Teri yaadein aaj bhi mujhe tadpa jaati hai

by deepika_divya on August 26, 2009, 12:49:41 PM
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«Reply #15 on: August 28, 2009, 01:16:39 PM »
Quote from: cara on August 26, 2009, 02:59:30 PM
KYA BAAT HAI SOPHI JI........

NA JAANE KYA BAAT HAI,TU KYUN NAHIN AATI HAI,
YAAD JAB BHI TERI AATI HAI, MUJHE BAHUT TADPAATI HAI.

WO KYA BAAT HAI JO TU KUCH KAHE NAHIN PARAHI HAI HAMSE,
TERA HAR DARD MERA DARD HAI JAANAM KASAMSE.

HAR SHAM KO HAWA JAB MERE BADAN KO CHU KAR GUJAR JAATI HAI.
BECHIN SA KAR DETI HAI MUJHE,TUJHSE MILNE KI CHAH BAHUT SATA TI HAI.

WO HAR EK LAMHA JO MAINE GUJARA HAI SANG TERE,
ITNA AASAN NAHIN HAI BULJAANA HAMSEY.

WO MERA TERE LABON KO CHUMNA,TERA SHARMANA,
FIR TERA MASTI MEIN AA JAANA AUR MUJHSE LIPAT JAANA,
KYA AASAN HOGA TUJHSE YEH SAB BUL JAANA.

UN WAADON KA KYA,JO HATHON MEIN HAATH DAL KAR KIYA KARTE  THEY,
JO SANG JEENE MARNE KI KASMEY LIYA KARTE THEY.
WO PYAR NAHIN TOH KYA THA,JAB EK DOOSRE PE MAR TE THEY.

MUJHE TOH TERI YAAD AAJ BHI TADPAATI HAI,
AGAR MERI YAAD TUJHE TADPAATI HAI,
TOH KYUN NAHIN AATI HAI.
KYA BAAT HAI JO TU MUJHSE CHUPATI HAI.

            AA BHI JAAO SANAM
            AUR NA TADFAO SANAM....





Bahoot Shukriya Cera ji..

Kya khoob Likha hai Cera ji.. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob !
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #16 on: August 28, 2009, 01:17:40 PM »
Quote from: thegrimreaper on August 26, 2009, 03:46:12 PM
bahut hi khoob divya ji

ek nayaab aur anokhi peshkash

seedhe saadhe alfaazon mein gehri baat keh gaye aap

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahoot Bahoot Shukriyaa Hausla Afzaai k Liye GrimReaper Ji.. Usual Smile
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #17 on: August 28, 2009, 01:18:31 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on August 26, 2009, 03:48:10 PM
bahut Bahut khoob Sophi..

Sach mein Bahut seedhe Aksharo Mein gehre Jazbaat..

Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Nice One Cara.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahoot Bahoot Shukriya Khwaish ji.. Usual Smile
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smardia
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«Reply #18 on: August 28, 2009, 01:54:14 PM »
 Sophiji badi joordaar rachana....Sunder shabdon ka chayan aur upyog.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Loute nahi kabhi gujre huye pal
Din beet jaate hain karte kal-kal
Waqt he banta hai tab marham
Tutne lagte hain sab braham


Quote from: Sophi on August 26, 2009, 12:49:41 PM
Woh shaam woh Hawa aaj bhi chu kar guzar jaati hai
le kar tera naam yea fizaayein bhi madhosh kar jaati hai

Kuch anjaani baat, Jo main keh na paai thi kabhi tumse
Jo pyaar ki saugaate mujhe fir se yaad dila jaati hai

Woh tera meri Ghod pe sar rakh kar, meri ankho mea dekhna
Woh tere paas hone ka ehsaas aaj bhi mujhe behla jaati hai

haath ko mera apne haath se thamna , Mujhe dekh tera Muskaana
Woh teri madmast adaaye, aaj bhi lab ko mere hasi de jaati hai

