~ * Tu bhi to MAHOBAAT karke dekh * ~_DeV

by thinkhattk on September 07, 2010, 09:37:41 AM
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O Aasman wale jami par utar ke dekh,

Hoti hai kya mohabbat tu bhi to karke dekh,

Tu bhi to dekh duniya me rishto ka silsila,

Gam ki tadap se tu bhi to Tilmila,

O Pattar ko poj poj kar jisko khuda kiya,

Par tune mere yaar ko mujse juda kiya,

O Aasman wale jami par utar ke dekh,

Hoti hai kya mohabbat tu bhi to kar ke dekh,

Teri hi nahmate hai Husn Isqh aur Wafa,

Phir kis baat ki mili hai mere Dil ko ye saja?

Tu bhi jaha me Aaye kare tu bhi kisi se Pyar,

‘MASOOQ’ ki tadap me Rooye tu bar bar,

O Aasman wale jami par utar ke dekh,

Hoti hai kya mohabbat tu bhi to kar ke dekh.....

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«Reply #1 on: September 07, 2010, 09:41:53 AM »


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O Aasman wale jami par utar ke dekh,

Hoti hai kya mohabbat tu bhi to karke dekh,

Tu bhi to dekh duniya me risto ka silsila,

Gam ki tadap se tu bhi to Tilmila,

O Pattar ko poj poj kar jisko khuda kiya,

Par tune mere yaar ko mujse juda kiya,

O Aasman wale jami par utar ke dekh,

Hoti hai kya mohabbat tu bhi to kar ke dekh,

Teri hi nahmate hai Husn Isqh aur Wafa,

Phir kis baat ki mili hai mere Dil ko ye saja?

Tu bhi jaha me Aaye kare tu bhi kisi se Pyar,

‘MASOOQ’ ki tadap me Rooye tu bar bar,

O Aasman wale jami par utar ke dekh,

Hoti hai kya mohabbat tu bhi to kar ke dekh.....


KYA TADAP HAI MOHABBAT KI...........BAHUT KHOOB JI
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thinkhattk
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«Reply #2 on: September 07, 2010, 09:44:45 AM »
sukriyaji...
par kuchh likha nahi aapne..... sad5
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«Reply #3 on: September 07, 2010, 10:51:28 AM »
execellent thinkhattk ji.icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: September 07, 2010, 10:52:44 AM »
thanku suresh ji....
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«Reply #5 on: September 07, 2010, 01:54:31 PM »
is nagri me ek aur jaadugarni aa gayi... shabdon se dil lootne ek aur kavyitri aa gayi.... hame nashe me jhoomne ko majboor karne koi aa gayi.... apni shayari se dil le jaane waali koi aa gayi....

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«Reply #6 on: September 07, 2010, 02:32:54 PM »
thk beautiful song from ur side.....nice sharing
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«Reply #7 on: September 07, 2010, 06:17:41 PM »
Nayab peshaksh hai dev very nicely written...u have really improved alot m so happy keep writting n keep sharing..take care...
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«Reply #8 on: September 07, 2010, 06:34:44 PM »
Ab mein kya kahu yahaan tou tariff ki nadiyen beh rahi hai.....Devangi-ji... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause
Very good sharing....



O Aasman wale jami par utar ke dekh,

Hoti hai kya mohabbat tu bhi to karke dekh,

Tu bhi to dekh duniya me risto ka silsila,

Gam ki tadap se tu bhi to Tilmila,

O Pattar ko poj poj kar jisko khuda kiya,

Par tune mere yaar ko mujse juda kiya,

O Aasman wale jami par utar ke dekh,

Hoti hai kya mohabbat tu bhi to kar ke dekh,

Teri hi nahmate hai Husn Isqh aur Wafa,

Phir kis baat ki mili hai mere Dil ko ye saja?

Tu bhi jaha me Aaye kare tu bhi kisi se Pyar,

‘MASOOQ’ ki tadap me Rooye tu bar bar,

O Aasman wale jami par utar ke dekh,

Hoti hai kya mohabbat tu bhi to kar ke dekh.....

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madhuwesh
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«Reply #9 on: September 08, 2010, 01:53:23 AM »
Wah wah bhut khoob Devaangi sis.heart touching creation.excellent.keep up the good work. icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: September 08, 2010, 10:09:43 PM »
Dev Jee aadaab!

kafi achcha andaaz e bayaaN raha aapka hume behad khoob lagi aapki yeh tadap aur aapke khayaaloN ka andaaz e bayaaN....

Aise hi undaa likhati rahiye.....
Khush rahiye....
khuda Hafez    



Tu bhi mujhse rooth jaa koyiN baat nahiN
Zakham bahut hai dil per aik aur sahiN
         

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«Reply #11 on: September 09, 2010, 09:55:19 AM »
bahot bahot bahot sukriya klaskar ji....
me correct kar diya he....
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«Reply #12 on: September 09, 2010, 09:58:48 AM »
kasak ae koi song nahi he, our na hi kabhi mene suna he, muje batao kis movie ya album ka he..

thk beautiful song from ur side.....nice sharing

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«Reply #13 on: September 09, 2010, 10:03:12 AM »
thanks a lot geet di, anaam ji, madhu di nparwaaz ji....


Nayab peshaksh hai dev very nicely written...u have really improved alot m so happy keep writting n keep sharing..take care...


Ab mein kya kahu yahaan tou tariff ki nadiyen beh rahi hai.....Devangi-ji... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause
Very good sharing....


Wah wah bhut khoob Devaangi sis.heart touching creation.excellent.keep up the good work. icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause



nice lines.... Clapping Smiley  Applause  Applause

Dev Jee aadaab!

kafi achcha andaaz e bayaaN raha aapka hume behad khoob lagi aapki yeh tadap aur aapke khayaaloN ka andaaz e bayaaN....

Aise hi undaa likhati rahiye.....
Khush rahiye....
khuda Hafez   



Tu bhi mujhse rooth jaa koyiN baat nahiN
Zakham bahut hai dil per aik aur sahiN
         


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