~~##~~Toote Hue Khwaab~~##~~ -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

TOUCHY

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«Reply #15 on: May 12, 2006, 07:14:17 PM »

Very Nice Saba

Naseeb toh hamare soye the
Tumhe kya pata ham kitna roye the
Bas ek hi ummed thi hamari
woh bhi ummed se pahle sath chod gayi.........


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«Reply #16 on: May 13, 2006, 09:30:03 AM »

wonderful touchy .............sabbu............

Har qadam marhala hai kathin raasta hai
Jeenay ka hausla dard ka silsila hai
Sans aazar hai jeena dushwar hai
Ab is dil ko maut se pyaar hai..........


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«Reply #17 on: May 13, 2006, 09:31:30 AM »

Very Nice Waheed Bhai.......


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«Reply #18 on: May 13, 2006, 03:29:44 PM »

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Toote hue bedard khwabon ki khirchiyan samet te samet te
ek lamhe mein mera dil chaha ki main bhi usi ki tarah
toot kar hajaron tukdon mein bikhari jaon
aur mujhe koi ta hayat mukammal na kar sake

Oye motoo .... Shair to bohat achha hai
par ek baat batao.....
tum hamesha tootne ki baatein kyu karte ho

Tukdo.n me na bat jana
Raaho.n se na hat jana
Tum kar lo jo irada
mushkil nahi kuchh pana :wink:

yaar kya karoon..... toota hua insaan kya bolega :lol: wiase acchi reply hai ,.....thanx alot manu......

ajeeb manjer maine apni jindagi mein dekhe hain Saba
samunder paas khada hoon phir bhi pyasa raha .........

Thank you touchy .... banaam shayar ... :oops:

nice again waheed... paas khade reh gaye na isliye ...

Bohat manzar guzre hai in raaho.n se Waheed
Kabhi basti, kabhi sehra, kabhi khamosh nadi
Safar par they hum na ruke kisi padao par
Agar ruk jaate to paalete hum bhi kuchh pal ki khushi

wonderfull Saba..................

mere chehre ko dekh meri jindagi ki kitaab na padho Saba
kuch dard aise bhi hai jiska byaan maine abhi kiya nahi......

Nice Waheed

Har dard ko lafzo me dhala nahi jaata
Har baat ko dil me utara nahi jaata
Tum chup rahe labo.n par kafal laga kar
Kya humse bhi dard pehchana nahi jaata


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«Reply #19 on: May 13, 2006, 04:11:07 PM »

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Toote hue bedard khwabon ki khirchiyan samet te samet te
ek lamhe mein mera dil chaha ki main bhi usi ki tarah
toot kar hajaron tukdon mein bikhari jaon
aur mujhe koi ta hayat mukammal na kar sake

hmmmmmm thanxxxxx Sabbu.......... wonderful again...

Zard chehre ne ruswa kiya tabassum ko
warna zahir nahi hota ki pareshan hai koi ..........


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«Reply #20 on: May 13, 2006, 04:25:57 PM »

wah waheed ji and saba ji bahut khoob


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«Reply #21 on: May 14, 2006, 12:47:15 PM »

Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"

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Toote hue bedard khwabon ki khirchiyan samet te samet te
ek lamhe mein mera dil chaha ki main bhi usi ki tarah
toot kar hajaron tukdon mein bikhari jaon
aur mujhe koi ta hayat mukammal na kar sake

hmmmmmm thanxxxxx Sabbu.......... wonderful again...

Zard chehre ne ruswa kiya tabassum ko
warna zahir nahi hota ki pareshan hai koi ..........

Thanxx kaiynath..... Waheed beautiful again

Yeh tabassum to bas dikhawa hai
Dard ko chhupane ka ek bahana hai


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kaiynath

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«Reply #22 on: May 14, 2006, 12:49:55 PM »

dard chupta nahi jooti muskurahath ke piche
aankhon se har koi padh leta hai isse.........


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tabassum shakeel

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«Reply #23 on: May 14, 2006, 01:38:07 PM »

khwab bhi tute hue hamko pasand aate hain
jane kyun achchi kisi cheez ki aadat na rahi


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badnaam_shayar

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«Reply #24 on: May 14, 2006, 04:15:36 PM »

Kya baat hai Gum.......bahut khoob

Tadapte khawabon ki daastan aaj tujhe sunane hum aye hai.....
Teri palkon ki nami naam apne karne aaye hai.....

Rehne na dena ko zarra bhi Dard ka apne Dil me....
Aaj tujhse harr Gum batne hum aye hai......!!!!!!!


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A Saeed

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«Reply #25 on: August 15, 2009, 08:21:34 PM »

hat ke hai, bhai hamain to pasand aaya


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«Reply #26 on: August 20, 2009, 11:23:52 PM »

Saeed ji bahoot old thread le ayye app.. phir se padna ajj acha laga!!


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Roja

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«Reply #27 on: August 21, 2009, 04:40:34 PM »

Khwaab dekhe bhi nahi aur toot gaye
Wo hamse mile bhi nahi aur root gaye
Hum jaagte rahe aur dunia soti rahi
Ek barish hi thi jo saat mere rahi

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