toote riste kab judte hain !!!

by sarfira on July 21, 2011, 05:57:17 AM
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toote riste kab judte hain
judei gaanth pad jate hain

jo sache riste hote
yun na wo toota karte

aankho ki kirchan se fir
dil ke lahoo na risaa karte

sach hi kaha dil ne kuch toot gaya
koi khaab adhoora chhutt gaya

seeme ka bhi toota hai
aankho ka bhi toota hai
!!
!!
!!
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«Reply #1 on: July 21, 2011, 05:59:10 AM »
Quote from: sarfira on July 21, 2011, 05:57:17 AM
toote riste kab judte hain
judei gaanth pad jate hain

jo sache riste hote
yun na wo toota karte

aankho ki kirchan se fir
dil ke lahoo na risaa karte

sach hi kaha dil ne kuch toot gaya
koi khaab adhoora chhutt gaya

seeme ka bhi toota hai
aankho ka bhi toota hai
!!
!!
!!


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madhuwesh
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«Reply #2 on: July 21, 2011, 06:02:30 AM »
Wah bahut khoob Sarfira ji.superb creation. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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sarfira
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«Reply #3 on: July 21, 2011, 06:12:36 AM »
thanx khujli Usual SmileUsual SmileUsual Smile
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sarfira
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«Reply #4 on: July 21, 2011, 06:18:34 AM »
Quote from: madhuwesh on July 21, 2011, 06:02:30 AM
Wah bahut khoob Sarfira ji.superb creation. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
thanx…
vb ji ke ek post par mene ye reply dia tha bht pahle…
bas aaj yad aa gaya to yaha post kia
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«Reply #5 on: July 21, 2011, 06:21:09 AM »
bht khubb ehsaas bayaankiye hain srfira ji
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«Reply #6 on: July 21, 2011, 06:59:14 AM »
Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on July 21, 2011, 06:21:09 AM
bht khubb ehsaas bayaankiye hain srfira ji
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