~~##~~Toote Hue Khwaab~~##~~

by waheed_rose2004 on May 11, 2006, 07:16:50 PM
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Toote hue  bedard khwabon ki  khirchiyan samet te samet te
ek lamhe  mein  mera dil chaha ki main  bhi usi ki  tarah
toot kar  hajaron  tukdon mein  bikhari    jaon
aur mujhe koi  ta hayat  mukammal  na kar  sake
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«Reply #1 on: May 11, 2006, 08:09:35 PM »
Bohat khoob Waheed...
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«Reply #2 on: May 12, 2006, 05:38:28 PM »
Shukriya  Aryan......  Majid.............
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«Reply #3 on: May 12, 2006, 05:48:36 PM »
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Toote hue  bedard khwabon ki  khirchiyan samet te samet te
ek lamhe  mein  mera dil chaha ki main  bhi usi ki  tarah
toot kar  hajaron  tukdon mein  bikhari    jaon
aur mujhe koi  ta hayat  mukammal  na kar  sake


brother ur awesome!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #4 on: May 12, 2006, 05:58:44 PM »
shukriya  sis.........  :lol:
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«Reply #5 on: May 12, 2006, 06:00:20 PM »
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Toote hue  bedard khwabon ki  khirchiyan samet te samet te
ek lamhe  mein  mera dil chaha ki main  bhi usi ki  tarah
toot kar  hajaron  tukdon mein  bikhari    jaon
aur mujhe koi  ta hayat  mukammal  na kar  sake


Oye motoo .... Shair to bohat achha hai
par ek baat batao.....
tum hamesha tootne ki baatein kyu karte ho

Tukdo.n me na bat jana
Raaho.n se na hat jana
Tum kar lo jo irada
mushkil nahi kuchh pana :wink:
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«Reply #6 on: May 12, 2006, 06:01:33 PM »
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shukriya  sis.........  :lol:


shukriyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa :evil:
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TOUCHY
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«Reply #7 on: May 12, 2006, 06:02:09 PM »
Bahut Achhe Saba..........
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«Reply #8 on: May 12, 2006, 06:03:59 PM »
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Toote hue  bedard khwabon ki  khirchiyan samet te samet te
ek lamhe  mein  mera dil chaha ki main  bhi usi ki  tarah
toot kar  hajaron  tukdon mein  bikhari    jaon
aur mujhe koi  ta hayat  mukammal  na kar  sake


bahut hi achha likha hai aap ne waahid ji aise hi likhte rahiyega
take care
regards
manu
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«Reply #9 on: May 12, 2006, 06:20:03 PM »
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Toote hue  bedard khwabon ki  khirchiyan samet te samet te
ek lamhe  mein  mera dil chaha ki main  bhi usi ki  tarah
toot kar  hajaron  tukdon mein  bikhari    jaon
aur mujhe koi  ta hayat  mukammal  na kar  sake


Oye motoo .... Shair to bohat achha hai
par ek baat batao.....
tum hamesha tootne ki baatein kyu karte ho

Tukdo.n me na bat jana
Raaho.n se na hat jana
Tum kar lo jo irada
mushkil nahi kuchh pana :wink:


yaar  kya karoon.....   toota hua  insaan  kya bolega :lol:  wiase  acchi reply  hai ,.....thanx alot manu......

ajeeb  manjer maine  apni  jindagi mein  dekhe  hain  Saba
samunder paas  khada hoon phir  bhi pyasa  raha .........
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«Reply #10 on: May 12, 2006, 06:21:50 PM »
Gr9 work Waheed bhai.......Saba ji
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«Reply #11 on: May 12, 2006, 06:43:33 PM »
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Toote hue  bedard khwabon ki  khirchiyan samet te samet te
ek lamhe  mein  mera dil chaha ki main  bhi usi ki  tarah
toot kar  hajaron  tukdon mein  bikhari    jaon
aur mujhe koi  ta hayat  mukammal  na kar  sake


