To Ye Bhi Likhna...

by angel4u on September 05, 2008, 02:19:22 PM
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Udasiyon Ka Sabab Jo Likhna
To Ye Bhi Likhna,
Ke Chand Taare Shahab Aankhein Bandal Gaye Hai,
Wo Zinda Lamhe Jo Teri Raahon Mein,
Tere Aane Ke Muntazir Thi,
Wo Thak Ke Saayon Mein Dhal Gayi Hai,
Wo Teri Yaadein, Khayal Rahe, Wo Ranj Tere, Malaal Tere,
Wo Teri Aankhein, Wo Sawal Tere,
Wo Tumse Meri Tamaam Rishte Bichhad Gaye Hai, Ujad Gaye Hai,
Udaasiyon Ka Sabab Jo Likhna,
To Ye Bhi Likhna,
Larazte Honthon Pe Ladkhadate Duak Soruj
Pighal Gaye Hai...


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Muhammed
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«Reply #1 on: September 06, 2008, 06:58:16 AM »
Jee...
bahot hi khoob hai is liye ki kuch judah hi Andaaz se Likha hai
aur
Badhiya is liye ki Isko Angel ne share kiya hai jiska saani-e-Ahl-e-sharing Yoindia pe koi nahi hein........!!!!!!
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baadal102
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«Reply #2 on: September 06, 2008, 09:14:33 AM »
aache sharing hai angel ji
thanx



baadal
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angel4u
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«Reply #3 on: September 06, 2008, 12:36:33 PM »
Quote from: Muhammed on September 06, 2008, 06:58:16 AM
Jee...
bahot hi khoob hai is liye ki kuch judah hi Andaaz se Likha hai
aur
Badhiya is liye ki Isko Angel ne share kiya hai jiska saani-e-Ahl-e-sharing Yoindia pe koi nahi hein........!!!!!!


OHOOOOO itna bhi ped pe mat chadao.. Usual Smile

thanks padhne ke liye Usual Smile aur taarif karne ke liye to usse bhi zyada thanks Usual Smile
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angel4u
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«Reply #4 on: September 06, 2008, 12:36:50 PM »
Thanks a lot Baadal ji Usual Smile
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Muhammed
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«Reply #5 on: September 09, 2008, 04:24:02 AM »
Quote from: angel4u on September 06, 2008, 12:36:33 PM
OHOOOOO itna bhi ped pe mat chadao.. Usual Smile

thanks padhne ke liye Usual Smile aur taarif karne ke liye to usse bhi zyada thanks Usual Smile

aap ped ki baat se daraa karte ho
Huzena!Palko pe chadaya hai aap ko
Na Ho khaufzadah aap,,aankhein aur Nind ko Lekar
Palko par Maine Pyas k Pehre Jo Lagaaye Diye hai....
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angel4u
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«Reply #6 on: September 09, 2008, 01:48:21 PM »
Quote from: Muhammed on September 09, 2008, 04:24:02 AM
aap ped ki baat se daraa karte ho
Huzena!Palko pe chadaya hai aap ko
Na Ho khaufzadah aap,,aankhein aur Nind ko Lekar
Palko par Maine Pyas k Pehre Jo Lagaaye Diye hai....

Bahut khoob..

Palkein to uthti bhi hia girti bhi hia,
Palkein kabhi kabhi bhaari bhi lagti hai,
Jo jagah deni hai to aankhon mein de dijiye,
Jo har ashqon ke moti mein bhi muskura leti hai...
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Muhammed
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«Reply #7 on: September 10, 2008, 04:01:53 AM »
jee mohtarma aap k yeh sher k jawaab ko main kaassir hun ki mujhe kuch is baat ka zarra baraabar bhi Kataee Ilm nahi ki shayri kya hai..sirf khalis mazaheebi shariyat si tabiyat rakhta hun sher-o-sukhan me..to aap jaisa ashaar likhna mumkeen nahi mujhse al mukhtasar..bara-e-qaram maaf kigiyega...jo jawab de na saka ! Filhal " aap Ko aankhon Mein Markaz-e-Nazar bana kar rakha hai Maine "..   
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angel4u
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«Reply #8 on: September 10, 2008, 01:55:10 PM »
oho ye t badi baat keh di aapne...
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Muhammed
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«Reply #9 on: September 11, 2008, 04:10:48 AM »
Chaliye Is Thread par Aakhri Comment de deta hun..

Mubaaraq baad dena chata hun aapko..Is baat k Liye Ki...aapne 20,000 Se Zayad Posting ki...Kitna Mushqeel Hota Hai Kisi Nazm Ya Ashaar ko Likhna Fir Us par bhi Nazar-e-Saani Karna Kahin Galati Na Ho,KIsi Jumle kisi k Khilaaf Na Ho..Itna Waqt Surf Karna..To Mere Nazariye se Sirf Yeh Kaam Wohi Log Kar Sakte Hai JIsko Rab Tab'aaraq Va Ta'alaa Ne apni Khaas Tawwajoh Se Nawaaza Hai...

Jee Dil se Mubaaraq Baadi Deta Hun aapko aur yeh duaein ki aap sadaa Muskuraate Raho isi Se saari Qaayen'at ko Jagmagaate Raho.aamin.
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angel4u
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«Reply #10 on: September 14, 2008, 12:17:44 PM »
Bahut bahut shukriya Muhammad ji...
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