tere intezar mein:Shayri-E-Dard

Affluent

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roein hain bahut ajj hum tere naam se
kayun hoti hai tadap tere ek khayal se

jab tu khush hai , apni hi duniya mein
phir kayun jeeye hum tere intezar mein

ek tere vaade par, chale aaye iss paar
ab khade hain tanha, tanhai ke mukaam pe

roein hain bahut ajj hum tere naam se
kayun hoti hai tadap tere ek khayal se


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Shikha12

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Re: ............

«Reply #1 on: March 03, 2008, 02:48:16 PM »

Very Touching... Simply superb..
But.. why is this without any title Huh?


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Roja

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Re: ............

«Reply #2 on: March 03, 2008, 03:13:10 PM »

Good one


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Pooja

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Re: ............

«Reply #3 on: March 03, 2008, 03:52:31 PM »

bahoot khoob Affluent ji.. bahoot gahra likha hai apne!! Good creation!!

Affluent ji, maine apki is rachna ko yah naam diya hai>> tere intezar mein
agar apko pasand na ayye app delete kar sakte hai.. magar bina title ke apki kavita sahi nahi lagi!!!


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Pooja

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Re: tere intezar mein

«Reply #4 on: March 03, 2008, 06:02:27 PM »

Tere khayal ki tadap sirf yah dil janta hai
Bahoot door hai magar tujhko bahoot kareeb manta hai

Meri khushi se na tadpa tu apne dil ko
Kitna rota hai yah dil, yah bhi tu hi janta hai

Vaadein per kiya jo aitbaar, to khud per aitbaar rakh
Teri issi ada per yah dil tujhko bhari dunia main apna manta hai

Royegi teri ankhia to barsaat yaha bhi hogi
Main janati hu, yah baat tera dil bhi janta hai


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Affluent

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Re: tere intezar mein

«Reply #5 on: March 04, 2008, 04:56:34 AM »

Pooja ji...

aapko reply mein jab bhi kuch likha toh jagjit singh ki ghazal yaad aati rahi

bebasi Jurm hai hauslaa jurm hai
zindagi teri ek-ek adaa Jurm hai

ae sanam tere baare meiN kuch soNchkar
apne baare meiN kuch sochna Jurm hai

yaad rakhna tuJhe mera ek Jurm thaa
bhool jaana tuJhe doosra Jurm hai

kya sitam hai ke tere haseeN sehar meiN
har taraf gaur se dekhnaa Jurm hai

bebasi Jurm hai hauslaa jurm hai
zindagi teri ek-ek adaa Jurm hai


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Pooja

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Re: tere intezar mein

«Reply #6 on: March 04, 2008, 03:55:10 PM »

BAHOOT KHOOB!! thanks for sharing such a nice gazal with us!!!


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Talat

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Re: tere intezar mein

«Reply #7 on: March 04, 2008, 04:00:51 PM »

Quote from: Affluent on March 03, 2008, 06:09:12 AM

Wah ! Bohot khoob Affluent ! saw you after a while !

Good reply Pooja !


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Affluent

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Re: tere intezar mein

«Reply #8 on: March 06, 2008, 05:26:10 AM »

Talat, shayari likhne ka abb mann nahi karta ... na hi waqt milta hai ki apne dil-e-haal ko bayan kar sakein.

ek jagjit singh singh ki gayi hui line yaad aai hai

"honth jalte hain muskarane se
phir bhi shikwa nahi zaamane se"

Quote from: Pooja on March 03, 2008, 06:02:27 PM

dekh kar teri iss mehfil ki ronak
anjabi hone ka ehsaas hota hai

apni hi duniya mein hai tu khoyi hui
be-fikar hai mujhse yeh ehsass hota hai

samjhata hu khud ko,ki chup hi rahu,lekin
chupi mein phir bebasi ka ehsass hota hai

rehta hu har pal main tere hi intezar mein
kya tujhko kabhi bhi yeh ehsass hota hai ?


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