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Bahut Dino Baad Ab Wapas Kuch Likhne Ko Mann Kiya Hai Meri
Aasha Karta Hoon Shayad Aap Sabhi Ko Pasand Aaye.. Mujhe Bahut Yaad Aati Hai Ab Teri..
Aankhen Ashko Se Bhar Aati Hai Meri..
Kabhi Ek Sath Jeeya Karte The Har Lamhe Ko Hum..
Ab To Khushi Ke Lamho Mein Bhi Khush Nahi Rah Pate Hain Hum..
Har Pal Teri Yadone Ne Mujhe Rulaya Hai..
Sathi Ab Tak Tere Jaisa Meine Koi Nahi Paya Hai..
Ab To Lagta Hai Kyu Pyar Kiya Meine Tujhse..
Jab Dil Tod Kar Dur Jana Tha Tujhe Mujhse..
Ab To Har Ek Pal Tere Bin Adhura Pan Mehsus Karta Hoon..
Laut Aa Mere Yaar Tere Sath Hi Har Pal Jeena Chahta Hoon.. |
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«Reply #1 on: January 16, 2011, 02:39:50 PM » |
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Rishi ji namaskaar.
aapki poetry ke baare me mera kuch alg anubhaw hua hai.
jaise mai aapki lekhni me ek saadgi paata hun--seedhe lafzon me aapki dil ki baat masumiyat se kagaz pr aati hai.
har post me aapka ek anutha sa bholapan aur pyar nazar aaya mujhe.
shayri ke baare me jada anubhaw nhi mujhe bas jo feel kiya likh gaya.
aaapki ye taza post Dil ko chu jaati hai.
Pyar se bharpoor aur saathi ki judai ka achha milawat hai.
bahut sandaar.
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thanx
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«Reply #2 on: January 16, 2011, 02:50:42 PM » |
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Rishi Jee Aadaab!
Achche ahsaas o khayaal kahe hai aapne..
Daad hazir hai...
Likhate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... 
Ab is khushfahmi meiN nahi rahna ke tum se ab hum-kalaam hoNge
Hum to khud se bhi khafa ho jayeN to sadiyo khamosh rahte hai
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«Reply #3 on: January 16, 2011, 06:09:23 PM » |
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«Reply #4 on: January 16, 2011, 06:22:00 PM » |
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Bahut khoobsurat kavita likhi hai apne rishi ji...bahut pasand aayi apki ye rachna...
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«Reply #5 on: January 16, 2011, 06:43:51 PM » |
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bahut Badhiya hai
padh kar sukoon mila bhai
khus rahiye
sukriya
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«Reply #6 on: January 16, 2011, 07:58:59 PM » |
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simple and sweet bahut sidhapan hai aapki baaton mein... yun hi likhte rehiye Rishi ji...
Intezar !
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«Reply #7 on: January 16, 2011, 08:14:03 PM » |
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kya baat hai parwaaz sahab kya baat...
Ab is khushfahmi meiN nahi rahna ke tum se ab hum-kalaam hoNge
Hum to khud se bhi khafa ho jayeN to sadiyo khamosh rahte hai
muntazir wo mera beshak na huaa kabhi parwaaz phir mere dil me uthti hoonke use kyo jagaa jaati hai... ! Intezar ! |
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«Reply #8 on: January 17, 2011, 10:05:23 AM » |
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nice lines rishi ji....
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #9 on: January 17, 2011, 11:54:00 AM » |
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Rishi ji namaskaar.
aapki poetry ke baare me mera kuch alg anubhaw hua hai.
jaise mai aapki lekhni me ek saadgi paata hun--seedhe lafzon me aapki dil ki baat masumiyat se kagaz pr aati hai.
har post me aapka ek anutha sa bholapan aur pyar nazar aaya mujhe.
shayri ke baare me jada anubhaw nhi mujhe bas jo feel kiya likh gaya.
aaapki ye taza post Dil ko chu jaati hai.
Pyar se bharpoor aur saathi ki judai ka achha milawat hai.
bahut sandaar.
"
thanx
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Nirala Ji Aapne Meri Likhi Huvi Is Post Ko Sahraya Iske Liye Bahut Bahut Shukriya.. Jab Kisi Se Pyar Hota Hai aur Wo Agar Juda Ho Jaye To Bahut Dard Hota Hai Nirala Ji Aur isliye Mein Apni dil ki baat Yaha likhi Hai Shayad Jinke Liye Likhi Kaash Wo Bhi Padh le But mujhe pta hai wo nahi aane wale wapas.. but jo bhi hai wo khush rahe... aapki daad ke liye shukriya... |
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«Reply #10 on: January 17, 2011, 11:55:52 AM » |
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Rishi Jee Aadaab!
Achche ahsaas o khayaal kahe hai aapne..
Daad hazir hai...
Likhate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez...
Ab is khushfahmi meiN nahi rahna ke tum se ab hum-kalaam hoNge
Hum to khud se bhi khafa ho jayeN to sadiyo khamosh rahte hai Bahut Bahut Shukriya Parwaaz Ji |
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«Reply #11 on: January 17, 2011, 11:57:23 AM » |
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Bahut khoobsurat kavita likhi hai apne rishi ji...bahut pasand aayi apki ye rachna...
Bahut Bahut Shukriya Geet Ji.. |
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«Reply #12 on: January 17, 2011, 11:58:29 AM » |
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bahut Badhiya hai
padh kar sukoon mila bhai
khus rahiye
sukriya
Bahut Bahut Shukriya KB Ji |
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«Reply #13 on: January 17, 2011, 11:59:44 AM » |
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Bahut Khub Rishi Bhai...
Khush Rahiye...
~Shihab~
Bahut Bahut Shukriya Shihab Ji |
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«Reply #14 on: January 17, 2011, 12:02:50 PM » |
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simple and sweet bahut sidhapan hai aapki baaton mein... yun hi likhte rehiye Rishi ji...
Intezar !
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