tha.k jaatee hun....

by laaiba on June 05, 2012, 06:04:51 PM
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can.d ko takte taktey tha.k jaatee hun
taaRe main ginte gintey tha.k jaatee hun

heej.r kaa ye moSam jab aata hai saajan..
tanHa yun rehTE rehtey tha.k jaaTee hun\

tum juDaa ho jaate ho jub bhi mujhh say
sab se to milte miltey tha.k jaatee hun

aaTishee daR.d jab dil ko jaLaatee haii
ban shaMaa jalte jalTey tha.k jaatee hun

yaaD E maaZee ki iss pur khaa.r waadee mein
tanHa main chalte chaltey tha.k jaatee hun...

laaiba ali angel11
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«Reply #1 on: June 05, 2012, 06:16:53 PM »
Quote from: laaiba on June 05, 2012, 06:04:51 PM

can.d ko takte taktey tha.k jaatee hun
taaRe main ginte gintey tha.k jaatee hun

heej.r kaa ye moSam jab aata hai saajan..
tanHa yun rehTE rehtey tha.k jaaTee hun\

tum juDaa ho jaate ho jub bhi mujhh say
sab se to milte miltey tha.k jaatee hun

aaTishee daR.d jab dil ko jaLaatee haii
ban shaMaa jalte jalTey tha.k jaatee hun

yaaD E maaZee ki iss pur khaa.r waadee mein
tanHa main chalte chaltey tha.k jaatee hun...

laaiba ali angel11



   gud one

           
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«Reply #2 on: June 05, 2012, 06:19:33 PM »
thanku ....
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«Reply #3 on: June 06, 2012, 04:07:55 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: June 06, 2012, 09:36:25 AM »
Laaibaa Sahibaa Aadaab!


WaaH waaH waaH kia kahne jee waaH kia kahne ... behad khoob
aur behad umdaa kalaam kahi hai aapne... bus lafz nahi tareef
ke liye... Usual Smile


Bahut umdaa kia kahne behad khoobsurat kalaam behad umdaa khayal
aur umdaa adaaygi... Usual Smile

Is khoob aur umdaa kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O
Mubbarakbad kabul kijiye.... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

Quote from: laaiba on June 05, 2012, 06:04:51 PM

can.d ko takte taktey tha.k jaatee hun
taaRe main ginte gintey tha.k jaatee hun

WaaH bahut khoob bada achcha matla hai daad Usual Smile

heej.r kaa ye moSam jab aata hai saajan..
tanHa yun rehTE rehtey tha.k jaaTee hun\

Kia kahne jee kia kahne waaH behad khoob ... daad daad daad

tum juDaa ho jaate ho jub bhi mujhh say
sab se to milte miltey tha.k jaatee hun

Masha AllaaH kia kahne jee behad gazab ka aur behad
kamaal ka khayaal kaha hai waaH ... dil shaad ho gaya itna khoob sher
sunkar... Usual Smile  Applause Applause Applause Applause

aaTishee daR.d jab dil ko jaLaatee haii
ban shaMaa jalte jalTey tha.k jaatee hun

Kia baat hai bahut khoob jee daad ...
Par aatishi dard jalaata hai not jalaati it's a musculine word not
feminine ... Usual Smile

yaaD E maaZee ki iss pur khaa.r waadee mein
tanHa main chalte chaltey tha.k jaatee hun...

Masha Allaah Bahut bahut khoob... Usual Smile
Bade hi pyaare aur umdaa khayaaloN ko khoob lafzoN meiN piroya hai
aapne... yeH kalaam aapki sabse umdaa kalaam meiN hai... Usual Smile


Is umdaa kalaam par phir se hazaaroN dili daad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

laaiba ali angel11
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«Reply #5 on: June 06, 2012, 07:55:12 PM »
nice expressions nice theme... bahut khoob laaiba ji...

thak ke yu na baitho abhi bahut door chalna hai
tumhe gam ke saaye se abhi bahut door nikalna hai

ye kuch pal ki hijra se na ghabraao tum laaiba
abhi to milkar ek dusre ka hume naseeb badalna hai...!

Intezar !
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«Reply #6 on: June 07, 2012, 07:42:02 AM »
Quote from: laaiba on June 05, 2012, 06:04:51 PM

can.d ko takte taktey tha.k jaatee hun
taaRe main ginte gintey tha.k jaatee hun

heej.r kaa ye moSam jab aata hai saajan..
tanHa yun rehTE rehtey tha.k jaaTee hun\

tum juDaa ho jaate ho jub bhi mujhh say
sab se to milte miltey tha.k jaatee hun

aaTishee daR.d jab dil ko jaLaatee haii
ban shaMaa jalte jalTey tha.k jaatee hun

yaaD E maaZee ki iss pur khaa.r waadee mein
tanHa main chalte chaltey tha.k jaatee hun...

laaiba ali angel11



Bahut Bahut Khooob laaiba Ji..

Khaas Taur Par Yeh As'haar bahut Khoobsurat Hai..


"Tum juda Ho Jaate Ho Jab Bhi Mujhse
 Sab Se To Milte Milte Thak Jaati Hun"

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«Reply #7 on: June 07, 2012, 05:33:40 PM »
Bahut khoob Laaiba jee
Kaafi farq aa gaya hai.. kalaam dar kalaam improvement saaf dikh raha hai..thoda spelling mistakes par aur dhyaan de.
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«Reply #8 on: June 09, 2012, 03:36:21 PM »
Quote from: sksaini4 on June 06, 2012, 04:07:55 AM
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bohat shukria aapkaa...
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«Reply #9 on: June 09, 2012, 03:37:31 PM »
Quote from: ParwaaZ on June 06, 2012, 09:36:25 AM
Laaibaa Sahibaa Aadaab!


WaaH waaH waaH kia kahne jee waaH kia kahne ... behad khoob
aur behad umdaa kalaam kahi hai aapne... bus lafz nahi tareef
ke liye... Usual Smile


Bahut umdaa kia kahne behad khoobsurat kalaam behad umdaa khayal
aur umdaa adaaygi... Usual Smile

Is khoob aur umdaa kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O
Mubbarakbad kabul kijiye.... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

aadab parwaaz jee ..aapki janib se hosla afzai ke liye azhad mashkoor hoon mai.n...
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«Reply #10 on: June 09, 2012, 03:38:10 PM »
Quote from: Intezar on June 06, 2012, 07:55:12 PM
nice expressions nice theme... bahut khoob laaiba ji...

thak ke yu na baitho abhi bahut door chalna hai
tumhe gam ke saaye se abhi bahut door nikalna hai

ye kuch pal ki hijra se na ghabraao tum laaiba
abhi to milkar ek dusre ka hume naseeb badalna hai...!

Intezar !
bohat shukria aapkaa intezar jee ..bohat ache shair ...
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«Reply #11 on: June 09, 2012, 03:38:41 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on June 07, 2012, 07:42:02 AM

Bahut Bahut Khooob laaiba Ji..

Khaas Taur Par Yeh As'haar bahut Khoobsurat Hai..


"Tum juda Ho Jaate Ho Jab Bhi Mujhse
 Sab Se To Milte Milte Thak Jaati Hun"

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
bohat bohat shukria aapka khwaish jee...
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«Reply #12 on: June 09, 2012, 03:39:18 PM »
Quote from: mkv on June 07, 2012, 05:33:40 PM
Bahut khoob Laaiba jee
Kaafi farq aa gaya hai.. kalaam dar kalaam improvement saaf dikh raha hai..thoda spelling mistakes par aur dhyaan de.
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shukria aapkaa mkv jee ... jee zaroor dhiyan doongee...
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