Toote Apne Sitaare Kyun,.{AS}

by Jaanasheen on December 16, 2012, 11:05:01 AM
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Doston, Aaj Maine Unki Nayi Tasweer Dekhi, Bohat Dino Baad, Aur Dil Dukha Bohat Unhe Dekhar,.
Aur Khud Ko Rok Na Paaye, Bas Yunhi Baithe Baithe, Kuch Likh Daala, Apni Bebasi Pe,.
 
Tumse Mohabbat Jo Bardh Gayi,.
Phir Toote,  Apne Sitaare Kyun,.

Tum Bhi Na Haath Aaye,.
Aur Chootte Hamaare Sahaare Kyun,.

Hume Agar Hona Hi Tha Judaa,.
To Humne Itne Pal Saath Guzaare Kyun,.

Kyun Hue Hum Ajnabi, Itne Kareeb Aakar,.
Hue Itne Bure Haalaat Hamaare Kyun,.

Jab Jaana Hi Tha Aapko Hamaari Zindagi Se,.
To Murd Kar Hume "Meri Jaan", Pukaare Kyun,.

-Azeem Aarzu,.



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«Reply #1 on: December 16, 2012, 11:53:35 AM »
nice. felt sad.


hamare kismat mein hai wo to aayegi zindagi bankar
na aaye to yeh bi kismat ka khel hai samajkar jeena seekho

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«Reply #2 on: December 16, 2012, 12:16:42 PM »

Samajh me nahi aa rahaa ki aapki poetry ki tareef karuN ya aap par jo gujar rahi hai, use sunkar jo dukh ho rahaa hai uske baare me kuch kahooN.
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«Reply #3 on: December 16, 2012, 06:30:10 PM »
ab to duaaoN ka hi sahaara hai.

Bas aas nahee chornee hai, aasha hi jeevan hai
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«Reply #4 on: December 16, 2012, 06:43:52 PM »
sacche pyar aur dil se nikli dua mein bahut taakat hoti h mkv ji...
bas hum hi khuch accha nahi soch paate waqt k utaar -chadaav mein...
ye dard ka daur bhi guzar jaayega azeem ji...God bless u
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«Reply #5 on: December 16, 2012, 08:37:05 PM »
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nice. felt sad.


hamare kismat mein hai wo to aayegi zindagi bankar
na aaye to yeh bi kismat ka khel hai samajkar jeena seekho


Inshallah Hum Milenge, Behna Duaa Karein Ke Hamari Mulakhaat Jald Ho Allah Hume Milaaye,.
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«Reply #6 on: December 17, 2012, 04:13:37 AM »
bahut khoob likha hai aapne Azeem ji... aapke khushiyon ke din jald laut aayen yahi duwaa karunga...!!!
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«Reply #7 on: December 19, 2012, 01:49:57 PM »

Samajh me nahi aa rahaa ki aapki poetry ki tareef karuN ya aap par jo gujar rahi hai, use sunkar jo dukh ho rahaa hai uske baare me kuch kahooN.


Bas Duaa Karein Bhai Ke Hum Jald Hi Milein Ek Dooje Se,.
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«Reply #8 on: December 20, 2012, 10:42:59 AM »
bohat khoob,............
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«Reply #9 on: December 30, 2012, 03:06:06 PM »
ab to duaaoN ka hi sahaara hai.

Bas aas nahee chornee hai, aasha hi jeevan hai

Beshaq,.
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