....~~The Pain of night~~....

by HumTum on March 09, 2005, 02:08:57 PM
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Watch as this tear falls into empty space
See it fall into life's nameless place

Can you see the sparkle as it catches the light
That sparkle once was happiness that is no longer in sight

As it falls watch it, its color has changed
From blue to bright red, it has a wide range

A shudder, a scream, darkness envelops your soul
The darkness of the night has taken its toll ....

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«Reply #1 on: March 10, 2005, 07:51:05 AM »
Gud work HumTum
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«Reply #2 on: March 10, 2005, 09:00:19 AM »
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Gud work HumTum


Thanks Dhadkan...:D
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«Reply #3 on: March 10, 2005, 09:11:20 AM »
Beautiful work hum tum.

Tanha ratein,tanha batein,
kab ayengi pyar ki ratein,
dard ab saha nahi jaata,
tumse door raha nahi jaata,
ek dard ek kasak hai dil me,
tu hi tu meri manzil hai.
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«Reply #4 on: March 10, 2005, 10:11:53 AM »
Wah Nidhi Superb...
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«Reply #5 on: March 10, 2005, 10:17:09 AM »
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Beautiful work hum tum.

Tanha ratein,tanha batein,
kab ayengi pyar ki ratein,
dard ab saha nahi jaata,
tumse door raha nahi jaata,
ek dard ek kasak hai dil me,
tu hi tu meri manzil hai.


wah nidhi ji Amazing lines.......

kabhi to ghar ki fiza mujhko khushgawar miley
tere labo pe tabassum nazar mein pyaar miley

hamari jaddo jehad thi fakat tere waastey
aasaan raastey to mujhko behisaab miley...

HumTum
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«Reply #6 on: March 10, 2005, 02:07:16 PM »
Quote from: "dhadkan"
Wah Nidhi Superb...


Thanx Dhadkan.
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«Reply #7 on: March 10, 2005, 02:13:24 PM »
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Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
Beautiful work hum tum.

Tanha ratein,tanha batein,
kab ayengi pyar ki ratein,
dard ab saha nahi jaata,
tumse door raha nahi jaata,
ek dard ek kasak hai dil me,
tu hi tu meri manzil hai.


wah nidhi ji Amazing lines.......

kabhi to ghar ki fiza mujhko khushgawar miley
tere labo pe tabassum nazar mein pyaar miley

hamari jaddo jehad thi fakat tere waastey
aasaan raastey to mujhko behisaab miley...

HumTum


thanx a lot Humtum.u 2 wrote wonderful  tongue3
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«Reply #8 on: March 10, 2005, 03:15:58 PM »
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Beautiful work hum tum.

Tanha ratein,tanha batein,
kab ayengi pyar ki ratein,
dard ab saha nahi jaata,
tumse door raha nahi jaata,
ek dard ek kasak hai dil me,
tu hi tu meri manzil hai.


wah nidhi ji Amazing lines.......

kabhi to ghar ki fiza mujhko khushgawar miley
tere labo pe tabassum nazar mein pyaar miley

hamari jaddo jehad thi fakat tere waastey
aasaan raastey to mujhko behisaab miley...

HumTum


thanx a lot Humtum.you 2 wrote wonderful  tongue3


Shukriya hi Shukriya....:D
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