teri khaatir (nam)

by poonamA on July 08, 2013, 11:15:55 AM
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Hanste hai hum mehfil me rote hai tanhayee mein
Laila bana  diya hai khud ko humne teri khatir
Na dil me chain hai aur na raat ko sukun haasil
Khud ko kya se kya bana diya humne teri khatir
Kiya duniya se kinara aur di dosto ko rukhsat
Khud ko *kaafir bana diya humne bas teri khatir


*kaafir (adharmi)
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«Reply #1 on: July 08, 2013, 11:21:16 AM »

Nice,But Ise Image ke alaawa Text bhi karein to jayda acha rahega.
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aqsh
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«Reply #2 on: July 08, 2013, 12:42:26 PM »
waah waah bahut khoob poonama ji... dheron daad.
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«Reply #3 on: July 08, 2013, 12:45:12 PM »
fine.
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«Reply #4 on: July 08, 2013, 02:56:49 PM »
 Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
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«Reply #5 on: July 08, 2013, 03:28:20 PM »
Poonam jee waah..bahut achha likha hai..happy9
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«Reply #6 on: July 08, 2013, 04:24:48 PM »

Poonam jee Aadaab...!


Achche ahsaas O khayaal piroye haiN aapne... bahut khoob jee bahut khoob...

Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye..

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...
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«Reply #7 on: July 09, 2013, 01:10:57 PM »
thx ravindrajee
Nice,But Ise Image ke alaawa Text bhi karein to jayda acha rahega.
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«Reply #8 on: July 09, 2013, 01:11:35 PM »
shukriya aqsh
waah waah bahut khoob poonama ji... dheron daad.
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«Reply #9 on: July 09, 2013, 01:12:09 PM »
thx
fine.
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poonamA
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«Reply #10 on: July 09, 2013, 01:12:40 PM »
thanku
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«Reply #11 on: July 09, 2013, 01:13:11 PM »
shukriya nashwani
Poonam jee waah..bahut achha likha hai..happy9
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poonamA
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«Reply #12 on: July 09, 2013, 01:14:17 PM »
Aadaab Parwaazjee
aapko shukriya bahot bahot

Poonam jee Aadaab...!


Achche ahsaas O khayaal piroye haiN aapne... bahut khoob jee bahut khoob...

Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye..

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...

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«Reply #13 on: July 10, 2013, 07:39:10 PM »
bahut khoob
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