..~~Teri Nazar~~..

by HumTum is back on January 13, 2006, 03:11:50 PM
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Salaam Dostoon ...... Aaaj kya kya dekha meiney .... wahi aap ki pesh e nazar hai !!!



aaj phir ankh mein saher dekhi
thare pani mein ik lehr dekhi

soch jungle ghana hai bohat
raston pe jami kohr dekhi

jab bhi palat ke dekha kabhi
zindagi khak main baser dekhi

rat main ik alao roshan tha
har ghari ik dopehr dekhi

ik pather sa ho gya wo shakhs
chandni hum ne be-asar dekhi

kar diya tere hawale khud ko
hum ne woh teri ik nazar dekhi !!!


HumTum  :D  
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«Reply #1 on: January 13, 2006, 03:51:14 PM »
wah kaya baat hai Humtum ji, bahoot khoob!!!!

Kare kisi se kaya shikwa
Apno ki wo najar dekhi

Kabhi karaty thy wada saat janmo ka
Issi janam mai, palt kar na unki shaqal Dekhi

Kahty hai wo, ab to barso beet chuke
Wo kaya jaane, in barso ki, kaise ek ek pal dekhi

Karaty hay log, intzaar marne ka
Humne to apni mout, her subah sham dekhi!!!!
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Style_guru
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«Reply #2 on: January 13, 2006, 03:56:01 PM »
Wow! Gazab ka likha hai bro.......
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Rajbir
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«Reply #3 on: January 13, 2006, 04:22:14 PM »
HumTum ji aur Pooja ji... bahut khoob !

Bahut hi achcha likha hai aap dono ne

Rajbir
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Pooja
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«Reply #4 on: January 13, 2006, 04:35:43 PM »
Shukariyan SG and RS ji!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: January 13, 2006, 04:53:02 PM »
Wowww ,bohat khoob Humtum n Pooja ji Usual Smile .
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Meena is back
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«Reply #6 on: January 13, 2006, 07:00:32 PM »
bohot ache pooja and humtum ji!

 :D
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Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: January 13, 2006, 07:12:19 PM »
Nidhi and Meena thanks!! magar app dono kaise bina likhe chali gai....
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«Reply #8 on: January 13, 2006, 07:23:07 PM »
arre pooja sis...aapki aur humtum ki shayari ke aage meri shayari kya... :D  u both carry on na!
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Rajbir
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«Reply #9 on: January 13, 2006, 11:50:51 PM »
HumTum ki post mein Meena ji ka jawab na ho...
Yeh to ho he nahi sakta  :wink:

Rajbir
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nikki
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«Reply #10 on: January 14, 2006, 02:53:20 PM »
too gud Humtum n Pooja sis.....

khud mein ek haunsla sa paya
jab bhi teri vishwaas se bhari nazar dekhi

bewafa nikloge ye darr bhi na raha
jab tumhari aankhon mein wafa ki laher dekhi

kya kahen kasoor apna hi hai
jo humne, tumhari badalti hui na nazar dekhi
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«Reply #11 on: January 14, 2006, 04:54:32 PM »
arre rajbir ji... kabhi kabhi choti choti baate bade bade forums me hoti hai  :D

nikki...kuddiye very gud... nice to c ya again! :D
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«Reply #12 on: January 16, 2006, 09:58:36 AM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
wah kaya baat hai Humtum ji, bahoot khoob!!!!

Kare kisi se kaya shikwa
Apno ki wo najar dekhi

Kabhi karaty thy wada saat janmo ka
Issi janam mai, palt kar na unki shaqal Dekhi

Kahty hai wo, ab to barso beet chuke
Wo kaya jaane, in barso ki, kaise ek ek pal dekhi

Karaty hay log, intzaar marne ka
Humne to apni mout, her subah sham dekhi!!!!


A Great one Pooja ji !!

na rha humko kissi bhi shaks pe aitbaar
jab humney uski woh badli hui nazar dekhi

chalte rahy phoolon ki chah mein , lekin
faqt kantoon se bhari hui apni dagar dekhi

ujad ke rakh diya teri shab e firaaq ne zalim
na meri ankhoon ne phir kabhi sehar dekhi !!!  
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Rajbir
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«Reply #13 on: January 16, 2006, 10:03:29 AM »
Itna achcha likhte hain aap HumTum !

Keep it up !

Rajbir
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«Reply #14 on: January 16, 2006, 10:28:10 AM »
Style_guru[/u]

Thanks a million Dear !!!

Rajbir ji[/u]

Bahut Bahut Shukriya aap ka.. aur shi kha aap ne Meena -JI ko shayaad meri shayri pasand nhi aati ... so she doesn't want to write .....   kyun Meena -JI ?

Nidhi[/u]

Thanks a lot gily paly .. but how come u went away without writing anything .... kya poem achi nhi hai sad5 .. kyun nhi likh rhey ho aap shayar log ?

Meena -JI[/u]

dil aaj shayar hai ghum aaj nagma hai shab yeh gazal hai sanam .... gairoon ke sheroon pe ohh likhne wali , ho iss traf bhi karam !!   aur kya khey Meena - JI !!!  smaj jayiye ab aap !!!
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