Thodi peene de……….Sahal:Shayri-E-Dard

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Thodi peene de……….Sahal

Rok lo ab hamein ,itni peene se,
Ke aag jal uthi hai, mere seene me.

Ghut ghut ke ab jiya na jaaye gaa,
Ke marna behter hai ,aise jeene se.

Kya ilaaj karte hum is dard–e-musalsal ka,
Ke marham bhi ye kehta hai,ise thodi peene de.

Jin ki chahat mein ye haal hua mera,
Wo khush lag rahe hai chnd maheene se.

Na shouk raha saaqi,ab na hosh raha baaki,”Sahal”,
ke bichhad gaya hoon main apne safeene se.


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Re: Thodi peene de……….Sahal

«Reply #1 on: April 03, 2013, 07:07:16 PM »

Quote from: sahal on April 03, 2013, 07:04:49 PM


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Re: Thodi peene de……….Sahal

«Reply #2 on: April 03, 2013, 07:11:25 PM »

Quote from: sahal on April 03, 2013, 07:04:49 PM

adil sb ne teek kaha... aakhri line se kameene nikal do.. badnaseeb word teek
laga to edit kardena plz.

bahut acha likha hai aapne Applause


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Re: Thodi peene de……….Sahal

«Reply #3 on: April 03, 2013, 07:15:23 PM »

shukriya Adil sahab aur suman jii ,,maine change kar diya hai.


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Re: Thodi peene de……….Sahal

«Reply #4 on: April 03, 2013, 07:18:55 PM »

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Na shouk raha saaqi,ab na hosh raha baaki,”Sahal”,
ke bichhad gaya hoon main apne safeene se.

thank you sahal jee Usual Smile


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Re: Thodi peene de……….Sahal

«Reply #5 on: April 03, 2013, 07:24:55 PM »

Quote from: suman59 on April 03, 2013, 07:18:55 PM

thank you sahal jee Usual Smile

suman je


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Re: Thodi peene de……….Sahal

«Reply #6 on: April 03, 2013, 07:25:43 PM »

Sahal Sahaab Aadaab!

Bahut khoob janab achchi riNdana kalaam rahi... AshaaroN ke khayaal khoob rahe..
Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye.... Aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...


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Re: Thodi peene de……….Sahal

«Reply #7 on: April 03, 2013, 07:27:22 PM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on April 03, 2013, 07:25:43 PM

bohut bohut shukriya parwaaz sahab...
Thankyou !


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Re: Thodi peene de……….Sahal

«Reply #8 on: April 03, 2013, 07:30:57 PM »

So Nice


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Re: Thodi peene de……….Sahal

«Reply #9 on: April 03, 2013, 07:40:00 PM »

Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on April 03, 2013, 07:30:57 PM

So Nice

Advo


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Re: Thodi peene de……….Sahal

«Reply #10 on: April 03, 2013, 07:55:41 PM »

waah waah waah


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Re: Thodi peene de……….Sahal

«Reply #11 on: April 03, 2013, 08:01:02 PM »

Quote from: Bhupinder Kaur on April 03, 2013, 07:55:41 PM

waah waah waah

bhupinder kaur ji


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Re: Thodi peene de……….Sahal

«Reply #12 on: April 03, 2013, 08:29:52 PM »

Quote from: sahal on April 03, 2013, 07:04:49 PM

Thodi peene de……….Sahal

Rok lo ab hamein ,itni peene se,
Ke aag jal uthi hai, mere seene me.
khud aql nahin hai kya , nahin peena chaahiye . main kyon rokoon gi peeo ya usi mein doob jaao meri bala se
Ghut ghut ke ab jiya na jaaye gaa,
Ke marna behter hai ,aise jeene se.
smoking free area mein ghar le lo. ghutan khatam ho jaaye gi aur kya
Kya ilaaj karte hum is dard–e-musalsal ka,
Ke marham bhi ye kehta hai,ise thodi peene de.
yaani doctor aur dawa dono hi laailaaj bann chuke hain ALLAH khair kare
Jin ki chahat mein ye haal hua mera,
Wo khush lag rahe hai chnd maheene se.
main to hamesha se hi khush hoon ji
Na shouk raha saaqi,ab na hosh raha baaki,”Sahal”,
ke bichhad gaya hoon main apne safeene se.

kashti pe sawaar ho jaao sahauk phir se jaag uthe ga aakhir dono hi to dariya mein chalte hain

wah wah.........!


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Re: Thodi peene de……….Sahal

«Reply #13 on: April 03, 2013, 08:34:06 PM »

Quote from: Sheba on April 03, 2013, 08:29:52 PM

wah wah.........!

sheba ji


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Re: Thodi peene de……….Sahal

«Reply #14 on: April 03, 2013, 09:58:04 PM »

वाह वाह।।। शाहिल साहब बहोत खूब।।। Applause

शामे ग़म कैसे कटे ऐसा क्या किया जाए
तमाम ज़ख्म को फिरसे रफ़ू किया जाए
ना हो शराब तो बस रख लो सागरो-मीना
लबों से गर ना सही आंख से पिया जाए
तमाम उम्र जो गुजरी शराबखाने में
उसीकी याद 'अदब' दिल में भर लिया जाये


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