The Love Story of 'The Moon'... ...Saavan...

by Saavan on May 25, 2015, 03:44:54 AM
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Aie Chand Tu ‘Ro’ raha hai, Tujhe kya ho gaya hai...?
Sitaro se bhare iss Jaha me Tera Kya Kho gaya hai..?

Iss Rang-Birangi Duniya me Kya Khamosh rahna Tujhe Bhata hai?
Jab bhi Dekhta hu tujhe... Tu Akela hi kyu najar aata hai?

Tu jagta hai kyu.. Jab sara Jag.. So jata hai?
Kyu Tanhaiyo ko Tu apni Mahfile banata ha?

Her Roj Alag Andaz me Tu aise kyu nikalta hai?
Itna Vishal hai ye ‘Aasma’ fir bhi... Tu Ek hi Raah pe kyu chalta hai?

Badlo se Ghira rahta hai Tu her pal.. Fir kyu teri Pyas hai Baki?
Sab-Kuchh to hai tere Pass.. Fir kyu Teri Talash hai Baki..?

Apne bare me Ab Tak hume Tune kuchh bhi to na Bataya..!
Kaun hai Tu, Kaha rahta hai, Kya Aarzu hai teri Kuchh bhi to na Jataya!!

Sunker Uski Baat.. ‘Chand’ bola...
Iss Bhid bhari Duniya me Tumhara her Jazbat mujhe Sachha laga!
Meri  Khamoshiyo  ki Awaj Sun..na chahte Tum..Ye Janker Achha laga..!!

Jiske Dum se Raushan hai ye JaHa.. Usi ka ik Chhota sa Hissa Hu!
Kudrat ne jise apni Badnasibi me Likkha tha.. Mai wo ‘Khushnasib’ Kissa Hu!!

Samay ki Bedard Choto se Toda gaya Sitara Hu..!
Niyati Ki Jimmedariyo Se Bandha hu.. Fir Bhi mai Aawara Hu!!
Jindagi Ki Raho me.. Jo kabhi her Kadam pe mere saath chala karte the,
Aaj Unki Parchhaiya hi meri Manjile hai!
Mai Kabhi ‘Mahfilo me Tanha’ hua kerta tha, Aaj ‘Tanhaiya’ hi meri Mahfile hai..!!

Haa.. Ye Sach hai ki ‘Hushn ke Badlo’ se ghira rahta hu mai her pal!
Unki Nadaniyo se mere Mann me bhi hoti hai Halchal..!!

Per kya Gum ko Rota hua dekhker.. Kabhi  Khushi Muskurayi hai..?
Jao Sagar se Poochho.. Kya Uske ‘Khare Jal’ ne Kabhi Kisi ‘insaa..’ ki Pyas bujhayi hai?

Iss Ajnabi si Duniya me Jo dilati thi.. Mujhe ‘Apnatva’ ka Ehsaas!
Meri ‘Asfaltao ki Aandhi’ me Gum ho jane wali.. Uss ‘Boond’ ki hai Mujhe Talash..!!

Mai Akela nahi rahta hu.. Tumhari Aankho me ‘Rashmo-Riwazo’ ki Dhul hai..!
Jise Tum log Chand pe laga ‘Dhabba’ samjhte ho.. Wo meri ‘Yaado Ka Muskata hua’ ‘Fool’ hai!!

Gum ke nahi ye Aansu hai Khushi ke, Jo Door se hi Najar ate hai!
Jab bhi kabhi ‘UNKE’ Astitva se Roobaru hota hu mai.. Khud-ba-Khud Chhalak Jate hai!!

Mujhe Dhudhne me kisi ko ‘koi Taqlif’ na ho.. isiliye Hamesha Ek hi Raah pe Chalta hu..!
‘Tum jaise Musafir’  Apni Raahe na Bhatak Jaye..Bas isiliye Sari Rat.. Mai ‘Chirago’ ki tarah Jalta hu!!

Saavansahib...
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«Reply #1 on: May 25, 2015, 03:51:38 AM »
Nice
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«Reply #2 on: May 25, 2015, 04:48:44 AM »
shri saavan ji very nice but too long, Applause :clap

प्रस्तुत है कुछ पंक्तिया चंदा मामा के बारे में जो छोटे बच्चो के लिए लिखी थी
चंदा मामा पहन पायजामा
पहुचे अपनी सुसराल
बड़ी साली ने पलंग बिछाया
छोटी साली ने बिछोना
सासु माँ ये बोली चंदा से
रात भर सफर किया आसमान में
अब पेर फैला कर सोना
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«Reply #3 on: May 25, 2015, 05:34:26 AM »
 Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: May 25, 2015, 05:40:36 AM »
 Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: May 25, 2015, 06:18:49 AM »
bahut bada likha hai lekin kamaal likha hai, bahut hi khoobsoorat andaaz hai aapka, lajawab
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«Reply #6 on: May 25, 2015, 06:46:43 AM »
Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #7 on: May 25, 2015, 09:06:50 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #8 on: May 25, 2015, 11:50:37 AM »
waaah waaah waaah bohat hi khubsurat peshkash 
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«Reply #9 on: May 25, 2015, 03:27:27 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: May 25, 2015, 03:50:39 PM »
 Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Thumbs UP
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«Reply #11 on: May 25, 2015, 04:06:17 PM »
Saavan Sahib bahut bahut sunder likhaa hai aapne, lambaa hai to kyaa huaa, main ne theek se parhhaa hai iss ko, it is very compelling and absorbing. Dheron daad aur Rau for you.
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«Reply #12 on: May 25, 2015, 05:46:46 PM »
Sabhi ka Tahe Dil se Shukriya..

Thanks for showing patience for this much long poem..
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«Reply #13 on: May 25, 2015, 07:13:04 PM »
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waah waah waah waah Saavan ji, kyaa kehne, bade hi khoobsoorat andaaz mein aapse ise likhaa hai, padhtaa gaya aur is mein jaise behtaa chalaa gayaa, humein aapki yeh rachnaa bahut bahut pasand aayi hai, tofhe ke taur par aaj kaa RAU aapke naam, bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne....!!!
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