Tera Rishta Mujhse....

by Pooja on September 04, 2009, 11:37:38 PM
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«Reply #15 on: September 08, 2009, 02:13:43 AM »
Bahut Khoob Pooja Ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

thanks sammual ji
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«Reply #16 on: September 08, 2009, 02:14:37 AM »
kya baat hai  pooja ji....... 

JAB SE TUM AAYE HO MERI ZINDAGI MAIN,EK BADLAO SA AA GAYA HAI,
PAHELE SIRF KHUSHIYAN HI THI,AB GAM NE GALE LAGAYA HAI.

JO KABHI APNE LAGTE THEY,AB BEGANE SE LAGNE LAGE HAI,
JAB SE TUM MERI ZINDAGI MAIN AAKAR BASNE LAGE HAI.

HOGAYI HAIRAAN MAIN,TUM MERI ZINDAGI MAIN KAISE AAYE,
FIR SOCHA YEH MERA KARM HAI,JO TUM MERE PAAS AAYE.

AB TOH AANE LAGA HAI TUMSE HI MAJAA MUJHKO,
DUKH,DARD, DAKE, DOORIYAN SAB BAATI HAI MUJHKO.

POOJA KA RISHTA "DARD" SE,"DARD" KA RISHTA POOJA SE,
POOJA BIN "DARD","DARD" BIN POOJA HAI ADHURI.


Shukaria Cara ji
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«Reply #17 on: September 08, 2009, 02:15:14 AM »
Wah wah Wah Kya baat Hai Pooja Ji... Dard Ko Lafon me Bayan Karna koi aapse seekhe.. Aakhiri Jumla Bahut Hi Umda laga.. Bahut Hi Khooooooooob.. Applause Applause

Dhaval bhai & Cara ji.. aapne Bhi Lajawab likha hai.. Applause


**~** Mann **~**

bas aise h ebaithe baithe mood bana aor kalam likh gai... bahoot bahoot shukaria Mann ji!!
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«Reply #18 on: September 08, 2009, 02:16:09 AM »
Pooja ka Rishta Dard se, dard ka rishta Pooja se
shayad kismat mai sabka jaana, aor dard ke hi anna tha.....

yeh dard ke rishte sadaa saath rahte aor
dilko tees dete rahte hain

bahut acha likha hai pooja ji

very well said Nira ji... thanks!!
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«Reply #19 on: September 08, 2009, 02:16:33 AM »
hmmm ...pooja ji... ki gal ho gayi ... bahut hi dard meh likh dia...


jasbir singh


Thanks Jas ji!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #20 on: September 08, 2009, 02:17:02 AM »
bahut achche di
aap ne bahut pyaari lines likhi hain.pahle toh main soch raha tha kii yeh toh ishq kii shayari hai
magar last ashar pad k samajh aaya kii aap dard k liye keh rahi thi bahut bahut achche

mere dil ka dard nahin samjhega yeh zamana
yahan nasoor ko paalne kii aadat nahin kissii kii
ek hum hi hai jo dard main muskuraate hain
yahan khushiyon main rone kii aadat hai har kissii kii

shukaria Lil bro... Good lines
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«Reply #21 on: September 08, 2009, 02:17:36 AM »
Wah wah bahut khoob Pooja ji,Cara ji ,Saahil ji.really touching and beautiful creation. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahoot bahoot shukaria Madhu ji
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Roja
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«Reply #22 on: September 08, 2009, 02:31:00 AM »
Mera Rishta tujh se bahoot purana hai
jab na tha tera sath, wo bhi ek jamana tha

Mile ho jab se Bhool gai main is dunia ko
Tujhko bhi to sirf mere he sung anna tha

thi hairaan main, kaise aor kyun tum mere ho gaye
socha bas phir yahi, jo mera tha, usne he to mere pass anna tha

Ho gai hai ab to adat is kadar tumhaari mujhko
Bhoole se bhi na sochu Tum bin kaisa mera jamana tha

Pooja ka Rishta Dard se, dard ka rishta Pooja se
shayad kismat mai sabka jaana, aor dard ke hi anna tha.....



 Applause Applause Applause
Bahut dard hai... bahut accha likha hai aapne didi
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«Reply #23 on: September 09, 2009, 08:31:49 PM »
Mera Rishta tujh se bahoot purana hai
jab na tha tera sath, wo bhi ek jamana tha

Mile ho jab se Bhool gai main is dunia ko
Tujhko bhi to sirf mere he sung anna tha

thi hairaan main, kaise aor kyun tum mere ho gaye
socha bas phir yahi, jo mera tha, usne he to mere pass anna tha

Ho gai hai ab to adat is kadar tumhaari mujhko
Bhoole se bhi na sochu Tum bin kaisa mera jamana tha

Pooja ka Rishta Dard se, dard ka rishta Pooja se
shayad kismat mai sabka jaana, aor dard ke hi anna tha.....



Bohot Khoob Pooja
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