Toote hai Sapne...

by Pooja on June 15, 2007, 08:05:44 PM
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«Reply #15 on: August 08, 2007, 01:58:22 PM »
bohot ache pooja!
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Pooja
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«Reply #16 on: August 08, 2007, 02:05:10 PM »
shukaria Talat, Sanya and Meena!!

GOOD LINES MEENA!!

Toote sapno ka dard bhulaya nahi jaata
Haqiqat ko bhi thukraya nahi jaata
Kaha jakar samjhau is dil-e-nadan ko
Jabardasti kisi se payar paya nahi jaata!!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #17 on: August 15, 2007, 03:43:39 AM »
Toote hai sapne, toote sapno ke sung rahna acha lagta hai
Ajj bhi mujhko, teri socho sung rahna acha lagta hai
Toota hai dil, dard ki lahro mai rahna acha lagta hai
Toota hai dil, magar ajj bhi khawabo main rahna acha lagta  hai
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«Reply #18 on: August 15, 2007, 04:04:31 AM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
Shukaria Manav ji!!

Apni dunia mai rahna acha lagta hai
Toote hai sapne, toote sapno sung rahna acha lagta hai

Wo yaadein, wo baatein, wo hansna wo rona
Her pal tere sung jo beeta, unmain rahna acha lagta hai
Toote hai sapne, toote sapno sung rahna acha lagta hai

Haqiqat khatkhtaati hai darwaza kyun aa aa kar
Duniya samjhati hai kadvi suchaai suna suna kar
Mujhko ab bhi tere khayalo mai rahna acha lagta hai
Toote hai sapne, toote sapno sung rahna acha lagta hai

Apni dunia mai rahna acha lagta hai
Toote hai sapne, toote sapno sung rahna acha lagta hai!!


bahut accha likha hai aapne di ... her lafz dard main dooba ...
bahut accha laga padkar.......  

Toote hai sapne... toote sapno ke sang rehna taqdeer hai hamari..!!

Na jane kaise aasman per chamakte hai tare?
Jane kyu log Mohabbat karte hai sare?
Hum to ho chuke they dilo-jaan se unke
Kya kami thi hamari wafa main jo wo na huwe hamare??
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Pooja
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«Reply #19 on: August 15, 2007, 01:53:17 PM »
bahoot bahoot shukria Roja,...

Apne bhi kamal ka likha hai...

sath mile to likhna jayada acha lagta hai...

Toote sapno ko sajati rahti hu
Khud ko de kar dhoka, behlati rahti hu
Haqiqat se nahi anjaan, magar kaya karu
Khud se haqiqat jhuthlati rahti hu !!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #20 on: August 17, 2007, 01:55:24 PM »
Toote sapno ke sung mujhko bhi bikhar jaane do
Bhatal chuki bahoot, ab chain se so jaane do
Mili kabhi jo Rub se, to puchugi kuch bhi Na usse
Mujhko meri khamoshi mainhi dauffan ho jaane do!!
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«Reply #21 on: August 17, 2007, 01:59:40 PM »
nice didi!

toota nahin karte sapno ke toot jane par,
roya nahin karte khuyion ke lut jane par,
Khuda hi jane kya kismat me likha hai "Meena",
ruhtte nahin Khuda se, uske ruth jane par!
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Pooja
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«Reply #22 on: August 17, 2007, 02:17:14 PM »
bahoot khoob Meena!!

Ruthi nahi kisi se
Bas ab thak jaane lagi
Kismat se apni
Dar jaane lagi

Dard ki yah lakeer
Mitati nahi kuch bhi kar ke
Issi liye apni khamoshi main hi
Duffan main ho jaane lagi!!!
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«Reply #23 on: August 17, 2007, 02:39:05 PM »
shukriya , nice one as well!!

tak kar aram karo magar haro mat,
zindagi ke kisi bhi raha se tum daro mat,
aaj gum hai to kal kushi bhi hogi "Pooja",
har kebaith kar tum ahen bharo mat!
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«Reply #24 on: August 17, 2007, 06:24:11 PM »
Kuch toote hue sapne reh gaye hai aankhon mein,
jiski kirchiyan chubhne lagi hai aankhon mein,
behte the jahan armaan beshumar kabhi,
aaj unki lash padi hia beqafan aankhon mein...
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«Reply #25 on: August 17, 2007, 07:16:24 PM »
SABNE BAHUT ACHA LIKHA HAI... =D>  =D>

 CHAAHAT PAR AB AITBAAR NAHI RAHA
 KHUSHI KYA HAI? AB YEH EHSAAS  NAHI RAHA
 DEKHA HAI IN AANKHON NE TOOTHE SAPNO KO
 ISLIYE AB KISI KA INTEZAR NAHI RAHA
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«Reply #26 on: August 17, 2007, 07:47:52 PM »
bahoot khoob Meena, Angle and khwaish ji....

Likhne mai sath mile to likhne ko dil karta hai......

Toot kar bhi sapne, intzaar kayun nahi jaata
Hai wo bewafa, yah dil maan kayun nahi jaata
Toot gaye khawab, chaknachoor dard se zindagi ho gai
Phir bhi is dil se, kyun uska intzaar nahi jaata!!!
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«Reply #27 on: August 17, 2007, 08:03:58 PM »
KOI NA MILA AISA JIS PE DUNIYA LUTA DETE
JO SAPNE DEKHE HAI IN AANKHON NE
WAHI TOOTE HAI,KISSE HUM SAZA DETE
SAB NE CHOT DI HAI ZINDAGI MEIN KUCH AISI
KIS KIS KO BHULA DETE
DIL KA DARD DIL  HI MEIN
DABAYA RAKHA HAI "KHWAISH"
BAYAAN KIYA HOTA TO
POORI MEHFIL KO RULA DETE
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«Reply #28 on: August 17, 2007, 11:18:01 PM »
Pooja, Roja, Meena, Husena, Khwaish

Kya baat hai !

Yahan to sab ek doosre se badh kar likh rahe hain !

Good going !
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«Reply #29 on: August 18, 2007, 06:14:35 PM »
Thanks di and bhaiya...

Toote hia sapne phir bhi har toote hue tukde ne chaha hai use,
Aaj bhi sapno ka maksad dil ne maana hai use,
Intezaar karte rahenge jab tak aakhri saans hai,
saanson ke har ek taar mein paaya hai use...
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