:-:-:-: Teri Bewafayi :-:-:-:

by angel4u on September 09, 2007, 04:56:35 PM
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Teri Bewafayi Ki Kya Misaal Doon Paas Mere Koi Lafz Nahi Hai,
Rulake Meri Aatma Ko, Muskurane Mein Tujhe Koi Aitraaz Nahi Hai,

Har Mod Pe Thokar Kha Ke Bhi Tere Saath Chalte Gaye Ye Qadam,
Pata Bhi Tha Inko Is Raah Ki Koi Manzil, Koi Shaamyana Nahi Hai,

Dhadkano Ka Shor Gunjta Hai To Khalal Padti Hai Meri Tanhaiyon Mein,
Kaise Bardasht Karun, In Mein Teri Dhadkano Ka Nagma Ab Shaamil Nahi Hai,

Ye Phoolon Ki Rutt, Ye Bahaar, Ye Patte, Lagte Hai Na-Maayne Mujhe,
In Waadiyon Mein Jo Mehek Sake Teri Wafa Ki Ab Mehek Nahi Hai,

Chheen Li Tune Meri Aakhri Muskurahat Bhi Ruswayi Meri Karke,
Ankhon Ke Ghar Ko AshQon Se Kiya Khali, Inhone Tujhe Maaf Kiya Nahi Hai,

Raat Ki Khaamoshiyon Ko Bana Di Hai Tune Kyon Ab Aadat Meri,
Chubho Raha Hai Meri Saanson Ko Chandni, Chaand Ab Pehle Sa Nahi Hai,

Na Aana Meri Maiyyat Pe, Mera Qafan Kaamp Uthega Teri Maujudgi Se,
Mere Hisse Ki Khushiyan Mile Tujhe, Lab Pe Ab Koi Baddua Bhi Nahi Hai,

Teri Bewafa Rooh Ka Saaya Jo Padega Meri Qabr Bhi Sisak Uthegi,
Dard Ye Aakhri Sehne Ka Ab Is Bejaan Jism Mein Hausla Bhi Nahi Hai...
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angel4u
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«Reply #1 on: September 11, 2007, 05:01:50 PM »
wow no comments.
Angel stop writing poems ....
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SHONA
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«Reply #2 on: September 11, 2007, 05:58:57 PM »
Quote from: "angel4u"
wow no comments.
Angel stop writing poems ....


Beautifully written angel..plz dont stop  writing coz u r one of my favorite poets around...and i think people like u,pooja,khwaish,talat and many others deserve appreciation from all..i hope everyone keep's the spirit of yoindia alive by praising others work...plz do keep writing
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«Reply #3 on: September 11, 2007, 07:42:47 PM »
actually i had written this poem before two days, it has never happened that i dont get any comments, ya i receive fewer comments, but i do.. this time i dont know what has happened,
well pooja di, khwaish, talat, aryaan are the maestros, i m no one in front of them, but still when poems dont get a single comment then...............

well thanks a lot dear for appreciating Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: September 12, 2007, 03:27:01 AM »
Bohat khoob Angel...

Arey main ne tau hamesha aapke thread mein reply kiya hai Angel bi..:? Haan kuch din huwe idhar ka chakkar nahi laga, isliey aapko koyi reply nahi mila... ek baat se main aapki ittefaaQ zaroor karta hoon keh aaj kal YoIndia pe log reply karne mein bohat kanjoosi karne lage hain, kisi ko parhne ke baad ussey sarahne se uski hausla afzaai hoti hai.... lekin nahi Angel bi, aaj kal logon ke paas waqt ki bohat kami hai...unn mein se main bhi ek hoon.. :D

Isliye aap himmat bandhaye rakhiye aur jaisa keh Shona ne kaha aap acha likhne waalon mein se ek hain meri, Shona ki aur bhi bohat se pardhne waalon ki favorite poet hain..
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«Reply #5 on: September 12, 2007, 04:02:31 AM »
Zanjeer Mere Paun Mein Majbooriyon Ki Hai
Bas Tum Hi Jaan Lo Keh Main Bewafaa Nahi


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«Reply #6 on: September 12, 2007, 04:15:42 AM »
BAHUT KHOOB ANGEL..TOO GOOD....I LOVED THIS LINE OF YOURS..IT IS TRUE THAT WHEN YOU KNOW THE PATH YOU ARE WALKING ON HAS NO END BUT  YOU STILL KEEP WALKING FOR THE SAKE OF LOVE..TOO GOOD
 =D>  =D>  =D>  =D>  =D>
"Har Mod Pe Thokar Kha Ke Bhi Tere Saath Chalte Gaye Ye Qadam,
Pata Bhi Tha Inko Is Raah Ki Koi Manzil, Koi Shaamyana Nahi Hai"
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«Reply #7 on: September 12, 2007, 01:54:51 PM »
Accha likha hai angel ji. lekin agar kuch change ho jaye to bahut acha lagega. jaise

 Teri bewafai ki misal kya doon paas mere koi lafaz nahin hai,
 Rula ke meri aatma ko muskurane mein tuje koi harz nahin hai.

