tohfe..!

by nishita on April 03, 2005, 10:08:21 AM
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Talat
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«Reply #45 on: April 09, 2005, 03:18:04 PM »
Thx Pandit n Qutub ji!!

ye zindagi nahi hai meri, ye to bus ek afsana hai
kab tak jiyega koi, ek din to akhir jana hai

meri zindagi ka her ek pal tujh se tha juda hua
ab to lagta hai aise jaise ye sab fasana hai!!!

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pandit
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«Reply #46 on: April 09, 2005, 03:26:52 PM »
yaad e dibar ko kabhi afsana  na samajh,
pyaar tera haquikat hai isse koi sapana na samajh,
apni zindagi se unn udaas hone wale,
i9ss thodi si judai ko zindagi ki tanhai na samajh.
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Talat
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«Reply #47 on: April 09, 2005, 03:30:47 PM »
Tanhaai muqaddar me likh gayi aise
sath chalti hon parchaaiyaan jaise
Ab to aadat si ho gayi hai ashk peene ki
saanse aati bhi hain, ruk gayi hon jaise!!!!!
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bond
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«Reply #48 on: April 09, 2005, 04:00:58 PM »
nice all.......

hai mujhey pata k e tu bewafa nahi...
teri bhi koi apni majboori rahi hogi....
ajnabi ban kar hi sahi, hum milenge fir..
woh mulakat jaroor kabhi na kabhi hogi...

BOND
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #49 on: April 09, 2005, 05:12:42 PM »
Good job Talat ... Pandit ...Bond ...
Keep going ...
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Qutubuddin
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«Reply #50 on: April 10, 2005, 06:21:40 AM »
Well said all..

Great and good...

"
Tanhaai muqaddar me likh gayi aise
sath chalti hon parchaaiyaan jaise
Ab to aadat si ho gayi hai ashk peene ki
saanse aati bhi hain, ruk gayi hon jaise!!!!!
"
Talat.. Good one...

Ques...
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Talat
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«Reply #51 on: April 10, 2005, 10:47:13 AM »
Thanks Raj... JHL.. Qutub ji!!!

Dhoka tha nigaahon ka magar khoob tha dhoka
Mujh ko teri nazron main mohabbat nazar aayi !!

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Qutubuddin
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«Reply #52 on: April 10, 2005, 10:53:05 AM »
Very Well said Talat..

Mujh ko teri nazron main mohabbat nazar aayi !!

good continuation..

Ques...
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #53 on: April 10, 2005, 11:47:11 AM »
very  nice  work...........qutubuddin   bhai.....talat...

Khush Nahi Houn To Dukh Nahi Rehta
Na Milay Gham To Khush Nahi Rehta
Na Khudaoun Kay Simt Kiya Jhukna ?
Aisay Sajdoun Ka Rukh Nahi Rehta .........nm
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pandit
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«Reply #54 on: April 10, 2005, 11:52:34 AM »
w2ah waheed ji............................................... ................................................. .
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Qutubuddin
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«Reply #55 on: April 10, 2005, 11:57:04 AM »
Well said waheed..


Ques...

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nishita
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«Reply #56 on: April 11, 2005, 06:44:48 AM »
waah talat ..pandit bond and waheed Usual Smile good work all

Woh dard mera sunte sunte
yadoon mein apni khone lage
woh dil ki baat kehte kehte
aakhon se apni behne lage
Jisne murd kar poocha nahin
kyon uska intzar hai
jo rishta kabhi bana nahin
kyon uss par aetbaar hai...

 
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Qutubuddin
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«Reply #57 on: April 11, 2005, 06:52:34 AM »
Bahot khoob Nishita..


"
Jisne murd kar poocha nahin
kyon uska intzar hai
jo rishta kabhi bana nahin
kyon uss par aetbaar hai...
"

Ques...
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jogesh
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«Reply #58 on: April 11, 2005, 07:49:44 AM »
very fine,i really like it but i Think never firgive ur love , make it ur by hook or crook
,love cabt be over after    one's marriage  it remain forever if one has ability to do this
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thycreator
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«Reply #59 on: April 11, 2005, 05:14:03 PM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Good work all!!!!

Zindagi ka bojh uthaaye na uthe hai
Aahon me apni hasti doobi rahe hai
kaisi chubhan kaisi khalish si rehti hai
Jaane kis safar pe hum chale hain


Nice talat ji,
Galti toh apki ki hi hai jo tanha ho safar mein,
Koi hath badhata hai par tum thamte nahi....
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