The Punishment

by myheart_ursonly on March 07, 2005, 02:13:24 PM
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"The Punishment"
by Amit

Thirsty for her love,
yearning for her touch,
burying his work,
he wails for his mate.
Passing every moment in her feelings,
oh! his foolish fate.
Drunk with the fear of society,
she doesn't seem to listen.
He falls,
and gets hit.
He cannot live,
but he will not die.
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sanya310
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«Reply #1 on: March 07, 2005, 02:47:12 PM »
sad5 kitna sad
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«Reply #2 on: March 07, 2005, 03:16:23 PM »
Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"
"The Punishment"
by Amit

Thirsty for her love,
yearning for her touch,
burying his work,
he wails for his mate.
Passing every moment in her feelings,
oh! his foolish fate.
Drunk with the fear of society,
she doesn't seem to listen.
He falls,
and gets hit.
He cannot live,
but he will not die.


gud one...................... :cry:
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Meena
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«Reply #3 on: March 07, 2005, 04:36:50 PM »
wahhh heart bohot hi touchy peom hai!!! u know how to express ur feelings!! really gud!

 :D
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«Reply #4 on: March 07, 2005, 04:56:14 PM »
aha......kya baat hai.Good one amit. Usual Smile
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #5 on: March 07, 2005, 06:26:56 PM »

Sanya,

Thank you for the comment, it was the sad one, I don't write sad stuff much, so it was not very good as a poem.

Pandit,

Thank you.

Meena,

It came straight from my heart. It was based on what I was feeling today. So, you are very much right, it is touching. Thank you, for saying that my writing(s) are expressive.

Nidhi,

Thank you.
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