toh nahin achcha...mann

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iss tarah dil tod jana toh nahin achcha.
chahne walon ko satana toh nahin achcha.

muktasar tahreer mari koi na samjh paya,
ham-juban bankar yun bhulana toh nahin achcha.

tariquiyan meri mujhse kahtin hain bar bar,
raushni se ruth jana toh nahin achcha.

ban jata ek mera bhi mukammal jahan,
umra bhar ko khanabadosh ho jana toh nahin achcha.

waqt ki nazakat ko kaun kab samjhta hai,
yun waqt se ulajhna toh nahin achcha.

mom ka dil lekar "mann" aag ki duniya ki sair,
itni nadani se jeena toh nahin achcha.

mann
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«Reply #1 on: April 02, 2012, 04:21:35 AM »
"Itnee naadaanee se jee paanaa to naheen achhaa" waah waah mann ji is behtreen peshkash par daad haazir hai
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«Reply #2 on: April 02, 2012, 04:27:34 AM »
bahut bahut dhanyawad janab sainiji...

yun hi diayen dete rahiye...
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«Reply #3 on: April 02, 2012, 05:25:39 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: April 02, 2012, 10:20:45 AM »
Mann Jee Aadaab!


Bahut khoob janab bahut khoob ... behad achche
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«Reply #5 on: April 02, 2012, 10:39:02 AM »
Quote from: mann.mann on April 02, 2012, 04:10:23 AM
iss tarah dil tod jana toh nahin achcha.
chahne walon ko satana toh nahin achcha.

muktasar tahreer mari koi na samjh paya,
ham-juban bankar yun bhulana toh nahin achcha.

tariquiyan meri mujhse kahtin hain bar bar,
raushni se ruth jana toh nahin achcha.

ban jata ek mera bhi mukammal jahan,
umra bhar ko khanabadosh ho jana toh nahin achcha.

waqt ki nazakat ko kaun kab samjhta hai,
yun waqt se ulajhna toh nahin achcha.

mom ka dil lekar "mann" aag ki duniya ki sair,
itni nadani se jeena toh nahin achcha.

mann


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«Reply #6 on: April 02, 2012, 11:46:37 AM »
bahut shukriya aatishji
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«Reply #7 on: April 02, 2012, 11:48:17 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya parwaazji... aapne apna kimati waqt diya....

yunhi sath dete rahiyega...
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«Reply #8 on: April 02, 2012, 11:49:31 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya qalbji....

aapki taaliyan beshkimati hain mere lie...
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«Reply #9 on: April 03, 2012, 03:27:01 AM »
shukriya shihabji
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«Reply #10 on: April 03, 2012, 03:28:51 AM »
bohut khoob mann sahab
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«Reply #11 on: April 03, 2012, 03:31:40 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya saahilji
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«Reply #12 on: April 04, 2012, 08:29:47 AM »
bahut khoob likha hai.Maqta bahut pyara laga.Bahut mubarakbaad.
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«Reply #13 on: April 04, 2012, 11:10:09 AM »
kya baat hai...bohat khoob :D
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«Reply #14 on: April 04, 2012, 11:42:53 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya hasan saheb
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