Tu Aag hai..Mein hu Dhuaan.. (Shikha)

by Shikha12 on August 05, 2006, 04:56:48 AM
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Pyaar ki kya hai intehaa..
Mujhey kya khabar, Mujhey kya pata….
Dhadak rahi merey dil mey aaj,
Ek teri kami, Ek teri Sadaa….

Gum-e-Duniya sey hum bhaag kar,
Aa Bethey terey pehlu mey hum,
Dil maangey ab bus yeh dua,
Ab chodh du yeh Jism-o-Jaa….

Woh aawaz peecha karti hai,
Ek kami sii dil mey khalti hai,
Kaisey tum ko bhoolun main,
Tu Aag hai, main hu Dhuuan….

Gum naa karna mera tum,
Muskurana yun hi hardam tum…
Hum jaa rahey hai chod kar,
Teri mehfiley, Teri yeh duniyaa….

Di khalish tumney, kiya gumjada,
Karo aur sitam ek mujhpar tum…..
Mein jee loongi terey begair,
Tu Bhi Bhool Jaa….Mujhey Bhool Jaa….
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vikas2210
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«Reply #1 on: August 05, 2006, 05:02:59 AM »
woow shikay bahut khoob sacccchii bahut acchi hai.....
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #2 on: August 05, 2006, 05:03:32 AM »
Pyaar ki kya hai intehaa..
Mujhey kya khabar, Mujhey kya pata….
Dhadak rahi merey dil mey aaj,
Ek teri kami, Ek teri Sadaa….

superb lines...
bhut hi nice poem Sikha ji...
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ranjana
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«Reply #3 on: August 05, 2006, 05:25:08 AM »
bahut khoob shikha......very nice ...

hamne ishq ki aag mein jal kar dekh liya
aaj hamne apne dil ko mana ke dekh liya

paaya na sakun pal bhar ke liye bhi kahi
aaj is mohbbat ka anzaam hamne dekh liya

kiya karte they hum zamaane se shikva
ab khud ko is dard mein baha ke dekh liya

kab milega ab rasta mera unki mazail se
hamne toh unke liye apna ghar tak jala ke dekh liya
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Shikha12
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«Reply #4 on: August 05, 2006, 06:39:11 AM »


Thanks Vikas and Burniing_Desiires…..
And Ranju di…..Bahut achha likha hai aapney…



Du’r jaana chahtey they,
Par paas ho liye….
Tum Udaas they is liye,
Hum Udaas ho liye…..

Jud’aa humney khud ko,
Tumsey kar liya aakhir….
Tum Zameen they is liye,
Hum Aakash ho liye….

Khud ko humney teri,
Justju mey jala diya…
Dekhiye jara kadmon taley,
Hum to raakh ho liye….
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vikas2210
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«Reply #5 on: August 05, 2006, 07:04:33 AM »
Again very nice Ranju and Shikha


tere payar se mera wajood hai
tu hai to mera wajood hai
na samjh ke jee sakunga mai tere bina
tu hai to mujhme baaki abhi saans hai.......
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ranjana
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«Reply #6 on: August 05, 2006, 07:36:39 AM »
too good vikas and shikha .....

jeena chahte they hum magar jee na paaye
mar ke bhi chain milega yeh ab kaun bataaye

saha tamaam dukho ko sirf unki khatir
per kabhi unke dil mein bhi jagah bana na paaye

seh lete har dard ko ham haste haste
per kabhi toh koi hame bhi gale se lagaaye

dil mein basa ke rakha sirf unhe hi
unke siva aur kisi ko chah bhi na paaye

hue jab kabhi woh udas udas
hum bhi ek pal chain se jee na paaye
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Rajbir
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«Reply #7 on: August 05, 2006, 08:46:36 AM »
Shikha, Ranju, Jeet, Vikas

Bahut he dard se bhara likha hai aap sab ne !

Specially Shikha and Ranju

Hila kar rakh deti ho tum dono

Rajbir
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nirbhay
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«Reply #8 on: August 05, 2006, 08:53:34 AM »
=D> ! Bohat Khoob Shikha & others..
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ranjana
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«Reply #9 on: August 05, 2006, 09:09:46 AM »
shurkiya  Rajbir .....aap pad ke hi hil gaye .... :D good ... Usual Smile

shukriya neer ........from others ... :wink:  :D
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vikas2210
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«Reply #10 on: August 05, 2006, 09:10:12 AM »
shukriya ranju rajbir and others
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #11 on: August 05, 2006, 11:24:05 AM »
Quote from: "Shikha12"

Pyaar ki kya hai intehaa..
Mujhey kya khabar, Mujhey kya pata….
Dhadak rahi merey dil mey aaj,
Ek teri kami, Ek teri Sadaa….

