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Har Taraf Hai Khamoshi Aur Mushqil Ghadi Hai
Kya Kahun Tere Bina Zindagi , Udaas Badi Hai.
Dil Ke Aangan Mein Hai Failen Dard Ke Saaye
Aur Har Tamanna Jaise Kahin , Bikhri Padi Hai.
Aankhon Ne Oudh Liya Hai Be-Rang Sa Parda
Jahan Bhi Dekhta Hoon Bas , Tanhaai Khadi Hai.
Kismat Ne Tujhe Hi Kyun Pyaasa Rakha Shihab
Jab Ki Har Jagah To Lagi , Saawan Ki Jhadi Hai.
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«Reply #1 on: May 18, 2009, 09:35:36 AM » |
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wah kya baat hai. bahoot bahoot khoob Majid. Bhaoot khoob!
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«Reply #2 on: May 18, 2009, 10:12:00 AM » |
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Har Taraf Hai Khamoshi Aur Mushqil Ghadi Hai
Kya Kahun Tere Bina Zindagi, Udaas Badi Hai.
Dil Ke Aangan Mein Hai Failen Dard Ke Saaye
Aur Har Tamanna Jaise Kahin Bikhri Padi Hai.
Aankhon Ne Oudh Liya Hai Be Rang Sa Parda
Jahan Bhi Dekhta Hoon Bas Tanhaai Khadi Hai.
Kismat Ne Tujhe Hi Kyun Pyaasa Rakha Shihab
Jab Ki Har Jagah To Lagi Saawan Ki Jhadi Hai.
Aakhir Tujhse Kaise Koi Shiqwa Karta e Khuda
Hum Insaano Se Teri Soch Behtar Aur Badi Hai.
bahaut achchey...SHIHAB ....AAKHRI LINE BAHAUT SAHI KAHAA |
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«Reply #3 on: May 18, 2009, 10:26:32 AM » |
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really nice and mindblowing shihab ji.
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«Reply #4 on: May 18, 2009, 01:16:20 PM » |
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Bohot Khoob......Bohot achcha likha hai Majid
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«Reply #5 on: May 18, 2009, 01:44:10 PM » |
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Subhan_allah Shihab i have always found your work to be very simple and very effective. Jab tak koi sher tumhe khud achcha nahi lagta tum use post nahi karte and thats the beauty of your work. I have always enjoyed reading you and always will....
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«Reply #6 on: May 18, 2009, 02:51:44 PM » |
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Wah Kya Baat hai.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooooob Majid Bhai.. Behad Umda Peshkash hai..  **~** Mann **~** |
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«Reply #7 on: May 19, 2009, 07:54:28 AM » |
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A masterpiece, heights of imagination.
But last two verses are conflicting, you need to modify as humans cannot be compared to God. God is superior, so need to write such things even in poetic imaginations.
Hope you understand.
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«Reply #8 on: May 19, 2009, 08:22:36 AM » |
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Thank you very much.
May Allah bless you and bestow you whatever you desired and wished for.
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«Reply #9 on: May 19, 2009, 08:26:12 AM » |
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Har Taraf Hai Khamoshi Aur Mushqil Ghadi Hai
Kya Kahun Tere Bina Zindagi, Udaas Badi Hai.
Dil Ke Aangan Mein Hai Failen Dard Ke Saaye
Aur Har Tamanna Jaise Kahin Bikhri Padi Hai.
Aankhon Ne Oudh Liya Hai Be Rang Sa Parda
Jahan Bhi Dekhta Hoon Bas Tanhaai Khadi Hai.
Kismat Ne Tujhe Hi Kyun Pyaasa Rakha Shihab
Jab Ki Har Jagah To Lagi Saawan Ki Jhadi Hai.
Har Taraf Hai Khamoshi Aur Mushqil Ghadi Hai
Kya Kahun Tere Bina Zindagi, Udaas Badi Ha.
bahut achche bhai jaan................aapne sach mein bahut hi badiya likha hai...........
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punam
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«Reply #10 on: May 19, 2009, 09:35:14 AM » |
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bahut khoob Majid ji...hamesha ki tarah..aap ka jawab nahi...
kafilE chal pade phir yaadoN ke safar par
koi ajnabi milla tha issi reh-gujar par
rakha tha jinhe ham nE khwaboN main chupa kar
voh dekho jaa rahe hain kissi door dagar par
poocha na sunna jisnE kabhi mera hal-e-dil
aansoo baha rahE haiN vo meri kabar par ...NM
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #11 on: May 19, 2009, 09:56:23 AM » |
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bahut khoob Majid ji...hamesha ki tarah..aap ka jawab nahi...
kafilE chal pade phir yaadoN ke safar par
koi ajnabi milla tha issi reh-gujar par
rakha tha jinhe ham nE khwaboN main chupa kar
voh dekho jaa rahe hain kissi door dagar par
poocha na sunna jisnE kabhi mera hal-e-dil
aansoo baha rahE haiN vo meri kabar par ...NM
wah....kyaa baat hai bahut khoob Netra... |
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«Reply #12 on: May 19, 2009, 09:58:36 AM » |
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Har Taraf Hai Khamoshi Aur Mushqil Ghadi Hai
Kya Kahun Tere Bina Zindagi, Udaas Badi Hai.
Dil Ke Aangan Mein Hai Failen Dard Ke Saaye
Aur Har Tamanna Jaise Kahin Bikhri Padi Hai.
Aankhon Ne Oudh Liya Hai Be Rang Sa Parda
Jahan Bhi Dekhta Hoon Bas Tanhaai Khadi Hai.
Kismat Ne Tujhe Hi Kyun Pyaasa Rakha Shihab
Jab Ki Har Jagah To Lagi Saawan Ki Jhadi Hai.
Har Taraf Hai Khamoshi Aur Mushqil Ghadi Hai
Kya Kahun Tere Bina Zindagi, Udaas Badi Ha.
behad umdaa khayalaat wah kyaa bat hai... Netra... |
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«Reply #14 on: May 22, 2009, 10:21:07 AM » |
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bahut khoob shihab ji!
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