*Tes Lage Paav Main*

by Roja on February 08, 2008, 02:54:46 AM
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Atheeton ki chaav main pardesh ke ek gaon main
Chale chalte jane kyu tes lage paav main..

Is bheed main her koyi anjaan sa lag raha
Khoya khoya raah main pareshaan sa lag raha
Kis ko kahe apna mann andekhe ghaav main
Chalte chalte jane kyu tes lage paav main..

Us mod per pahunchkar bechain sa ho raha tha
Sagar main kamoshi ka toofan ro raha tha
Dubak pade kinare they sab lehron ki naav main
Chalte chalte jane kyu tes lage paav main..

Thaki thaki si saanson main bhuji bhuji si aas hai
Dabdabayi aankhon main bas itna hi ehsaas hai
"Roja" kadam aa pade tanhayiyon ke daav main
Chalte chalte jane kyu tes lage paav main..


 Crying :'
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baadal102
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«Reply #1 on: February 08, 2008, 04:28:38 AM »
wahhhh roja ji kya baat hai

Us mod per pahunchkar bechain sa ho raha tha
Sagar main kamoshi ka toofan ro raha tha
Dubak pade kinare they sab lehron ki naav main
Chalte chalte jane kyu tes lage paav main..


Baadal
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zakhmola
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«Reply #2 on: February 08, 2008, 05:09:48 AM »
jaisye tere paaon ki tees
kuchh waisey mere seene ke ghaav
bhari padi duniya zakhmo sey
Roja [ author + Weeping =double meaning ]hunsley Zakhmo pey.
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sagar_0777
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«Reply #3 on: February 08, 2008, 11:05:19 AM »
kya baat hai roja g aap to chaa gye,
tnx for this
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honeyrose
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«Reply #4 on: February 08, 2008, 11:32:35 AM »
Simply super Roja bohat acha hai dil ko chu liya hai..
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«Reply #5 on: February 08, 2008, 02:53:48 PM »

Atheeton ki chaav main pardesh ke ek gaon main
Chale chalte jane kyu tes lage paav main..

Is bheed main her koyi anjaan sa lag raha
Khoya khoya raah main pareshaan sa lag raha
Kis ko kahe apna mann andekhe ghaav main
Chalte chalte jane kyu tes lage paav main..

Us mod per pahunchkar bechain sa ho raha tha
Sagar main kamoshi ka toofan ro raha tha
Dubak pade kinare they sab lehron ki naav main
Chalte chalte jane kyu tes lage paav main..

Thaki thaki si saanson main bhuji bhuji si aas hai
Dabdabayi aankhon main bas itna hi ehsaas hai
"Roja" kadam aa pade tanhayiyon ke daav main
Chalte chalte jane kyu tes lage paav main..


 Crying :'

BAHUT KHOOB ROJA...
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Pooja
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«Reply #6 on: February 08, 2008, 05:43:29 PM »
wow too good Roja!!! bahoot hi acha likha hai!!!
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kiranvj47
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«Reply #7 on: February 22, 2008, 10:03:32 AM »
hello roja how r you thias is kumar from belgaum (karnataka)
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Roja
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«Reply #8 on: February 25, 2008, 02:16:37 AM »
jaisye tere paaon ki tees
kuchh waisey mere seene ke ghaav
bhari padi duniya zakhmo sey
Roja [ author + Weeping =double meaning ]hunsley Zakhmo pey.

Is bari dunia main tanha jaan hai hum
Lagti hai tes her raah main meri
Kehte hai Waqt merham hai her zakham ka
Magar woh waqt b mujhse roota hua hai

Thanks
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Roja
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«Reply #9 on: February 25, 2008, 02:19:33 AM »
Thanks Baadal ji, Pooja didi, Kwaish ji, Sagar ji, & Honey... thanks for your appreciation.
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Roja
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«Reply #10 on: February 25, 2008, 02:20:24 AM »
hello roja how r you thias is kumar from belgaum (karnataka)

Hi kumar,
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