Gum-e-Duniya sey hum bhaag kar,
Aa Bethey terey pehlu mey hum,
Dil maangey ab bus yeh dua,
Ab chodh du yeh Jism-o-Jaa….

Woh aawaz peecha karti hai,
Ek kami sii dil mey khalti hai,
Kaisey tum ko bhoolun mein,
Tu Aag hai, mein hu Dhuuan….

Gum naa karna mera tum,
Muskurana yun hi hardam tum…
Hum jaa rahey hai chod kar,
Teri mehfiley, Teri yeh duniyaa….

Di khalish tumney, kiya gumjada,
Karo aur sitam ek mujhpar tum…..
Mein jee loongi terey begair,
Tu Mujhey Bhool Jaa….Mujhey Bhool Jaa….
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Superb Shikha....and all....


Main Dhuaan tu Chingaari.....
Na jaane yeh Aag kahan lagi hai......

Jism hai deheke Sholon se......
Na jaane yeh kya Ghadi hai......

Fursat nahi hume na hee Chain-o-Karaar hai......
Bandishein hai Zamane ki par ab hume kiski Parwaah hai......

Dard hai Gar Saathi tera.......
Toh meri bhi ek Mahobbat ki Raah hai......

Zindagi ho jab Maut se judi......
Toh kaho kya Zindagi ki koi Raah hai.......!!!!!!!!!
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Asghr
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«Reply #12 on: January 15, 2009, 05:56:45 PM »
Quote from: Mahiya on August 05, 2006, 04:56:48 AM

Pyaar ki kya hai intehaa..
Mujhey kya khabar, Mujhey kya pata….
Dhadak rahi merey dil mey aaj,
Ek teri kami, Ek teri Sadaa….

Gum-e-Duniya sey hum bhaag kar,
Aa Bethey terey pehlu mey hum,
Dil maangey ab bus yeh dua,
Ab chodh du yeh Jism-o-Jaa….

Woh aawaz peecha karti hai,
Ek kami sii dil mey khalti hai,
Kaisey tum ko bhoolun main,
Tu Aag hai, main hu Dhuuan….

Gum naa karna mera tum,
Muskurana yun hi hardam tum…
Hum jaa rahey hai chod kar,
Teri mehfiley, Teri yeh duniyaa….

Di khalish tumney, kiya gumjada,
Karo aur sitam ek mujhpar tum…..
Mein jee loongi terey begair,
Tu Bhi Bhool Jaa….Mujhey Bhool Jaa….
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BAUT PYARI NAZAM DIL MEIN UTTER GAIE.ASGHR
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dead heart
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«Reply #13 on: January 15, 2009, 06:28:54 PM »
Quote from: ranjana on August 05, 2006, 05:25:08 AM
bahut khoob shikha......very nice ...

hamne ishq ki aag mein jal kar dekh liya
aaj hamne apne dil ko mana ke dekh liya

paaya na sakun pal bhar ke liye bhi kahi
aaj is mohbbat ka anzaam hamne dekh liya

kiya karte they hum zamaane se shikva
ab khud ko is dard mein baha ke dekh liya

kab milega ab rasta mera unki mazail se
hamne toh unke liye apna ghar tak jala ke dekh liya

wah wah wah wah bahaut khoob likha hai apne..."hamne toh unke liye apna ghar tak jala ke dekh liya"...wah wah wah wah...
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #14 on: January 15, 2009, 07:01:47 PM »
Quote from: Mahiya on August 05, 2006, 04:56:48 AM

Pyaar ki kya hai intehaa..
Mujhey kya khabar, Mujhey kya pata….
Dhadak rahi merey dil mey aaj,
Ek teri kami, Ek teri Sadaa….

Gum-e-Duniya sey hum bhaag kar,
Aa Bethey terey pehlu mey hum,
Dil maangey ab bus yeh dua,
Ab chodh du yeh Jism-o-Jaa….

Woh aawaz peecha karti hai,
Ek kami sii dil mey khalti hai,
Kaisey tum ko bhoolun main,
Tu Aag hai, main hu Dhuuan….

Gum naa karna mera tum,
Muskurana yun hi hardam tum…
Hum jaa rahey hai chod kar,
Teri mehfiley, Teri yeh duniyaa….

Di khalish tumney, kiya gumjada,
Karo aur sitam ek mujhpar tum…..
Mein jee loongi terey begair,
Tu Bhi Bhool Jaa….Mujhey Bhool Jaa….
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wah mahiya, bahut hi khoob

jasbir singh
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