Teri juban se laga zakhm........mann

by mann.mann on September 08, 2014, 09:42:17 AM
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Teri  juban se  laga  zakhm bada  gahara  tha.
Meri raho main andhero ka Ghana pahara tha.

Is   tarah  hamne   nibhayi  thi  rasm-e-ulfat,
Har ek shai main nazar aaya  tera chehara tha.

Ham  hi  lutate  rahe  sari  baharen  tere lie,
Na  jane  mujhko  mila kis lie ye sahara  tha.

Hame khabar thi yahan patthar ke log baste hain,
Kya  Karen  dil  ye hamara  to yahin  thahara  tha.

Mann
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«Reply #1 on: September 08, 2014, 10:37:21 AM »
Quote from: mann.mann on September 08, 2014, 09:42:17 AM
Teri  juban se  laga  zakhm bada  gahara  tha.
Meri raho main andhero ka Ghana pahara tha.

Is   tarah  hamne   nibhayi  thi  rasm-e-ulfat,
Har ek shai main nazar aaya  tera chehara tha.

Ham  hi  lutate  rahe  sari  baharen  tere lie,
Na  jane  mujhko  mila kis lie ye sahara  tha.

Hame khabar thi yahan patthar ke log baste hain,
Kya  Karen  dil  ye hamara  to yahin  thahara  tha.

Mann


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Meri aankhon me teri tasweer ka rang gehra tha..
Jo mujhe har pal khush rakhta wo tera chehra tha..

kisi aur se kaise kar pata mohabbat 'touhid'..
tere andaaz-e-ishq ka jo dil pe mere pehra tha..
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«Reply #2 on: September 08, 2014, 10:48:23 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya touhidji.....

aapne bahut sundar likha hai..... hamari soch to udhar gayi hi nahin ki aise bhi likha sakte hain.... khubsurat jawaab hai aapka.....

shukriya....
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«Reply #3 on: September 08, 2014, 11:08:07 AM »
Quote from: mann.mann on September 08, 2014, 10:48:23 AM
bahut bahut shukriya touhidji.....

aapne bahut sundar likha hai..... hamari soch to udhar gayi hi nahin ki aise bhi likha sakte hain.... khubsurat jawaab hai aapka.....

shukriya....

aapse kam achha hai ji.. lekin meri kosis aapko pasand aayi iske liye bahut bahut shukriya mann ji.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: September 08, 2014, 11:12:04 AM »
shukriya touhidji..... par ek naye tara se sochne ki raah aapne dikhayi hai....
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«Reply #5 on: September 08, 2014, 12:09:57 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: September 08, 2014, 03:06:30 PM »
Quote from: mann.mann on September 08, 2014, 09:42:17 AM
Teri  zuban se  laga  zakhm bada  gahara  tha.
Meri raho main andhero ka Ghana pahara tha.

Is   tarah  hamne   nibhayi  thi  rasm-e-ulfat,
Har ek shai main nazar aaya  tera chehara tha.

Ham  hi  lutate  rahe  sari  baharen  tere liye,
Na  jane  mujhko  mila kis liye ye sahara  tha.

Hame khabar thi yahan patthar ke log baste hain,
Kya  Karen  dil  ye hamara  to yahin  thahara  tha.

Mann


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«Reply #7 on: September 08, 2014, 03:32:13 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: September 08, 2014, 07:36:28 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: September 09, 2014, 04:46:26 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya rajiji.....
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«Reply #10 on: September 10, 2014, 06:07:41 AM »
Teri juban se laga zakhm bada gahara tha.
Meri raho main andhero ka Ghana pahara tha.

Is tarah hamne nibhayi thi rasm-e-ulfat,
Har ek shai main nazar aaya tera chehara tha.

Bahut Khub Mann Jee Applause


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«Reply #11 on: September 10, 2014, 07:03:51 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya marhoomji.....
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«Reply #12 on: September 10, 2014, 07:04:50 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya saini sahab.....
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«Reply #13 on: September 11, 2014, 10:36:33 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya hridayji....
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«Reply #14 on: September 12, 2014, 07:52:52 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya shihabji.....

ummid hai ki aapka sath yun hi bana rahega....
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