mera khwab rakhna

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fairy2633
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«Reply #4 on: January 24, 2009, 11:21:10 AM »
bahut accha likha hai shally... Clapping Smiley
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #5 on: January 24, 2009, 11:45:59 AM »
Mil jaaye beshak bahut pyaar hame,
Par ham tera pyaar na bhula paayenge,

Nayi khushiyaan hasa to dengi hame pal
bhar ke liye,
Par ham tere saath beeti muskano ko na
bhula paayenge,

Waqt badal jaata hai iss par kisi ka jorr
nahi,
Par ham waqt ke saath khud ko na badal
paayenge,

Saansoo ka aana jaana to ram-e-rawangi hai
zindagi ki,
Teri uss pehli mohabbat ki rawangi ko khud
me behne se na rok paayenge,

Aankhon me kajal lag jaayega magar tujhse
bichadne ke gamm me behte aansoo ko na rok
paayenge,

Mana ki ham ho jaayenge kisi aur ke par tere
ho jaane ke uss pehle ehsaas ko ta-umar na
khud se juda kar paayenge...

Shally.

Shally ji! Bahut achchhey!! Applause Clapping Smiley
Kaash ham un ko bulaaney key liye jii paatey!
Kaash ham un ko rulaaney key liye jii paatey!
Un sey alhadgee, zindagee sey judaayee-see hai;
Kaash milney key bahaaney key liye jii paatey!!
                           - abd bundeli


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Fatima..
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«Reply #6 on: January 24, 2009, 02:18:01 PM »


nice lines....
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #7 on: January 24, 2009, 03:27:16 PM »
Really so nice Shally Ji
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Talat
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«Reply #8 on: January 26, 2009, 03:11:39 PM »
Bohot Khoob likha hai Shally..Image main to padh nahin paayi lekin aapki next post se padhne main aaya....Very nice dear Applause

Very nice replies Salil, Abd Ji
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Roja
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«Reply #9 on: January 26, 2009, 03:32:02 PM »
Mil jaaye beshak bahut pyaar hame,
Par ham tera pyaar na bhula paayenge,

Nayi khushiyaan hasa to dengi hame pal
bhar ke liye,
Par ham tere saath beeti muskano ko na
bhula paayenge,

Wat badal jaata hai iss par kisi ka jorr
nahi,
Par ham waqt ke saath khud ko na badal
paayenge,

Saansoo ka aana jaana to ram-e-rawangi hai
zindagi ki,
Teri uss pehli mohabbat ki rawangi ko khud
me behne se na rok paayenge,

Aankhon me kajal lag jaayega magar tujhse
bichadne ke gamm me behte aansoo ko na rok
paayenge,

Mana ki ham ho jaayenge kisi aur ke par tere
ho jaane ke uss pehle ehsaas ko ta-umar na
khud se juda kar paayenge...

Shally.

Shally bahut accha likha hai aapne  Applause
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dead heart
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«Reply #10 on: January 26, 2009, 05:05:41 PM »
bahaut acha likha hai...Shally,Abd,Salil jee...

chahe kisi ke honthon se maine pyaar ka noor paya ho,
par uss dilbar ke labon ko hum na bhul payenge...

uss rabb ne dia hai hume ek naya dildar iss zindagi ke liye,
par tujhe dobara pane ke liye hum uss rabb se bhi ladjaenge...




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abdbundeli
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«Reply #11 on: January 27, 2009, 04:57:45 AM »
Bohot Khoob likha hai Shally..Image main to padh nahin paayi lekin aapki next post se padhne main aaya....Very nice dear Applause

Very nice replies Salil, Abd Ji
Thanks Celmira!
        - abd bundeli
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #12 on: January 27, 2009, 05:09:47 AM »
bahaut acha likha hai...Shally,Abd,Salil jee...

chahe kisi ke honthon se maine pyaar ka noor paya ho,
par uss dilbar ke labon ko hum na bhul payenge...

uss rabb ne dia hai hume ek naya dildar iss zindagi ke liye,
par tujhe dobara pane ke liye hum uss rabb se bhi ladjaenge...


Bhool paatey agar usey to dard kyoun hota?
Kais (Majnoo) usee Lailaa key liye kyoun rotaa?
Yeh yaadadaast naheen chain sey rahney deygee;
Dard hotaa hai, 'abd', aur raheygaa hotaa!!

                           - abd bundeli


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«Reply #13 on: January 27, 2009, 06:52:09 AM »
Bohot Khoob likha hai Shally..Image main to padh nahin paayi lekin aapki next post se padhne main aaya....Very nice dear Applause

Very nice replies Salil, Abd Ji
bahaut acha likha hai...Shally,Abd,Salil jee...

chahe kisi ke honthon se maine pyaar ka noor paya ho,
par uss dilbar ke labon ko hum na bhul payenge...

uss rabb ne dia hai hume ek naya dildar iss zindagi ke liye,
par tujhe dobara pane ke liye hum uss rabb se bhi ladjaenge...





thanks talat di and dead heart........
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«Reply #14 on: January 27, 2009, 07:13:21 AM »
Mil jaaye beshak bahut pyaar hame,
Par ham tera pyaar na bhula paayenge,

Nayi khushiyaan hasa to dengi hame pal
bhar ke liye,
Par ham tere saath beeti muskano ko na
bhula paayenge,

Wat badal jaata hai iss par kisi ka jorr
nahi,
Par ham waqt ke saath khud ko na badal
paayenge,

Saansoo ka aana jaana to ram-e-rawangi hai
zindagi ki,
Teri uss pehli mohabbat ki rawangi ko khud
me behne se na rok paayenge,

Aankhon me kajal lag jaayega magar tujhse
bichadne ke gamm me behte aansoo ko na rok
paayenge,

Mana ki ham ho jaayenge kisi aur ke par tere
ho jaane ke uss pehle ehsaas ko ta-umar na
khud se juda kar paayenge...

Shally.




 Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahoot hi achcha likha hai shally...
aur akhiri sher me kuch kadvi sachchai bhi chupi hui hai...keep it up.shally
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