teri tasveer ka dhundhla pan

by soudagar on June 06, 2012, 04:36:49 PM
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Teri tasveer ka dhundhlapan ab darane laga hia mujhe
tujhse bichhad jane ka darr ab satane laga hai mujhe

yun to roj peeta tha teri nigahon se magar
na jane kyun aaj ka jaam behkane laga hai mujhe

tujhe bepanah chaha maine, waqt ko  bhi tere kadmo mein jhukaya maine
ab aai bari waqt ki , yeh apni beesat par bichhane laga hai mujhe

sanso se sanso ki bhi duri bardasht nahi thi mujhe tujhse
ab meelo dur rehna padega,yeh khauf aane laga hai mujhe

kabhi teri bahon ki garmi mein sukoon milta tha mujhe
ab tanha jeena hoga, tanhai ki aag ka dar jalane laga hai mujhe

tera sath mujhe hansata tha, tera pyar mujhe mehkata tha
tu juda ho jayegi "soudagar" se , teri judai ka dar rulane laga hai  mujhe
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«Reply #1 on: June 06, 2012, 04:39:23 PM »
waah waah waah janab ek rau apke liye
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«Reply #2 on: June 06, 2012, 04:43:37 PM »
bahut  bahut shukriya sahil ji.
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«Reply #3 on: June 06, 2012, 08:02:47 PM »
achhi feel achhi peshkash... soudagar sahab ...
ha ek baat neeche ki lines me aapne likha hai.... ( "laga mujhe" shayad waha "laga hai mujhe" hona chahiye... )


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«Reply #4 on: June 07, 2012, 02:07:24 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya intzar ji rachna ko durust karane ke liye.......aise hi apni najar banae rakhein aur shikayat aur sujhav dete rahe .... aabhar hai aapka...
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«Reply #5 on: June 07, 2012, 02:48:56 AM »
Quote from: soudagar on June 06, 2012, 04:36:49 PM
Teri tasveer ka dhundhlapan ab darane laga hia mujhe
tujhse bichhad jane ka darr ab satane laga hai mujhe

yun to roj peeta tha teri nigahon se magar
na jane kyun aaj ka jaam behkane laga hai mujhe

tujhe bepanah chaha maine, waqt ko  bhi tere kadmo mein jhukaya maine
ab aai bari waqt ki , yeh apni beesat par bichhane laga hai mujhe

sanso se sanso ki bhi duri bardasht nahi thi mujhe tujhse
ab meelo dur rehna padega,yeh khauf aane laga hai mujhe

kabhi teri bahon ki garmi mein sukoon milta tha mujhe
ab tanha jeena hoga, tanhai ki aag ka dar jalane laga hai mujhe

tera sath mujhe hansata tha, tera pyar mujhe mehkata tha
tu juda ho jayegi "soudagar" se , teri judai ka dar rulane laga hai  mujhe

Nicely expressed words. Bahut khoob Soudagar ji
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«Reply #6 on: June 07, 2012, 04:02:16 AM »
beautiful waah waah
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«Reply #7 on: June 07, 2012, 07:35:42 AM »
Quote from: soudagar on June 06, 2012, 04:36:49 PM
Teri tasveer ka dhundhlapan ab darane laga hia mujhe
tujhse bichhad jane ka darr ab satane laga hai mujhe

yun to roj peeta tha teri nigahon se magar
na jane kyun aaj ka jaam behkane laga hai mujhe

tujhe bepanah chaha maine, waqt ko  bhi tere kadmo mein jhukaya maine
ab aai bari waqt ki , yeh apni beesat par bichhane laga hai mujhe

sanso se sanso ki bhi duri bardasht nahi thi mujhe tujhse
ab meelo dur rehna padega,yeh khauf aane laga hai mujhe

kabhi teri bahon ki garmi mein sukoon milta tha mujhe
ab tanha jeena hoga, tanhai ki aag ka dar jalane laga hai mujhe

tera sath mujhe hansata tha, tera pyar mujhe mehkata tha
tu juda ho jayegi "soudagar" se , teri judai ka dar rulane laga hai  mujhe


Bahut Bahut Khooob Saudagar Ji..

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«Reply #8 on: June 07, 2012, 12:56:29 PM »
Aapka bahut bahut shukriya saini sir ji
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«Reply #9 on: June 07, 2012, 04:53:20 PM »
srahna ke liye bahut bahut dhanywad malli ji
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«Reply #10 on: June 07, 2012, 05:26:09 PM »
Bahut khoob Saudagar jee
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«Reply #11 on: June 08, 2012, 02:37:39 AM »
khawahish ji aapne rachna padhne ke liye samay nikala uske liye bahut bahut shukriya.... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #12 on: June 09, 2012, 03:32:39 PM »
Quote from: soudagar on June 06, 2012, 04:36:49 PM
Teri tasveer ka dhundhlapan ab darane laga hia mujhe
tujhse bichhad jane ka darr ab satane laga hai mujhe

yun to roj peeta tha teri nigahon se magar
na jane kyun aaj ka jaam behkane laga hai mujhe

tujhe bepanah chaha maine, waqt ko  bhi tere kadmo mein jhukaya maine
ab aai bari waqt ki , yeh apni beesat par bichhane laga hai mujhe

sanso se sanso ki bhi duri bardasht nahi thi mujhe tujhse
ab meelo dur rehna padega,yeh khauf aane laga hai mujhe

kabhi teri bahon ki garmi mein sukoon milta tha mujhe
ab tanha jeena hoga, tanhai ki aag ka dar jalane laga hai mujhe

tera sath mujhe hansata tha, tera pyar mujhe mehkata tha
tu juda ho jayegi "soudagar" se , teri judai ka dar rulane laga hai  mujhe
wwahh bohat khoob...
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«Reply #13 on: June 10, 2012, 02:53:17 AM »
Bahut acche Applause
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«Reply #14 on: June 14, 2012, 02:12:23 AM »
bahut  bhut shukirya mkv ji..
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