Janti hun ki woh pal na aayenge ab laut ke vapis fir se
Par Kya karun Main , Teri yaadein aaj bhi mujhe Tadpa jaati hai

DiVyA
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Roja
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«Reply #19 on: August 28, 2009, 01:58:23 PM »
Quote from: smardia on August 28, 2009, 01:54:14 PM
Sophiji badi joordaar rachana....Sunder shabdon ka chayan aur upyog.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Loute nahi kabhi gujre huye pal
Din beet jaate hain karte kal-kal
Waqt he banta hai tab marham
Tutne lagte hain sab braham

Wow nice lines Smardia ji
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #20 on: August 29, 2009, 10:50:14 AM »
Quote from: Sophi on August 26, 2009, 12:49:41 PM
Woh shaam woh Hawa aaj bhi chu kar guzar jaati hai
le kar tera naam yea fizaayein bhi madhosh kar jaati hai

Kuch anjaani baat, Jo main keh na paai thi kabhi tumse
Jo pyaar ki saugaate mujhe fir se yaad dila jaati hai

Woh tera meri Ghod pe sar rakh kar, meri ankho mea dekhna
Woh tere paas hone ka ehsaas aaj bhi mujhe behla jaati hai

haath ko mera apne haath se thamna , Mujhe dekh tera Muskaana
Woh teri madmast adaaye, aaj bhi lab ko mere hasi de jaati hai

Janti hun ki woh pal na aayenge ab laut ke vapis fir se
Par Kya karun Main , Teri yaadein aaj bhi mujhe Tadpa jaati hai
 
DiVyA


...nice one Sophi dear...good job...
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #21 on: August 29, 2009, 01:51:01 PM »
Quote from: Sophi on August 26, 2009, 12:49:41 PM
Woh shaam woh Hawa aaj bhi chu kar guzar jaati hai
le kar tera naam yea fizaayein bhi madhosh kar jaati hai

Kuch anjaani baat, Jo main keh na paai thi kabhi tumse
Jo pyaar ki saugaate mujhe fir se yaad dila jaati hai

Woh tera meri Ghod pe sar rakh kar, meri ankho mea dekhna
Woh tere paas hone ka ehsaas aaj bhi mujhe behla jaati hai

haath ko mera apne haath se thamna , Mujhe dekh tera Muskaana
Woh teri madmast adaaye, aaj bhi lab ko mere hasi de jaati hai

Janti hun ki woh pal na aayenge ab laut ke vapis fir se
Par Kya karun Main , Teri yaadein aaj bhi mujhe Tadpa jaati hai

DiVyA


Wah.. Kya Baat hai Divya.. Bahut Hi Khubsoorati se Jazzbaaton Ko Lafzon Ki Zubaan Di Hai.. Waqai Padh Kar Bahut accha laga.. Mujhe bhi Kisi ki Yaad Dila Di aapki Is Rachna Ne.. Bahut Bahut Khooooooooooob... Applause Applause


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


**~** Mann **~**
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #22 on: August 29, 2009, 01:52:12 PM »
Quote from: cara on August 26, 2009, 02:59:30 PM
KYA BAAT HAI SOPHI JI........

NA JAANE KYA BAAT HAI,TU KYUN NAHIN AATI HAI,
YAAD JAB BHI TERI AATI HAI, MUJHE BAHUT TADPAATI HAI.

WO KYA BAAT HAI JO TU KUCH KAHE NAHIN PARAHI HAI HAMSE,
TERA HAR DARD MERA DARD HAI JAANAM KASAMSE.

HAR SHAM KO HAWA JAB MERE BADAN KO CHU KAR GUJAR JAATI HAI.
BECHIN SA KAR DETI HAI MUJHE,TUJHSE MILNE KI CHAH BAHUT SATA TI HAI.

WO HAR EK LAMHA JO MAINE GUJARA HAI SANG TERE,
ITNA AASAN NAHIN HAI BULJAANA HAMSEY.

