Tere Khayal Likhwa Raha Hai...

by majid on March 23, 2007, 01:30:03 PM
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Dheer Dheere Ye Ujjala Mujhse Door Ja Raha Hain
Bus Abto Yahi Andhera Mujhe Pass Bula Raha Hain.

Ek Ke Baad Ek Har Apna Saath Chhuda Raha Hai.
Bus Ek Saaya Hi Hai Jo Ab Mera Saath Nibha Raha Hai

Barso Hue Tujhse Bichhde Hue Humko..e..Sanam.
Par Har Hawaa Ka Jhoka Mujhe Aaj Bhi Teri Yaad Dila Raha Hai.

Majid Kahan Is Kaabil Hai Jo Likh Sake Koi Sher Ya Ghazal..
Bus Ye To Tera Khayal Hai Jo Humse Likhwa Raha Hain.....
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Rajbir
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«Reply #1 on: March 23, 2007, 01:34:42 PM »
Majid

Bahut achche =D>

Yeh sher bahut achcha laga :

Barso Hue Tujhse Bichhde Hue Humko..e..Sanam.
Par Har Hawaa Ka Jhoka Mujhe Aaj Bhi Teri Yaad Dila Raha Hai.
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Talat
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«Reply #2 on: March 23, 2007, 02:49:15 PM »
Bohot khoob Majid.... ! Usual Smile
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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: March 23, 2007, 02:51:30 PM »
wah bahoot khoob Majid!!
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Talat
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«Reply #4 on: March 24, 2007, 10:13:47 PM »
Aaj phir teri yaadon ne dil ko tadpaaya
Aaj phir se hum ko bhigoya ashkon ne

Aaj phir yaad aaya bhoola hua  afsaana
Aaj phir se dard diya sookhe zakhmon ne
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Aryaan
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«Reply #5 on: March 26, 2007, 11:21:03 AM »
Very Nice Majid & Talat...
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ANKUR_CRAZY
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«Reply #6 on: March 26, 2007, 04:04:47 PM »
bahut acche majid bhai....

specially akhri lines ne to kaher dha diya........


Barso Hue Tujhse Bichhde Hue Humko..e..Sanam.
Par Har Hawaa Ka Jhoka Mujhe Aaj Bhi Teri Yaad Dila Raha Hai.

Majid Kahan Is Kaabil Hai Jo Likh Sake Koi Sher Ya Ghazal..
Bus Ye To Tera Khayal Hai Jo Humse Likhwa Raha Hain.....
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«Reply #7 on: March 26, 2007, 04:27:40 PM »
bohat khoob majid n talat.

"Jise bhulane ki har pal meri koshish thi,
      aaj fir dost tumne uski yaad dilaa di,
      yun to meri zindagi me kuch bhi nahi,
      har ek saans pe bhi uska hi naam hai."
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ANKUR_CRAZY
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«Reply #8 on: March 26, 2007, 04:49:38 PM »
very good nidhi

saase to ab sirf uske naam hai
dil ke bhi hue tukre tamam hai
na koi hai mere saath ab
ki zindagi me sirf mai hu aur haath me jaam hai


ger offtopic lage to sorryyyyyyyyy
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Aryaan
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«Reply #9 on: March 27, 2007, 12:23:45 PM »
Good Ones Ankur & Nidhi...
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Talat
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«Reply #10 on: March 27, 2007, 12:24:18 PM »
Thank You Aryaan, Majid and Nidhi...and very nice Nidhi and Ankur.

Tere saath hi ye qalam chooth gaya
Shayari ka fan hum se rooth gaya
Likh rahe hain hum phir bhi aaj
Ye tera khayaal hai jo likhwa raha hai !!!
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Aryaan
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«Reply #11 on: March 27, 2007, 12:34:30 PM »
Good One Talat...
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pinky
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«Reply #12 on: March 27, 2007, 09:06:23 PM »
ye lo ek aur achhi creation majid ji..
bahut khoob..!!

Talat ji aapne bhi khoob likha hai..!!
great Usual Smile
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pinky
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«Reply #13 on: March 27, 2007, 09:10:56 PM »
Na tere khayal se na tujhse shikwa hai mujhe
Meri zindagi se har fasaana ja raha hai..
Ab jo likhoon kabhi zakhm apne lafzon mein
Ye mere dil hai jo aansu baha raha hai..
Dard se bhari hai kalam phir aaj maine,
Aur dard hi mujhse dard likhwa raha hai..
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paani
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«Reply #14 on: March 28, 2007, 04:18:06 AM »
Nice all u Talat,Majid. aryan.. n pinky ji.. n all who wrote here
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