Oye motoo .... Shair to bohat achha hai
par ek baat batao.....
tum hamesha tootne ki baatein kyu karte ho

Tukdo.n me na bat jana
Raaho.n se na hat jana
Tum kar lo jo irada
mushkil nahi kuchh pana :wink:


yaar  kya karoon.....   toota hua  insaan  kya bolega :lol:  wiase  acchi reply  hai ,.....thanx alot manu......

ajeeb  manjer maine  apni  jindagi mein  dekhe  hain  Saba
samunder paas  khada hoon phir  bhi pyasa  raha .........


Thank you touchy .... banaam shayar ... :oops:

nice again waheed... paas khade reh gaye na isliye ...

Bohat manzar guzre hai in raaho.n se Waheed
Kabhi basti, kabhi sehra, kabhi khamosh nadi
Safar par they hum na ruke kisi padao par
Agar ruk jaate to paalete hum bhi kuchh pal ki khushi
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«Reply #12 on: May 12, 2006, 06:47:01 PM »
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Thank you touchy .... banaam shayar ... :oops:


Yeh kya hai Puzzled !
KUCH PURANI YAADEIN BHULA NAHI PAYA;
KUCH PURANI BATEEIN BATA NAHI PAYA;
KUCH PURANE SAPNE SAJA NAHI PAYA;
KUCH PURANE KHAT PAD NAHI PAYA;
MAIN SHAYER TO PURANA THA,
TUJE MERI SHAYRI BANA NAHI PAYA

Nice Waheed Bhai n Saba Again very Nice.........
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«Reply #13 on: May 12, 2006, 07:05:36 PM »
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Toote hue  bedard khwabon ki  khirchiyan samet te samet te
ek lamhe  mein  mera dil chaha ki main  bhi usi ki  tarah
toot kar  hajaron  tukdon mein  bikhari    jaon
aur mujhe koi  ta hayat  mukammal  na kar  sake


Oye motoo .... Shair to bohat achha hai
par ek baat batao.....
tum hamesha tootne ki baatein kyu karte ho

Tukdo.n me na bat jana
Raaho.n se na hat jana
Tum kar lo jo irada
mushkil nahi kuchh pana :wink:


yaar  kya karoon.....   toota hua  insaan  kya bolega :lol:  wiase  acchi reply  hai ,.....thanx alot manu......

ajeeb  manjer maine  apni  jindagi mein  dekhe  hain  Saba
samunder paas  khada hoon phir  bhi pyasa  raha .........


Thank you touchy .... banaam shayar ... :oops:

nice again waheed... paas khade reh gaye na isliye ...

Bohat manzar guzre hai in raaho.n se Waheed
Kabhi basti, kabhi sehra, kabhi khamosh nadi
Safar par they hum na ruke kisi padao par
Agar ruk jaate to paalete hum bhi kuchh pal ki khushi


wonderfull  Saba..................

mere chehre ko  dekh meri  jindagi ki kitaab  na padho  Saba
kuch  dard  aise  bhi hai  jiska byaan  maine  abhi kiya nahi......
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«Reply #14 on: May 12, 2006, 07:07:43 PM »
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Thank you touchy .... banaam shayar ... :oops:


Yeh kya hai Puzzled !
KUCH PURANI YAADEIN BHULA NAHI PAYA;
KUCH PURANI BATEEIN BATA NAHI PAYA;
KUCH PURANE SAPNE SAJA NAHI PAYA;
KUCH PURANE KHAT PAD NAHI PAYA;
MAIN SHAYER TO PURANA THA,
TUJE MERI SHAYRI BANA NAHI PAYA

Nice Waheed Bhai n Saba Again very Nice.........


Very Nice Touchy

Tere honto par khilti muskan ban kar
Teri aankho.n me utarti pehchan ban kar
Kaha thi istni khush kismat ~ Saba ~
Jo dhalti teri shayri ki jaan ban kar
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