{{Tere Bina}} ________________ [{angel}]

by angel4u on April 25, 2009, 05:25:47 PM
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«Reply #15 on: April 26, 2009, 02:22:21 PM »

Thanks a lot Junaid,
Achha laga aapke lafz padhke...
Take care...
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«Reply #16 on: April 26, 2009, 02:26:32 PM »

Thanks a lot Junaid,
Achha laga aapke lafz padhke...
Take care...


Ji mazirath chahonga naam junaid nahi qadeer hai khuch wajowat se  tarji junaid ko di gayi hai ap qadeer kahen to bahetar hoga !! Allah shaitani fiqon se nijaad de aur khush bahali ata kare ..khush rahe app

Qadeer
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«Reply #17 on: April 26, 2009, 02:28:48 PM »
Oops sorry Qadeer Ji...
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«Reply #18 on: April 27, 2009, 08:17:29 AM »
superb creation huzena....marvellous touch of emotions.....u really make me cry.........

mere hothon ko chhute huye socha tumne
kii ab kabhi inke ehsaas ko na mehsoos kar paaoge
saahil se poochho kya sochta hai woh lehar k laut jaane k baad
uski tadap ko mehsoos karo toh tum bhi muskuraoge
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«Reply #19 on: April 27, 2009, 08:43:37 AM »
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wah yarra wah bahut khoob
yarra dil se daad kabool farmayen aap
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«Reply #20 on: April 27, 2009, 08:46:17 AM »
Good Job Angel Ji Bohat Achha Likha Hai Aapne
Bas Is Do Linesa Ko Chhodkar


Aapki Ye Line Hume Bilkul Achhey Nahi Lage
Plz Aisi Baatno Se Bacha Karo Ji..
ALLAH Pak Aapko Sachi Paki Samajh At`a Kare
Khush Raho..

Allahu Akbar, Allah Mujhe Bhi Maaf Kare Ke Maine Khaaskar Is Line Ko Sarhaaya, Bina Samjhe,.

Allah Hume Maaf Kare Aameen,.
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«Reply #21 on: April 27, 2009, 08:51:21 AM »
Fikar Not Azeem Bhai
ALLAH Rahim Hai Woh Jarur Maaf
Kar Dega Aapko Bas Tauba Karte Raho..
Aur Aainda Aisi Baaton Se Bacha Karo
ALLAH Pak Aapko Khush Rakhe Ameen...

Alah Khair Kare, Aamen,.
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«Reply #22 on: April 27, 2009, 04:43:55 PM »
Angel Hamesha Ki Tarah Bahut Bahut Khoob Likha hai aapne..
Dard Aur Maayusi Se Bhari Nazm Hai Yeh..Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #23 on: April 27, 2009, 05:18:51 PM »
superb creation huzena....marvellous touch of emotions.....u really make me cry.........

mere hothon ko chhute huye socha tumne
kii ab kabhi inke ehsaas ko na mehsoos kar paaoge
saahil se poochho kya sochta hai woh lehar k laut jaane k baad
uski tadap ko mehsoos karo toh tum bhi muskuraoge

Thank you salil, even i had cried while writing this. first i thoguht it wont make any sense. but i think it did...

aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai Salil...


lehron ka dukh, aye dost, saahilon se kam bhi nahi,
ye na soch ke samundar ki aankhein nam bhi nahi,
kya hota hia laut jaana khali haath kinaare se takrake,
lehreon ka ye dard sau janam ki tadap se kam nahi...
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«Reply #24 on: April 27, 2009, 05:21:32 PM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smileybahoot khoob Angel!!! bahoot khoob!!
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«Reply #25 on: April 27, 2009, 05:21:44 PM »
Good Job Angel Ji Bohat Achha Likha Hai Aapne
Bas Is Do Linesa Ko Chhodkar


Aapki Ye Line Hume Bilkul Achhey Nahi Lage
Plz Aisi Baatno Se Bacha Karo Ji..
ALLAH Pak Aapko Sachi Paki Samajh At`a Kare
Khush Raho..

Thanks Majid.
I think it was just the flow of words, Didnt mean to say anything against GOD or something like that.
Chaliye aage se dhyan rakhenge.
Thanks for appreciating...
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«Reply #26 on: April 27, 2009, 05:22:51 PM »
Angel Hamesha Ki Tarah Bahut Bahut Khoob Likha hai aapne..
Dard Aur Maayusi Se Bhari Nazm Hai Yeh..Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Shukriya khwaish ji..

Thanks for appreciatng my poems always...

Was waiting for your comments actually...
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«Reply #27 on: April 27, 2009, 05:23:15 PM »
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smileybahoot khoob Angel!!! bahoot khoob!!

Shukriya Bahut Bahut Di...!!!
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«Reply #28 on: April 27, 2009, 07:16:51 PM »
Shukriya khwaish ji..

Thanks for appreciatng my poems always...

Was waiting for your comments actually...

Angel,Aapki Likhi Poetries Ka Mujhe Sach Mein,
 Besabri se Intezaar Rehta Hai.
Bas, Kabhi-Kabhi Jawaab Dene Mein Deri Ho Jaati hai..
Phir Se Bahut Bahut Khoob Dost!!
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«Reply #29 on: April 28, 2009, 02:38:59 AM »
Angel,Aapki Likhi Poetries Ka Mujhe Sach Mein,
 Besabri se Intezaar Rehta Hai.
Bas, Kabhi-Kabhi Jawaab Dene Mein Deri Ho Jaati hai..
Phir Se Bahut Bahut Khoob Dost!!


Ye hamare liye hi bahut achhi baat hia ke aapko hamari likhi hui poems ka intezaar rehta hai. Your comments are always an inspiration for me. Bahut Shukriya Yun saath deneka aur hosla badhane ka...

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