Teri khwaish ka bana rehna

by Prateek Mardia on November 29, 2008, 07:56:49 PM
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #15 on: November 30, 2008, 05:34:43 PM »
BAHGTEY MUSAFIR SEY KYA KEHNA,
RUKEY TOH KUCH SAMAJ AAYE,
ANDHERO MEH BHI ROSHNI HOTI HAI,
ABB ISS DIWANEY KOH KAUN SAMJAYE


JASBIR SINGH
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Pooja
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«Reply #16 on: December 01, 2008, 03:25:07 AM »
samjhane per bhi nahi samjhti
khwaishein to khwaishein hai
toot-toot kar, bikhar-bikhar kar
ho jaati hai phir se zinda,
khwaishein to khwaishein hai
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #17 on: December 01, 2008, 07:41:48 AM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on November 30, 2008, 08:59:12 AM
Aapki ek bohat pyaari si line chura raha hu prateek majboor hu is line ko chid nahi sakta is tarah

Gungh_ruo me nam mera, khuda ke bando ne likh dala
Maikhano me mile waiz, aur muje masjido se nikala
Main bada gunahgaar hu par ek soch me atka hu
Kya farak hain dono me, kisi ne dil se kisi ne jannat se nikala

                              -SG & PRATEEK-


DIL SEY NIKALA MAIN SEHAM GAYA
JANNAT SEY NIKALA MAIN SEHAM GAYA
YEH TOH AJEEB HI BERUKHI HAI UNKI
ABB TOH NIGAHO SEY BHI NIKALA, MAIN MARR GAYA


JASBIR SINGH
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Prateek Mardia
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«Reply #18 on: December 03, 2008, 03:10:19 PM »
good going pooja ji and jasbir ji.
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #19 on: December 03, 2008, 06:51:11 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on December 01, 2008, 03:25:07 AM
samjhane per bhi nahi samjhti
khwaishein to khwaishein hai
toot-toot kar, bikhar-bikhar kar
ho jaati hai phir se zinda,
khwaishein to khwaishein hai


bahut khoob and aap neh bilkul sach kaha hai JI


MITA KEY KHWAISH, JINDA LAASH BAN JAOGEY
FIR RAHEYGA KYA JINDAGI MEH, JINDA LAASH BAN JAOGEY

KWAISH SEY HI EK UMEED BANTI HAI
KUCH KAR GUJARNEY KI TAKREEB BANTI HAI

EK KEY PEECH EK KHWAISH JANAM LETI REHTI HAI
EK POORI HUYI NAHI KI DUSRI PEECHEY KHADI REHTI HAI

KWAISH KEY POORA HOTEY HI, EK KHUSHI KI LEHAR DOAD AATI HAI
TUSRI KHWAISH KEY LIYE, HOSLEY-AFZAYI KI LEHAR DOAD AATI HAI

KWAISH NA HO TOH JINDAGI KA RANG MIT JATA HAI
JYADA KYA KAHEY YARO, JINDA LAASH BAN JATA HAI



JASBIR SINGH
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #20 on: December 03, 2008, 07:17:27 PM »
Quote from: Prateek Mardia on November 29, 2008, 07:56:49 PM


Haasil nahi tum,pur teri khwaish ka bana rehna
Mere dil ki dawa karta,mujhe ub aa gaya jeena
In aankhon ke aanson ne badi shiddat se seecha he
Gulistaa bun gaya jaise,jisey kehte they kabhi seena

Tujhse koi nahi shikwa,nahi kismat se ranjish he
Teri aarzo ko roke hu,inhey jaane ki bandish he
Is khel mein bahut khatra,mujhey maalom he lekin
Kabhi tu kheechi chali aaye,kari aisi hi saajish he

Tujhe paane ki chaahat se,kabhi chaaha nahi maine
Jo paaya hein sada maine,usey luttey hi dekha he
gunahgaaro mein naam mera, khuda ke bandoon ne likh daala
Tammnaaye budh gayi meri,dil deewanon sa mehka he


Nice one Prateek Ji
Bus likhte rahiye
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Prateek Mardia
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«Reply #21 on: December 04, 2008, 01:17:33 PM »
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on December 03, 2008, 07:17:27 PM
Nice one Prateek Ji
Bus likhte rahiye


Shukriya Rajesh Ji.likhne ki kaushish jaari rahegi.
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Shikha12
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«Reply #22 on: December 04, 2008, 01:26:50 PM »
Quote from: Prateek Mardia on November 29, 2008, 07:56:49 PM


Haasil nahi tum,pur teri khwaish ka bana rehna
Mere dil ki dawa karta,mujhe ub aa gaya jeena
In aankhon ke aanson ne badi shiddat se seecha he
Gulistaa bun gaya jaise,jisey kehte they kabhi seena

Tujhse koi nahi shikwa,nahi kismat se ranjish he
Teri aarzo ko roke hu,inhey jaane ki bandish he
Is khel mein bahut khatra,mujhey maalom he lekin
Kabhi tu kheechi chali aaye,kari aisi hi saajish he

Tujhe paane ki chaahat se,kabhi chaaha nahi maine
Jo paaya hein sada maine,usey luttey hi dekha he
gunahgaaro mein naam mera, khuda ke bandoon ne likh daala
Tammnaaye budh gayi meri,dil deewanon sa mehka he


Haaye Oye.. Sadke jaavaa.. Usual Smile
Innaaa pyaara sa kalaam kaise reh gaya bina padhe..

