^*Teri Galiyon Mein ^*

by honeyrose on March 20, 2008, 10:53:14 AM
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honeyrose
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Tere galiyon mein chor aaye humara dil
Woh isqh ke wadhe aur kuch haseen khwabh ki mehfil

Saason mein teri hi muskurahat aur wohi tumara nazaara

Yeh isqh mein hum marz ban baithe aur tum meri khwabon ka sitara

Khamosh hoti hai dil ki zuban kaise kahe hum chor aaye humara dil

Us dard ko kaise samjha sake hum teri galiyon mein chor aaye humara dil

Dil se ye Daag gum ka mitaya na gaya hum aapne yaadon ko basaya na sake

Teri galiyon mein chor aaye humara dil aur rahe ek nishani bankar...

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zakhmola
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«Reply #1 on: March 20, 2008, 12:29:49 PM »
Teri Galiyan sahi dosti nibhati hai
Pyar mein huye iss pagal ko dekh
aaj bhi patthar oothati hai...
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honeyrose
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«Reply #2 on: March 20, 2008, 12:33:25 PM »
Very nice zakhmola..Usual Smile
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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: March 20, 2008, 02:41:24 PM »
bahoot khoob zakhmola and honey
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aarzoomehek
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«Reply #4 on: March 20, 2008, 02:46:13 PM »
bohot khoob likha hai honeyrose
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Aryaan
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«Reply #5 on: March 20, 2008, 10:19:09 PM »
Good One HoneyRose...
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honeyrose
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«Reply #6 on: March 21, 2008, 11:47:48 AM »
Shukriya aarzomehek aur Aryaan and Pooja dear..

Teri galiyon se jab bhi guzar the hai
Woh yaadon ka silsila humko dard dilate hai
Na jaane hai woh galiyon mein jahan aapki haseen yadein ho
Aapki galiyon se laut aaye hai
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honeyrose
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«Reply #7 on: March 22, 2008, 01:35:06 PM »
Dil Ke Galiyon Se Jab Bhi Nazar Aayo
Mein Uss Beegi Nazaron Se Jab Bhi Nazar Aayo
Teri Palkon Mein Hamara Dil Bichakar Chale Aayo
Dil Ki Tadap Kehe The Hai Ki Mein Mahfooz Hoon Tum Chale Aayo
Teri Galiyon Se Har Ek Kadam Se Mere Dilbar Chale Aayo
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #8 on: March 22, 2008, 02:27:02 PM »
bahoot dilkash likha aapne honeyrose our zakhmola ji......merii jaanib se daad kabool farmayein bahut umdaa likha hai aapne dosti ke ahsaasoN ko....... Khush raheiN

Arthi jab nikle merii toh us yaar ki chaader Charha dena
'Ghar'Uska  rastey aa jaye , thhoda  sa parda uthha dena
Kabhi bhool na jana botal ko usko bhi rakhna sang mere
Our dheere dheere khwaboN maiN uske tum mujhko sula dena


Harash
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honeyrose
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«Reply #9 on: March 22, 2008, 02:51:03 PM »
Harash ji bohat hi khoob likha hai aankhon mein aansoo nikale mere crybaby2


Jaane doh mujhe pehle iss duniya se
Yun na kaho aise bhatein aapne dil se

Jaane wale jaate hai humhe tanha chor dil se
Ek akele rehe gaye hoon mein unki yaadon koh samet ke

Duwa karti hoon mere janaazah nikale tumari nazaron se
Aab kya rakha hai akele teri galiyon mein nibaahne se
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #10 on: March 22, 2008, 06:28:54 PM »

Honeyrose wrote:-

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Harash ji bohat hi khoob likha hai aankhon mein aansoo nikale mere


Jaane doh mujhe pehle iss duniya se
Yun na kaho aise bhatein aapne dil se

Jaane wale jaate hai humhe tanha chor dil se
Ek akele rehe gaye hoon mein unki yaadon koh samet ke

Duwa karti hoon mere janaazah nikale tumari nazaron se
Aab kya rakha hai akele teri galiyon mein nibaahne se


Bahoot bahoot Shukrriyaa^h honey ji.....bahoot hi khoobsoorat likha hai aapne....dard ko sanjoker ubhara hai aapne.....daad kabool kareiN....

KyuiN saaye se bhi ashqoN ko chhupate ho tum,
Rote ho toh kyuiN charagoN ko bhujate ho tum.


Harash
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honeyrose
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«Reply #11 on: March 23, 2008, 11:40:13 AM »
Bohat acha jawab likha hai Harash ji..Usual Smile


Dil ke armano mein chup gaye hai woh yaadein
Kaise kaho mein ke mere armano ko jalakar gaye hai woh yaadein
Kya hauq hai humara tum par ye joh jalakar gaye hai woh yaadein
Meri har saason se nikal thi hai tumari dadhkan jalakar gaye hai woh yaadein
 
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«Reply #12 on: March 23, 2008, 06:39:56 PM »
Bohat acha jawab likha hai Harash ji..Usual Smile


Dil ke armano mein chup gaye hai woh yaadein
Kaise kaho mein ke mere armano ko jalakar gaye hai woh yaadein
Kya hauq hai humara tum par ye joh jalakar gaye hai woh yaadein
Meri har saason se nikal thi hai tumari dadhkan jalakar gaye hai woh yaadein
 


nice one honey...
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honeyrose
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«Reply #13 on: March 23, 2008, 06:46:02 PM »
Shukriya khwaish ji..Usual Smile
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Aryaan
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«Reply #14 on: March 24, 2008, 12:24:08 AM »
Bohat khoob HoneyRose & Harash...
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