WO MERA TERE LABON KO CHUMNA,TERA SHARMANA,
FIR TERA MASTI MEIN AA JAANA AUR MUJHSE LIPAT JAANA,
KYA AASAN HOGA TUJHSE YEH SAB BUL JAANA.

UN WAADON KA KYA,JO HATHON MEIN HAATH DAL KAR KIYA KARTE  THEY,
JO SANG JEENE MARNE KI KASMEY LIYA KARTE THEY.
WO PYAR NAHIN TOH KYA THA,JAB EK DOOSRE PE MAR TE THEY.

MUJHE TOH TERI YAAD AAJ BHI TADPAATI HAI,
AGAR MERI YAAD TUJHE TADPAATI HAI,
TOH KYUN NAHIN AATI HAI.
KYA BAAT HAI JO TU MUJHSE CHUPATI HAI.

            AA BHI JAAO SANAM
            AUR NA TADFAO SANAM....





Bahut Bahut Khoooooob Cara Ji.. Aapne Humesha Ki tarah Lajawab Likha hai.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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Pooja
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«Reply #23 on: August 31, 2009, 03:08:01 AM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Good work Sophi...
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #24 on: September 05, 2009, 07:41:47 AM »
Quote from: Dhaval on August 26, 2009, 04:36:15 PM
Divyaa jee:

namaste!

bahot hi Khuub liKhaa haii aapne.. har Sher beHteriN lagaa mujhe

haath ko mera apne haath se thamna , Mujhe dekh tera Muskaana
Woh teri madmast adaaye, aaj bhi lab ko mere hasi de jaati hai

yeh Sher dil ke Qareeb rahaa ! daad qabUl keejiyeNgaa!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval

Bahoot Bahoot Shukriyaa Dhaval ji..
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«Reply #25 on: September 05, 2009, 07:42:34 AM »
Quote from: Nikhaar on August 26, 2009, 05:55:02 PM
bahut hi khub Divya ji......har alfaaz dil ka haal byaan k rha hai....bahut khuuuuuub Applause Applause Applause Applause

Aapne bhi bahut achha likha cara ji Applause Applause Applause

Thank you so Much Pooja
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«Reply #26 on: September 05, 2009, 07:43:31 AM »
Quote from: madhuwesh on August 26, 2009, 11:43:21 PM
Wah wah bahut khoob Sophi ji and Cara ji bahut khoob,really touching,mindblowing creation.excellent. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thank you so much madhu ji itni saari taliyon k liye aur sarahane k liye Usual Smile
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #27 on: September 05, 2009, 07:45:00 AM »
Quote from: brokenbyluv on August 26, 2009, 11:55:37 PM
Too gud divya ji..
kya kahu main aap yoindians ko aise aise kavita ghazals quotes likhte ho k lagta hai kisi ne merre jivan ki kahani ko likh diya ho..waise ek baat tou hai k pyar bhale hi alag alag log ekdusre se karte ho per pyar ka ehsas uski feelings ek hi hoti hai...very nice divya ji awesome... Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause

Thank you so Much BBL ...Ya Feelings behind love is same but sabd badal jaate hai..

Thank you once again!
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«Reply #28 on: September 05, 2009, 07:46:07 AM »
Quote from: fairykhan on August 27, 2009, 06:19:26 AM
wah kia baat hai ap ki...koi jawab hi nai....bht bht bht khoob likha hai...jaisa k sab ne kaha hai k dil main utar gaia hai hr lafaz..bilkul sahi kaha hai...keep it uppp....n thanks for guideline which i had require,,,,thanksss

Thank you so Much Fairy for liking it.. and My pleasure dear!
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«Reply #29 on: September 05, 2009, 07:47:13 AM »
Quote from: injured.warrior on August 27, 2009, 06:54:18 AM
notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut notworthy notworthy notworthy

Thanks a lot IW Usual Smile
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