Tere jane ke baad

by mamta bajpai on March 08, 2010, 12:05:45 AM
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mamta bajpai
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«Reply #15 on: March 31, 2011, 05:04:06 AM »
Manju ye tumhaari dariyaadili hai jo tum ne hume is qaabil samjhaa...tumhaari baat ko mai sar aankhoN par leti hooN magar jab khud ko aaine me dekhte haiN to apni ouqaat kaa andaza ho jaataa hai......dil kee gahraiyoN se phootaa huaa jharnaa hai .....isliye tumhe pasand aayaa hogaa.......shukriyaa ek baar phir ......
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nirala
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«Reply #16 on: March 31, 2011, 05:29:35 AM »
thanx mamta ji. wese taang khichai ka mera bot sauk h.
lekin koi gire nahi iska dhyan jarur rakhta hu ji.
aapne sahi kaha mene aapke post ko zinda kar dia…
par meri koi galti nai isme
wo mera haath hi paaras jesa he to me kya karu aap hi btaiye ji
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mamta bajpai
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«Reply #17 on: March 31, 2011, 06:45:58 AM »
ha ha ha ha aap waaqi bahut achchha mazaaq kar lete hai .....kaash ki meraa hai patthar aap ke paaras jaise haath ko chhoone kee qismat  rakhe....
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nirala
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«Reply #18 on: March 31, 2011, 06:53:16 AM »
aisa kya……chaliye
fatat apne saare patthar barsaana suru kar dijiye iss nir pa…
sab ko gold na kar du to kahiye
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«Reply #19 on: March 31, 2011, 07:02:25 AM »
ahaa apki ye iotni umda pesh klash meri nazro se kaise bach gayi mamta di..

bahut khoob likha he aapne khaskaar 2nd last or last antra ...

dher saari daad~
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«Reply #20 on: March 31, 2011, 07:32:45 AM »
mamtaji.... bahut sahi kaha aapne ham sab kya hain ye ham se jyada kon janta hai... par yakin maniye bahut kamal likha hai aapne.... aur khud ko mat aakiye... sudhar to zindgi bhar hote rahenge.... ham patthar se paras chahe na ho paye... par koi na koi shakl to le hi lenge......

likhti rahie..... sath rahie....
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«Reply #21 on: March 31, 2011, 08:14:17 AM »
saaye ne jab dhoop ka jama pahan liya
hujoom darkhton ka fir saamne to kya

ahasas ki sakht dhoop me rooh tak jhulas gayee
aye abre baran jhoom ke ab barsa to kya

kar gaya mujhko juda mujhse hi woh napaq rooh
gar maseeha baad me fir aaya to kya

rounaqen sab jati rahi ek tere jane ke baad
aaina andhere me mujhko toone dikhlaya to kya


bahut khoob mamta ji
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