Chalo deir se hi sahi, yeh beshkimati kalaam padhne ko toh mila..
Waah.. Waah.. Aur Waah... Waah.. Bahut khoobsurat likha hai aapne Prateek Ji.. Applause Applause Applause

Dard kam Ishq jyaada nazar aaya ismein..  drunken_smilie
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Shikha12
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«Reply #23 on: December 04, 2008, 01:33:59 PM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on November 30, 2008, 08:59:12 AM
Aapki ek bohat pyaari si line chura raha hu prateek majboor hu is line ko chid nahi sakta is tarah

Gungh_ruo me nam mera, khuda ke bando ne likh dala
Maikhano me mile waiz, aur muje masjido se nikala
Main bada gunahgaar hu par ek soch me atka hu
Kya farak hain dono me, kisi ne dil se kisi ne jannat se nikala

                              -SG & PRATEEK-

Kya baat hai... Bahut bahut khoob...
Sajid ji.. Kamaal de utte dhamaal kar ditta.. Applause
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Shikha12
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«Reply #24 on: December 04, 2008, 01:35:42 PM »
Quote from: jasbirsingh on November 30, 2008, 05:34:43 PM
BAHGTEY MUSAFIR SEY KYA KEHNA,
RUKEY TOH KUCH SAMAJ AAYE,
ANDHERO MEH BHI ROSHNI HOTI HAI,
ABB ISS DIWANEY KOH KAUN SAMJAYE


JASBIR SINGH
hira_company@yahoo.com

Quote from: jasbirsingh on December 01, 2008, 07:41:48 AM

DIL SEY NIKALA MAIN SEHAM GAYA
JANNAT SEY NIKALA MAIN SEHAM GAYA
YEH TOH AJEEB HI BERUKHI HAI UNKI
ABB TOH NIGAHO SEY BHI NIKALA, MAIN MARR GAYA


JASBIR SINGH

Quote from: jasbirsingh on December 03, 2008, 06:51:11 PM

bahut khoob and aap neh bilkul sach kaha hai JI


MITA KEY KHWAISH, JINDA LAASH BAN JAOGEY
FIR RAHEYGA KYA JINDAGI MEH, JINDA LAASH BAN JAOGEY

KWAISH SEY HI EK UMEED BANTI HAI
KUCH KAR GUJARNEY KI TAKREEB BANTI HAI

EK KEY PEECH EK KHWAISH JANAM LETI REHTI HAI
EK POORI HUYI NAHI KI DUSRI PEECHEY KHADI REHTI HAI

KWAISH KEY POORA HOTEY HI, EK KHUSHI KI LEHAR DOAD AATI HAI
TUSRI KHWAISH KEY LIYE, HOSLEY-AFZAYI KI LEHAR DOAD AATI HAI

KWAISH NA HO TOH JINDAGI KA RANG MIT JATA HAI
JYADA KYA KAHEY YARO, JINDA LAASH BAN JATA HAI



JASBIR SINGH
hira_company@yahoo.com


Jasbir Ji..

Ek se badh kar ek...  icon_thumleft
Tussi wi vadda sohna likhiya hai..  Applause
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Shikha12
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«Reply #25 on: December 04, 2008, 01:37:27 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on December 01, 2008, 03:25:07 AM
samjhane per bhi nahi samjhti
khwaishein to khwaishein hai
toot-toot kar, bikhar-bikhar kar
ho jaati hai phir se zinda,
khwaishein to khwaishein hai

Pooja di..

Toooooo Gooood.. As Always.. Thumbs UP
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #26 on: December 04, 2008, 02:22:21 PM »
Quote from: Mahiya on December 04, 2008, 01:35:42 PM
Jasbir Ji..

Ek se badh kar ek...  icon_thumleft
Tussi wi vadda sohna likhiya hai..  Applause



Thanks Mahiya

DIL KI BAAT, KABHI KABHI JUBAA PEH AA JATI HAI
HAR GUM, HAR DARD, KABHI KABHI BAYAAN HO JATI HAI
JINDAGI KA SAFAR YUHI KAT RAHA HAI
KYA PATA,KAB KISS GHADI, JANEY KI KHABAR AA JATI HAI


JASBIR SINGH
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #27 on: December 04, 2008, 07:30:54 PM »
YOU ARE WELCOME PRATEEK


JASBIR SINGH
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Prateek Mardia
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«Reply #28 on: December 05, 2008, 07:49:58 PM »
Quote from: Mahiya on December 04, 2008, 01:26:50 PM
Haaye Oye.. Sadke jaavaa.. Usual Smile
Innaaa pyaara sa kalaam kaise reh gaya bina padhe..

Chalo deir se hi sahi, yeh beshkimati kalaam padhne ko toh mila..
Waah.. Waah.. Aur Waah... Waah.. Bahut khoobsurat likha hai aapne Prateek Ji.. Applause Applause Applause

Dard kam Ishq jyaada nazar aaya ismein..  drunken_smilie




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Mahiya ji,Aapki saraahna ka shukriya.Aapko jo nazar aaya woh vaakai koot koot ke bhara he isme.Aap ne sahi kaha he.
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Pooja
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«Reply #29 on: December 14, 2008, 08:42:52 PM »
nice lines jas ji
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