~*~Teri Tasveer~*~

by pankshivam on March 04, 2009, 10:25:21 PM
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Ye post Poojaji ki post ke reply ke liye yaha paste kar raha hun
Kyunki vo khumar me likhi gayi post thi aur ye dard ki hai
I hope aap logo ko pasand aaye...
Jis post ke liye ye reply likh raha hun uska link de raha hun
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pankshivam
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«Reply #1 on: March 04, 2009, 10:29:30 PM »
Teri tasveer reh gayi hai dil ke kisi kone me,
        Kafi hai ek katra ab umr bhar aankho ko bhigone me...

Dil Tuta sa laga teri baato ki gehrayi dekh kar,
        Dard hota kuch bato se, kyu chubhati hai kuch baate seene me...

Tu khafa hai mujhse aaj janta hun mai bhi,
        Kafi hai do pal ki duriya sadiyo ke fasle pirone me

Ye meri wafaon ka hi asar hai
        Jo samandar bhi rota hai meri kashti ko dubone me....
     
        ~Pank~
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sarthika
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«Reply #2 on: March 05, 2009, 04:13:10 AM »
bahoot khoob Pank ji
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«Reply #3 on: March 05, 2009, 04:21:14 AM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob Pank Ji.. Applause Applause Applause

aakhri 2 ashaar to bahut hi khoob aur gehre hai.. Clapping Smiley
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #4 on: March 05, 2009, 05:09:57 AM »
Very good one Shivam Ji
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dead heart
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«Reply #5 on: March 05, 2009, 05:19:26 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Wah Wah kamal ka likha hai apne Pank jee...Likte raho yaar...
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pankshivam
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«Reply #6 on: March 05, 2009, 07:40:39 AM »
Aap Sabka Shukriya
Sarthika ji Khwaish ji Rajesh Bhai Rahim Bhai
I Hope

Likhne ko Gar Aaise hi Dard Milte Rahenge Is Duniya se...
Khwahish nahi fir Kisi Khushi ki Mujhe....
Jab mere Dard me Duniya Sath Degi is Tarah,
Mere Ashko ka Ek Katra Unke Taliya Bajate Hathon pe bhi Nazar Aayega...

~Pank~
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Talat
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«Reply #7 on: March 05, 2009, 01:28:29 PM »
Bohot Khoob PankS Ji
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pankshivam
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«Reply #8 on: March 05, 2009, 04:54:15 PM »
Bohot Khoob PankS Ji
Shukriya Celmiraji
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salma786
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«Reply #9 on: March 09, 2009, 04:20:10 AM »
Bahoot bahoot khoob Pank ji Applause Applause Applause
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pankshivam
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«Reply #10 on: March 09, 2009, 04:23:15 AM »
Bahoot bahoot khoob Pank ji Applause Applause Applause
Shukriya Salmaji
Aap bhi kuch post kar deti toh achha lagta
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salma786
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«Reply #11 on: March 09, 2009, 06:54:18 AM »
Ye post Poojaji ki post ke reply ke liye yaha paste kar raha hun
Kyunki vo khumar me likhi gayi post thi aur ye dard ki hai
I hope aap logo ko pasand aaye...
Jis post ke liye ye reply likh raha hun uska link de raha hun
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shayri-for-khumar-e-ishq/teri-tasveer-t16724.0.html;msg862238;topicseen#new



Teri tasveer ko dil me basaya humne,
Teri chahat me hosh-o-hawaz gawaya humne,
Jis dard-e-judai se guzre hum hai,
Us dard ko zamane se chupaya humne!

Jin ankhon ko hamari chamakta paya sabne,
Us chamak ko akhir wo bikhra hi gaye,
Ab ilteja hi kya karte doobti kashti se,
Jab kinare se pehle chattano se takra hi gaye!


 

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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #12 on: March 09, 2009, 07:16:57 AM »
Teri tasveer ko dil me basaya humne,
Teri chahat me hosh-o-hawaz gawaya humne,
Jis dard-e-judai se guzre hum hai,
Us dard ko zamane se chupaya humne!

Jin ankhon ko hamari chamakta paya sabne,
Us chamak ko akhir wo bikhra hi gaye,
Ab ilteja hi kya karte doobti kashti se,
Jab kinare se pehle chattano se takra hi gaye!



Wah! Salma Ji
Bahut khoob likha hai
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salma786
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«Reply #13 on: March 09, 2009, 07:25:19 AM »
SHUKRIYA RAJESH JI
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pankshivam
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«Reply #14 on: March 09, 2009, 07:40:39 AM »
Teri tasveer ko dil me basaya humne,
Teri chahat me hosh-o-hawaz gawaya humne,
Jis dard-e-judai se guzre hum hai,
Us dard ko zamane se chupaya humne!

Jin ankhon ko hamari chamakta paya sabne,
Us chamak ko akhir wo bikhra hi gaye,
Ab ilteja hi kya karte doobti kashti se,
Jab kinare se pehle chattano se takra hi gaye!


 


Wah Salmaji Bahoot Khoob Applause Applause Applause
Aapke Liye reply jarur likhunga lekin Itni Achhi Shayari pe Reply Karne Ke liye Thoda waqt Toh Lagega
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