Tera Rishta Mujhse....

by Pooja on September 04, 2009, 11:37:38 PM
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Mera Rishta tujh se bahoot purana hai
jab na tha tera sath, wo bhi ek jamana tha

Mile ho jab se Bhool gai main is dunia ko
Tujhko bhi to sirf mere he sung anna tha

thi hairaan main, kaise aor kyun tum mere ho gaye
socha bas phir yahi, jo mera tha, usne he to mere pass anna tha

Ho gai hai ab to adat is kadar tumhaari mujhko
Bhoole se bhi na sochu Tum bin kaisa mera jamana tha

Pooja ka Rishta Dard se, dard ka rishta Pooja se
shayad kismat mai sabka jaana, aor dard ke hi anna tha.....
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«Reply #1 on: September 05, 2009, 04:06:06 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Waah waah Di Bahoot Bahoot Khoob likha hai..!
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«Reply #2 on: September 05, 2009, 05:11:18 AM »
Poojaa jee:

namaste!

bazm meiN aapki taazaah kavviSh deKhi! dil ke ehsaas ko lafzoN meiN ba-Khoobee bayaa.n kiyaa hai aapne!

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Ho gai hai ab to adat is kadar tumhaari mujhko
Bhoole se bhi na sochu Tum bin kaisa mera jamana tha

yeh Sher bahot hi Khuub rahaa!

aapki koShiSh ke aaKhiri Sher ko paRh ke .. Parveen Shakir jee ke do Sher arz kar rahaa huuN!

kuchh to havaa bhii sard thii kuchh thaa teraa Khayaal bhii
dil ko Khushii ke saath saath hotaa rahaa malaal bhii

sard*cold; malaal*sorrow

merii talab thaa ek shaKhs vo jo nahii.n milaa to phir
haath duaa se yuu.N giraa bhuul gayaa savaal bhii

talab*quest/want; shaKhs*person


daad! yuuNhi liKhate raheN..!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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«Reply #3 on: September 05, 2009, 05:19:26 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on September 04, 2009, 11:37:38 PM
Mera Rishta tujh se bahoot purana hai
jab na tha tera sath, wo bhi ek jamana tha

Mile ho jab se Bhool gai main is dunia ko
Tujhko bhi to sirf mere he sung anna tha

thi hairaan main, kaise aor kyun tum mere ho gaye
socha bas phir yahi, jo mera tha, usne he to mere pass anna tha

Ho gai hai ab to adat is kadar tumhaari mujhko
Bhoole se bhi na sochu Tum bin kaisa mera jamana tha

Pooja ka Rishta Dard se, dard ka rishta Pooja se
shayad kismat mai sabka jaana, aor dard ke hi anna tha.....



Bahut Bahut Khooob Pooja...Har Ek lafz Dard Sa Jagaata Hai Dil mein..Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Ehsaas pesh Kiye hai Aapne..

Bahut Ache Pooja.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Sammual
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«Reply #4 on: September 05, 2009, 07:55:55 AM »
Bahut Khoob Pooja Ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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cara
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«Reply #5 on: September 05, 2009, 03:12:03 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on September 04, 2009, 11:37:38 PM
Mera Rishta tujh se bahoot purana hai
jab na tha tera sath, wo bhi ek jamana tha

Mile ho jab se Bhool gai main is dunia ko
Tujhko bhi to sirf mere he sung anna tha

thi hairaan main, kaise aor kyun tum mere ho gaye
socha bas phir yahi, jo mera tha, usne he to mere pass anna tha

Ho gai hai ab to adat is kadar tumhaari mujhko
Bhoole se bhi na sochu Tum bin kaisa mera jamana tha

Pooja ka Rishta Dard se, dard ka rishta Pooja se
shayad kismat mai sabka jaana, aor dard ke hi anna tha.....


kya baat hai  pooja ji....... 

JAB SE TUM AAYE HO MERI ZINDAGI MAIN,EK BADLAO SA AA GAYA HAI,
PAHELE SIRF KHUSHIYAN HI THI,AB GAM NE GALE LAGAYA HAI.

JO KABHI APNE LAGTE THEY,AB BEGANE SE LAGNE LAGE HAI,
JAB SE TUM MERI ZINDAGI MAIN AAKAR BASNE LAGE HAI.

HOGAYI HAIRAAN MAIN,TUM MERI ZINDAGI MAIN KAISE AAYE,
FIR SOCHA YEH MERA KARM HAI,JO TUM MERE PAAS AAYE.

AB TOH AANE LAGA HAI TUMSE HI MAJAA MUJHKO,
DUKH,DARD, DAKE, DOORIYAN SAB BAATI HAI MUJHKO.

