~*~Tod Kar Mera Dil, Muskurane Wale~*~:Shayri-E-Dard

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Friends Ye Thread Mujhe Ek Thread Padhate Huye Dil Me Aayi,Kuch Likhane Ki Koshish Ki Hai Ummid Hai Pasand Aayegi
Jis Thread Se Mujhe Iski Theme Mili Uska Link Niche De Raha Hun
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shayeri-for-dard-e-bewafai/tod-ke-mera-dil-muskurane-wale-t44708.0.html


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Re: ~*~Tod Kar Mera Dil, Muskurane Wale~*~

«Reply #1 on: March 23, 2009, 12:05:12 PM »

Bhai please jara bina tasvir key bhi post kar doh ...

hum budey ho chukey hai
aakhoh sey abb nazar nahi aata
itna pyara likhtey ho tum PANK
par humsey hai ki kuch pada nahi jata

jasbir singh


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Re: ~*~Tod Kar Mera Dil, Muskurane Wale~*~

«Reply #2 on: March 23, 2009, 12:08:41 PM »

nice posting, magar padrne mein dihkkat huwee, aapka font color is blending with the picture...


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Re: ~*~Tod Kar Mera Dil, Muskurane Wale~*~

«Reply #3 on: March 23, 2009, 12:09:23 PM »

Tod kar mera dil, muskurane wale...
Kya khoob the vo muhabbat nibhane wale...

Le gaye sara chain is dil ka dekar gam kitne...
Aaj shayad khush hai vo, mujhpar har ilzam lagane wale...

Laga kar dil ka rog aaj mujhe akela kar gaye...
Yaad kyun aate hain aaj bhi, do pal me mujhe bhul jane wale...

Is dard se achha maut aa jati mujhe...
Dil se baddua bhi na de paye, meri maut ki khwahish jatane wale...

Aaj yaad karke vo zamana, dil kahin kho jata hai...
Udaas toh honge shayad vo bhi, meri dastaan sunane wale...

Ya shayad badal gaye waqt ke sath,
Mere pahalu me ek waqt beetane wale...
~Pank~


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jasbirsingh

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Re: ~*~Tod Kar Mera Dil, Muskurane Wale~*~

«Reply #4 on: March 23, 2009, 12:12:12 PM »

wah wah wah, bahut khoob Pank, wah

Jasbir SIngh


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pankshivam

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Re: ~*~Tod Kar Mera Dil, Muskurane Wale~*~

«Reply #5 on: March 23, 2009, 12:15:47 PM »

Shukriya Jas Ji
Shukriya AD ji


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Roja

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Re: ~*~Tod Kar Mera Dil, Muskurane Wale~*~

«Reply #6 on: March 23, 2009, 03:04:15 PM »

Quote from: pankshivam on March 23, 2009, 12:09:23 PM

Tod kar mera dil, muskurane wale...
Kya khoob the vo muhabbat nibhane wale...

Le gaye sara chain is dil ka dekar gam kitne...
Aaj shayad khush hai vo, mujhpar har ilzam lagane wale...

Laga kar dil ka rog aaj mujhe akela kar gaye...
Yaad kyun aate hain aaj bhi, do pal me mujhe bhul jane wale...

Is dard se achha maut aa jati mujhe...
Dil se baddua bhi na de paye, meri maut ki khwahish jatane wale...

Aaj yaad us zamane ko, dil kho jata hai...
Udaas toh honge shayad vo bhi, meri dastaan sunane wale...

Ya shayad badal gaye waqt ke sath,
Mere pahalu me ek waqt beetane wale...
~Pank~

Wah Pank ji... bahut khoob... bahut khoob


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pankshivam

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Re: ~*~Tod Kar Mera Dil, Muskurane Wale~*~

«Reply #7 on: March 23, 2009, 06:06:42 PM »

Quote from: Roja on March 23, 2009, 03:04:15 PM

Wah Pank ji... bahut khoob... bahut khoob

Shuriya Rojaji


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: ~*~Tod Kar Mera Dil, Muskurane Wale~*~

«Reply #8 on: March 23, 2009, 06:18:29 PM »

Wah! Shivam Ji Bahut Khoob likha aap ne


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pankshivam

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Re: ~*~Tod Kar Mera Dil, Muskurane Wale~*~

«Reply #9 on: March 23, 2009, 06:24:48 PM »

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on March 23, 2009, 06:18:29 PM

Wah! Shivam Ji Bahut Khoob likha aap ne

Shukriya Rajesh Ji


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Re: ~*~Tod Kar Mera Dil, Muskurane Wale~*~

«Reply #10 on: March 24, 2009, 02:31:22 AM »

bahut achhe Pank ji...

mere daaman ko bhi nahi pehchante hia wo,
inme senkdon jhilmilate aansu bahanewale,

kya pyaar ki saza bewafayi hi hoti hai,
kaise bhool jaate hai har saans mein samanewale...


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Re: ~*~Tod Kar Mera Dil, Muskurane Wale~*~

«Reply #11 on: March 24, 2009, 04:57:55 AM »

Quote from: pankshivam on March 23, 2009, 12:01:47 PM

Bahut Bahut Khoob Pankji..Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Nazm Likhi Hai aapne..bahut ache.


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Re: ~*~Tod Kar Mera Dil, Muskurane Wale~*~

«Reply #12 on: March 24, 2009, 05:02:00 AM »

Quote from: angel4u on March 24, 2009, 02:31:22 AM

bahut achhe Pank ji...

mere daaman ko bhi nahi pehchante hia wo,
inme senkdon jhilmilate aansu bahanewale,

kya pyaar ki saza bewafayi hi hoti hai,
kaise bhool jaate hai har saans mein samanewale...

Wah Wah!! Bahut Khoob Angel..

Mere Aansuu Unke Daaman Par Sitaare Ban Gaye!!!
Kaun Kehta Hai Ki Yuh Rone Se Kuch Haasil Nahi..


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Re: ~*~Tod Kar Mera Dil, Muskurane Wale~*~

«Reply #13 on: March 24, 2009, 08:39:44 AM »

I am new here. Many many thanks for your support. May i be your buddy. And at last thanks alot .


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pankshivam

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Re: ~*~Tod Kar Mera Dil, Muskurane Wale~*~

«Reply #14 on: March 24, 2009, 05:04:31 PM »

Quote from: angel4u on March 24, 2009, 02:31:22 AM

bahut achhe Pank ji...

mere daaman ko bhi nahi pehchante hain wo,
inme senkdon jhilmilate aansu bahanewale,

kya pyaar ki saza bewafayi hi hoti hai,
kaise bhool jaate hai har saans mein samanewale...

Shukriya Angleji
Bahoot khoob Likha aapne
Is Post Ki Raunak Aur bhi Badh Gayi Aapke Kalam Se
Shukriya


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