Toote hai Sapne...

by Pooja on June 15, 2007, 08:05:44 PM
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Apni duniya mai rahna acha lagta hai
Toote hai sapne, toote sapno sung rahna acha lagta hai

Chah badi thi dekhu is dunia ko main
Dekh kar dunia ke haal, akela rahna acha lagta hai
Toote hai sapne, toote sapno ke sung rahna acha lagta hai!!

Her koi kahe mujhko apna, per sabse mujhko ab dar lagta hai
Wo na samjhe mujhko, mai na samjhu unko, sab kuch dhoondhla dhoondhla sa lagta hai
Chahe wo bolu main bhi dunia ki boli, mujhko khud mai rahna acha lagta hai
Toote hai sapne, toote sapno ke sung rahna acha lagta hai!!

Jab soch kar agge bardi, dukh hi maine paaye hai
Shayad yah dunia mere liye nahi, na jaane kyun hum is duniya mai aaye hai
Mujhko chor kar jaana hi sabko phir acha lagta hai
Toote hai sapne, toote sapno ke sung rahna acha lagta hai!!
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Rajbir
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«Reply #1 on: June 15, 2007, 10:16:04 PM »
Pooja

Bahut gehra sach hai yeh sad5

Toote hai sapne, toote sapno ke sang rahna acha lagta hai =D>
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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: June 16, 2007, 03:46:59 AM »
thanks you veer ji.... sahi kaha..

Khud main, khud ke sath rona acha lagta hai
Soch soch kar beeti baatein khud ko rulana acha lagta hai

Kitna waqat beet gaya, waqat ke sath sath
Her waqat un baato ki soch mai waqat beetana acha lagta hai

Apni hi dunia mai rahna acha lagta hai
Toote hai sapne, toote sapno ke sung rahna acha lagta hai
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«Reply #3 on: June 17, 2007, 07:55:44 PM »
Wah Wah Kya Dard Hai Pooja Ji.. Behad Khubsoorat Rachna Pesh Ki hai aapne
Humesha Ki Tarah.. Padh kar Waqai Dard Jaag Gaya.. Lajawab Pesh kash Hai aapki.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Daad Kubool karen.. !! =D> =D> =D> =D>

Vicky.. Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: June 18, 2007, 12:50:37 PM »
Pooja di... Sach mein ek baar phir aapne bahut aasaan shabdon mein bahut gehrii baat keh di... sad5

Especially these lines...
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Chah badi thi dekhu is dunia ko main
Dekh kar dunia ke haal, akela rahna acha lagta hai
Toote hai sapne, toote sapno ke sung rahna acha lagta hai!!

Her koi kahe mujhko apna, per sabse mujhko ab dar lagta hai
Wo na samjhe mujhko, mai na samjhu unko, sab kuch dhoondhla dhoondhla sa lagta hai
Chahe wo bolu main bhi dunia ki boli, mujhko khud mai rahna acha lagta hai
Toote hai sapne, toote sapno ke sung rahna acha lagta hai!!


Bahut hi khoobsoorat kalaam laga aapka... Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: June 18, 2007, 07:39:58 PM »
BAHUT BAHUT KHOOB POOJA JI..ONE OF THE BEST AND SIMPLE SHAYARI I HAVE EVER READ

HANSTE HUE CHEHRE
KO NA SAMJHO
GHAM SE AZAAD HAI
HAZARO DARD CHUPE HAI
IS HALKI SI MUSKAAN MEIN
TOOTHE SAPNE
BIKHRE HUE KHWAISHE
YEHI TO KHOOBI HOTI HAI...
TOOTHE BIKHRE INSAAN MEIN
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«Reply #6 on: June 19, 2007, 07:01:30 AM »
Pooja ji.. ye kya likh diya aapne.. hume to isse bar bar padna accha lagta hai....
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ANKUR_CRAZY
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«Reply #7 on: June 19, 2007, 08:43:27 AM »
brilliant pooja jiiiiii......bahut accha likha hai aapne
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Pooja
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«Reply #8 on: June 26, 2007, 04:17:25 PM »
bahoot bahoot shukaria Vicky ji, Shikha, Paani ji, Khwaish ji and  Ankur the great!!
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Meena is back
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«Reply #9 on: July 18, 2007, 02:00:30 PM »
nice starting didi but i liked ur 2nd post more!!

duniya ki bheed nahin aab to tanhai apni lagti hai,
wafa to kisi ne ki nahin, aab bewafai apni lagti hai!
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«Reply #10 on: July 20, 2007, 10:02:54 PM »
thanks meena..

very nice lines!!!
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Manav Mehra
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«Reply #11 on: July 30, 2007, 02:33:57 PM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
Apni duniya mai rahna acha lagta hai
Toote hai sapne, toote sapno sung rahna acha lagta hai

Chah badi thi dekhu is dunia ko main
Dekh kar dunia ke haal, akela rahna acha lagta hai
Toote hai sapne, toote sapno ke sung rahna acha lagta hai!!

Her koi kahe mujhko apna, per sabse mujhko ab dar lagta hai
Wo na samjhe mujhko, mai na samjhu unko, sab kuch dhoondhla dhoondhla sa lagta hai
Chahe wo bolu main bhi dunia ki boli, mujhko khud mai rahna acha lagta hai
Toote hai sapne, toote sapno ke sung rahna acha lagta hai!!

Jab soch kar agge bardi, dukh hi maine paaye hai
Shayad yah dunia mere liye nahi, na jaane kyun hum is duniya mai aaye hai
Mujhko chor kar jaana hi sabko phir acha lagta hai
Toote hai sapne, toote sapno ke sung rahna acha lagta hai!!


Fabulous... bohaat achha laga aapko pard kar Pooja ji
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Pooja
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«Reply #12 on: August 07, 2007, 02:26:00 PM »
Shukaria Manav ji!!

Apni dunia mai rahna acha lagta hai
Toote hai sapne, toote sapno sung rahna acha lagta hai

Wo yaadein, wo baatein, wo hansna wo rona
Her pal tere sung jo beeta, unmain rahna acha lagta hai
Toote hai sapne, toote sapno sung rahna acha lagta hai

Haqiqat khatkhtaati hai darwaza kyun aa aa kar
Duniya samjhati hai kadvi suchaai suna suna kar
Mujhko ab bhi tere khayalo mai rahna acha lagta hai
Toote hai sapne, toote sapno sung rahna acha lagta hai

Apni dunia mai rahna acha lagta hai
Toote hai sapne, toote sapno sung rahna acha lagta hai!!
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Meena is back
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«Reply #13 on: August 08, 2007, 01:22:23 PM »
nice didi!!!

jab ishq tha tumse, to tere khayalo me khoye rehte te,
aj judai hai tumse, to nain ashkon se bigoye rhete hai!
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Talat
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«Reply #14 on: August 08, 2007, 01:56:07 PM »
Very nice ones Pooja.
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