 Har mod pe thokar kha ke bhi tere saath chale kadam mere,
 Pata bhi tha inko is raah ki koi manzil koi haasil nahin hai.
 
  Aap ismein aur change kar sakte hain

  Vaise ye line sbahut khoobsurat thi,
 
Ye phoolon ki rutt, ye bahar, ye patte lagte hain na mayne mujhe,
In waadion mein jo mehak sake teri wafa ki ab mehak nahin hai
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«Reply #8 on: September 12, 2007, 04:51:39 PM »
kya baat hai angel...bahut acha likha hai aapne
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angel4u
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«Reply #9 on: September 12, 2007, 05:01:17 PM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"
Bohat khoob Angel...

Arey main ne tau hamesha aapke thread mein reply kiya hai Angel bi..:? Haan kuch din huwe idhar ka chakkar nahi laga, isliey aapko koyi reply nahi mila... ek baat se main aapki ittefaaQ zaroor karta hoon keh aaj kal YoIndia pe log reply karne mein bohat kanjoosi karne lage hain, kisi ko parhne ke baad ussey sarahne se uski hausla afzaai hoti hai.... lekin nahi Angel bi, aaj kal logon ke paas waqt ki bohat kami hai...unn mein se main bhi ek hoon.. :D

Isliye aap himmat bandhaye rakhiye aur jaisa keh Shona ne kaha aap acha likhne waalon mein se ek hain meri, Shona ki aur bhi bohat se pardhne waalon ki favorite poet hain..


How sweet of you aryaan. Usual Smile haan i know idhar log kaafi masroof hogaye hai, bas 2 din tak meri poem aisi hi bina reply ke rahi to thoda bura laga. . . . . .
arey main kahan favourite, aap hi pure yoindia ke favourite poet ho,  :razz:

Thanks a lot, aur plz hamare liye bhi waqt nikal liya kijye thoda bahut Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: September 12, 2007, 05:04:13 PM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"
Zanjeer Mere Paun Mein Majbooriyon Ki Hai
Bas Tum Hi Jaan Lo Keh Main Bewafaa Nahi


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Too good...  =D> =d>
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angel4u
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«Reply #11 on: September 12, 2007, 05:10:22 PM »
Quote from: "khwaish"
BAHUT KHOOB ANGEL..TOO GOOD....I LOVED THIS LINE OF YOURS..IT IS TRUE THAT WHEN YOU KNOW THE PATH YOU ARE WALKING ON HAS NO END BUT  YOU STILL KEEP WALKING FOR THE SAKE OF LOVE..TOO GOOD
 =D>  =D>  =D>  =D>  =D>
"Har Mod Pe Thokar Kha Ke Bhi Tere Saath Chalte Gaye Ye Qadam,
Pata Bhi Tha Inko Is Raah Ki Koi Manzil, Koi Shaamyana Nahi Hai"


Thanks a lot khwaish.
pasand karne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya...  Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: September 12, 2007, 05:12:41 PM »
Quote from: "rajrishi"
Accha likha hai angel ji. lekin agar kuch change ho jaye to bahut acha lagega. jaise

 Teri bewafai ki misal kya doon paas mere koi lafaz nahin hai,
 Rula ke meri aatma ko muskurane mein tuje koi harz nahin hai.

 Har mod pe thokar kha ke bhi tere saath chale kadam mere,
 Pata bhi tha inko is raah ki koi manzil koi haasil nahin hai.
 
  Aap ismein aur change kar sakte hain

  Vaise ye line sbahut khoobsurat thi,
 
Ye phoolon ki rutt, ye bahar, ye patte lagte hain na mayne mujhe,
In waadion mein jo mehak sake teri wafa ki ab mehak nahin hai


Thanks Rajshri.
Hmm ye suggestions aage se dhyan me rakhungi, bahut bahut shukriya Usual Smile
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angel4u
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«Reply #13 on: September 12, 2007, 05:14:23 PM »
Quote from: "ISHPREET"
kya baat hai angel...bahut acha likha hai aapne


THanks ISHPREET Usual Smile
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