nidhi_yadein
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«Reply #45 on: June 28, 2005, 02:58:43 PM » |
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If I don’t deserve you
Then whom do I deserve
If you are not mine
Then to whom do I belong?
Am I too good to have to with me?
Or I have the fate to detest
Is it the boundless love in me?
Or a horizon you wish to draw for me
Am I to cry every night for you?
Do you care to make me smile?
Why are we hooked together?
Is it the bond between us?
Or my innocence you cant let go
Do we have a relation to live for?
Or mercy and duty to drag
Can I have you forever?
Or love is absent in my life
Do I have to carry this heavy heart all my life?
Do I have you to share?
Is my voice reaching you?
Or I’m shouting to the air
Can we have long days of peace?
Or this nervousness he all we have
Don’t you love me for a reason?
Reason that is inbound love
Or you love me for I love you
And in your heart you don’t care
What am I to understand?
What am I to say?
I’m tired and I’m torn
But still I don’t wish to be alone
Find me the one I deserve
Find me the one to love
Someone who doesn’t make me sad
Someone with me who feels glad
Who doesn’t feel I don’t deserve him
One whom I deserve
The one who’s made for me
In my eyes my love who can see
Who feels glad to become my destiny
In my heart I’m all yours
In my heart to you I belong wow ..... no words to explain how wat amazing u have written.too good tosha,nothing can more b better than this. |
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Tosha
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«Reply #46 on: June 28, 2005, 04:29:42 PM » |
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dis se pukar jab nikalti hai na doston to kuch baat khas hoti hai
jab is dil ko tor ke kodi ke tarha rondh ke chala jata hai doston to daard main kasak hi kuch aur hoti hai
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Thanx a lot anyway!!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #47 on: June 28, 2005, 05:12:12 PM » |
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Good job .....................................Tosha!!!!!!!!
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Tosha
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«Reply #48 on: June 28, 2005, 06:38:45 PM » |
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Good job .....................................Tosha!!!!!!!! thanx a lpt pooja ... tu sun le is dil ke fariyad dukhta hai yeh dil karta hai yujhe yaad agar tere bina je sakti main to pane ke juhe dua na karti |
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Pooja
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«Reply #49 on: June 28, 2005, 06:40:44 PM » |
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pa kar usse kahan ab dhondaty ho
dil mai hai jo, duniya mai kayun khaojty ho
pana sirf milan hi nahi hota dost..
Jo basta hai apki nas nas mai,
usko najaro kayun khojaty ho!!!!!!
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Tosha
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«Reply #50 on: June 28, 2005, 06:47:14 PM » |
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nazro ke saamne rahe ke jab koi dikhaye na de
ahesaas banke bas vo saamne aata rahe
to dua nahi to aur kya kare hum khuda se
ke vo bewafa hamme ek baar bafa ka mauka to de
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«Reply #51 on: June 28, 2005, 06:50:23 PM » |
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wonderfulllllllllll tosha....................vbery nice words.............
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Pooja
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«Reply #52 on: June 28, 2005, 06:52:34 PM » |
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wafa karo khud se, ek apni jaan kaam ayegi
pregi jab museebat sir per, aor koi wafa na kaam ayegi!!!!!
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Tosha
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«Reply #53 on: June 28, 2005, 06:57:41 PM » |
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mohabbat mian majboor dil bhatkta hai
jaise peepal ke pedh pe vetal latakta hai
dekhta hai seene main jab yeh dil
lagta hai jaise angara sinee main loi jalta hai
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #54 on: June 28, 2005, 06:57:43 PM » |
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wah!!!!!!!!!! nice pooja.............
hum se nazrain na churana
hum se batain maat chupana
hum hain teray ashiq teray dewanay
ager koisitam karna too mat batana...............nm
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tanha dil tanha safar
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«Reply #55 on: June 29, 2005, 05:18:12 AM » |
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nice Tosha jiiiiiiiiiiii.
I don't want to interfere in ur love life but i can say that one day ur this wish will come true that u will meet that one who thinks that he deserves u.
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Tosha
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«Reply #56 on: June 30, 2005, 08:16:54 AM » |
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Kya khoob kaha aap ne
is dil ko sukun kaise de diya aap ne
tezab se lagta hai aab yeh aakhon ka pani
inhe chalekhe ka ek aur mauka dediya aap ne
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Tosha
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«Reply #57 on: July 04, 2005, 10:00:07 AM » |
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wonderfulllllllllll tosha....................vbery nice words............. :oops: Thanks a lot waheed!!! n Pooja n Tanha |
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Tosha
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«Reply #58 on: July 06, 2005, 06:50:03 AM » |
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hamari wafi ko bewafi samajh
tu zakhmo ko hamare raundhta chala gaya
tera har zulm saheti rahi par tu
mujhe kabhi samajh na saka
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Aryaan
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«Reply #59 on: July 06, 2005, 12:46:26 PM » |
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Bohat khoob Tosha, Pooja & Waheed.........
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