~~##~~Toote Hue Khwaab~~##~~

by waheed_rose2004 on May 11, 2006, 07:16:50 PM
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«Reply #15 on: May 12, 2006, 07:14:17 PM »
Very Nice Saba

Naseeb toh hamare soye the
Tumhe kya pata ham kitna roye the
Bas ek hi ummed thi hamari
woh bhi ummed se pahle sath chod gayi.........
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«Reply #16 on: May 13, 2006, 09:30:03 AM »
wonderful  touchy  .............sabbu............

Har qadam marhala hai kathin raasta hai
Jeenay ka hausla dard ka silsila hai
Sans aazar hai jeena dushwar hai
Ab is dil ko maut se pyaar hai..........
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«Reply #17 on: May 13, 2006, 09:31:30 AM »
Very Nice Waheed Bhai.......
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«Reply #18 on: May 13, 2006, 03:29:44 PM »
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Toote hue  bedard khwabon ki  khirchiyan samet te samet te
ek lamhe  mein  mera dil chaha ki main  bhi usi ki  tarah
toot kar  hajaron  tukdon mein  bikhari    jaon
aur mujhe koi  ta hayat  mukammal  na kar  sake


Oye motoo .... Shair to bohat achha hai
par ek baat batao.....
tum hamesha tootne ki baatein kyu karte ho

Tukdo.n me na bat jana
Raaho.n se na hat jana
Tum kar lo jo irada
mushkil nahi kuchh pana :wink:


yaar  kya karoon.....   toota hua  insaan  kya bolega :lol:  wiase  acchi reply  hai ,.....thanx alot manu......

ajeeb  manjer maine  apni  jindagi mein  dekhe  hain  Saba
samunder paas  khada hoon phir  bhi pyasa  raha .........


Thank you touchy .... banaam shayar ... :oops:

nice again waheed... paas khade reh gaye na isliye ...

Bohat manzar guzre hai in raaho.n se Waheed
Kabhi basti, kabhi sehra, kabhi khamosh nadi
Safar par they hum na ruke kisi padao par
Agar ruk jaate to paalete hum bhi kuchh pal ki khushi


wonderfull  Saba..................

mere chehre ko  dekh meri  jindagi ki kitaab  na padho  Saba
kuch  dard  aise  bhi hai  jiska byaan  maine  abhi kiya nahi......


Nice Waheed

Har dard ko lafzo me dhala nahi jaata
Har baat ko dil me utara nahi jaata
Tum chup rahe labo.n par kafal laga kar
Kya humse bhi dard pehchana nahi jaata
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«Reply #19 on: May 13, 2006, 04:11:07 PM »
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Toote hue  bedard khwabon ki  khirchiyan samet te samet te
ek lamhe  mein  mera dil chaha ki main  bhi usi ki  tarah
toot kar  hajaron  tukdon mein  bikhari    jaon
aur mujhe koi  ta hayat  mukammal  na kar  sake


Oye motoo .... Shair to bohat achha hai
par ek baat batao.....
tum hamesha tootne ki baatein kyu karte ho

Tukdo.n me na bat jana
Raaho.n se na hat jana
Tum kar lo jo irada
mushkil nahi kuchh pana :wink:


yaar  kya karoon.....   toota hua  insaan  kya bolega :lol:  wiase  acchi reply  hai ,.....thanx alot manu......

ajeeb  manjer maine  apni  jindagi mein  dekhe  hain  Saba
samunder paas  khada hoon phir  bhi pyasa  raha .........


Thank you touchy .... banaam shayar ... :oops:

nice again waheed... paas khade reh gaye na isliye ...

Bohat manzar guzre hai in raaho.n se Waheed
Kabhi basti, kabhi sehra, kabhi khamosh nadi
Safar par they hum na ruke kisi padao par
Agar ruk jaate to paalete hum bhi kuchh pal ki khushi


hmmmmmm    thanxxxxx   Sabbu..........   wonderful again...

Zard  chehre  ne  ruswa  kiya  tabassum  ko  
warna  zahir nahi  hota ki  pareshan hai koi ..........
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«Reply #20 on: May 13, 2006, 04:25:57 PM »
wah waheed ji and saba ji bahut khoob
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«Reply #21 on: May 14, 2006, 12:47:15 PM »
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Toote hue  bedard khwabon ki  khirchiyan samet te samet te
ek lamhe  mein  mera dil chaha ki main  bhi usi ki  tarah
toot kar  hajaron  tukdon mein  bikhari    jaon
aur mujhe koi  ta hayat  mukammal  na kar  sake


Oye motoo .... Shair to bohat achha hai
par ek baat batao.....
tum hamesha tootne ki baatein kyu karte ho

Tukdo.n me na bat jana
Raaho.n se na hat jana
Tum kar lo jo irada
mushkil nahi kuchh pana :wink:


yaar  kya karoon.....   toota hua  insaan  kya bolega :lol:  wiase  acchi reply  hai ,.....thanx alot manu......

ajeeb  manjer maine  apni  jindagi mein  dekhe  hain  Saba
samunder paas  khada hoon phir  bhi pyasa  raha .........


Thank you touchy .... banaam shayar ... :oops:

nice again waheed... paas khade reh gaye na isliye ...

Bohat manzar guzre hai in raaho.n se Waheed
Kabhi basti, kabhi sehra, kabhi khamosh nadi
Safar par they hum na ruke kisi padao par
Agar ruk jaate to paalete hum bhi kuchh pal ki khushi


hmmmmmm    thanxxxxx   Sabbu..........   wonderful again...

Zard  chehre  ne  ruswa  kiya  tabassum  ko  
warna  zahir nahi  hota ki  pareshan hai koi ..........


Thanxx kaiynath..... Waheed beautiful again

Yeh tabassum to bas dikhawa hai
Dard ko chhupane ka ek bahana hai
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«Reply #22 on: May 14, 2006, 12:49:55 PM »
dard chupta nahi jooti muskurahath ke piche
aankhon se har koi padh leta hai isse.........
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«Reply #23 on: May 14, 2006, 01:38:07 PM »
khwab bhi tute hue hamko pasand aate hain
jane kyun achchi kisi cheez ki aadat na rahi
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«Reply #24 on: May 14, 2006, 04:15:36 PM »
Kya baat hai Gum.......bahut khoob

Tadapte khawabon ki daastan aaj tujhe sunane hum aye hai.....
Teri palkon ki nami naam apne karne aaye hai.....

Rehne na dena ko zarra bhi Dard ka apne Dil me....
Aaj tujhse harr Gum batne hum aye hai......!!!!!!!
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«Reply #25 on: August 15, 2009, 08:21:34 PM »
hat ke hai, bhai hamain to pasand aaya
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«Reply #26 on: August 20, 2009, 11:23:52 PM »
Saeed ji bahoot old thread le ayye app.. phir se padna ajj acha laga!!
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«Reply #27 on: August 21, 2009, 04:40:34 PM »
Khwaab dekhe bhi nahi aur toot gaye
Wo hamse mile bhi nahi aur root gaye
Hum jaagte rahe aur dunia soti rahi
Ek barish hi thi jo saat mere rahi

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