POOJA KA RISHTA "DARD" SE,"DARD" KA RISHTA POOJA SE,
POOJA BIN "DARD","DARD" BIN POOJA HAI ADHURI.
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«Reply #6 on: September 05, 2009, 04:21:41 PM »
Wah wah Wah Kya baat Hai Pooja Ji... Dard Ko Lafon me Bayan Karna koi aapse seekhe.. Aakhiri Jumla Bahut Hi Umda laga.. Bahut Hi Khooooooooob.. Applause Applause

Dhaval bhai & Cara ji.. aapne Bhi Lajawab likha hai.. Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #7 on: September 05, 2009, 04:31:16 PM »
Pooja ka Rishta Dard se, dard ka rishta Pooja se
shayad kismat mai sabka jaana, aor dard ke hi anna tha.....

yeh dard ke rishte sadaa saath rahte aor
dilko tees dete rahte hain

bahut acha likha hai pooja ji
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«Reply #8 on: September 05, 2009, 04:45:33 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on September 04, 2009, 11:37:38 PM
Mera Rishta tujh se bahoot purana hai
jab na tha tera sath, wo bhi ek jamana tha

Mile ho jab se Bhool gai main is dunia ko
Tujhko bhi to sirf mere he sung anna tha

thi hairaan main, kaise aor kyun tum mere ho gaye
socha bas phir yahi, jo mera tha, usne he to mere pass anna tha

Ho gai hai ab to adat is kadar tumhaari mujhko
Bhoole se bhi na sochu Tum bin kaisa mera jamana tha

Pooja ka Rishta Dard se, dard ka rishta Pooja se
shayad kismat mai sabka jaana, aor dard ke hi anna tha.....



hmmm ...pooja ji... ki gal ho gayi ... bahut hi dard meh likh dia...


jasbir singh
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #9 on: September 05, 2009, 04:47:08 PM »
Quote from: cara on September 05, 2009, 03:12:03 PM
kya baat hai  pooja ji....... 

JAB SE TUM AAYE HO MERI ZINDAGI MAIN,EK BADLAO SA AA GAYA HAI,
PAHELE SIRF KHUSHIYAN HI THI,AB GAM NE GALE LAGAYA HAI.

JO KABHI APNE LAGTE THEY,AB BEGANE SE LAGNE LAGE HAI,
JAB SE TUM MERI ZINDAGI MAIN AAKAR BASNE LAGE HAI.

HOGAYI HAIRAAN MAIN,TUM MERI ZINDAGI MAIN KAISE AAYE,
FIR SOCHA YEH MERA KARM HAI,JO TUM MERE PAAS AAYE.

AB TOH AANE LAGA HAI TUMSE HI MAJAA MUJHKO,
DUKH,DARD, DAKE, DOORIYAN SAB BAATI HAI MUJHKO.

POOJA KA RISHTA "DARD" SE,"DARD" KA RISHTA POOJA SE,
POOJA BIN "DARD","DARD" BIN POOJA HAI ADHURI.


wah cara ji... kya jawaab likha hai aap ney

jasbir singh
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salil2002
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«Reply #10 on: September 06, 2009, 08:16:33 AM »
bahut achche di
aap ne bahut pyaari lines likhi hain.pahle toh main soch raha tha kii yeh toh ishq kii shayari hai
magar last ashar pad k samajh aaya kii aap dard k liye keh rahi thi bahut bahut achche

mere dil ka dard nahin samjhega yeh zamana
yahan nasoor ko paalne kii aadat nahin kissii kii
ek hum hi hai jo dard main muskuraate hain
yahan khushiyon main rone kii aadat hai har kissii kii
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«Reply #11 on: September 06, 2009, 09:06:25 AM »
Wah wah bahut khoob Pooja ji,Cara ji ,Saahil ji.really touching and beautiful creation. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Pooja
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«Reply #12 on: September 08, 2009, 02:12:01 AM »
Quote from: Sophi on September 05, 2009, 04:06:06 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Waah waah Di Bahoot Bahoot Khoob likha hai..!

thanks Madhu
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Pooja
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«Reply #13 on: September 08, 2009, 02:12:41 AM »
Quote from: Dhaval on September 05, 2009, 05:11:18 AM
Poojaa jee:

namaste!

bazm meiN aapki taazaah kavviSh deKhi! dil ke ehsaas ko lafzoN meiN ba-Khoobee bayaa.n kiyaa hai aapne!

yeh Sher bahot hi Khuub rahaa!

aapki koShiSh ke aaKhiri Sher ko paRh ke .. Parveen Shakir jee ke do Sher arz kar rahaa huuN!

kuchh to havaa bhii sard thii kuchh thaa teraa Khayaal bhii
dil ko Khushii ke saath saath hotaa rahaa malaal bhii

sard*cold; malaal*sorrow

merii talab thaa ek shaKhs vo jo nahii.n milaa to phir
haath duaa se yuu.N giraa bhuul gayaa savaal bhii

talab*quest/want; shaKhs*person


daad! yuuNhi liKhate raheN..!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval

bahoot bahoot shukaria Dhaval ji.... Nice sharing!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #14 on: September 08, 2009, 02:13:15 AM »
Quote from: khwaish on September 05, 2009, 05:19:26 AM
Bahut Bahut Khooob Pooja...Har Ek lafz Dard Sa Jagaata Hai Dil mein..Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Ehsaas pesh Kiye hai Aapne..

Bahut Ache Pooja.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Thanks Khwaish ji!!!
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