*_^ Tu door huva mujhse ki aab paas bhi nahi lagta *

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Tu door huva mujhse ki aab paas bhi nahi lagta

Teri kami mein aab kahin tera ehsaas bhi nahi lagta

Mujh jaise hain aab laakhon jahan mein tere

Fir main kyon aab tumhe khaas lagata

Tumne khushiyan kabhi mujhe itni di thi ke aaj

Tujh ko khone ka dil mein jara sa ehsaas bhi nahi lagata

Khuda ne kuchh yon door kar diya tumhari chahat se mujhe

Ke mujhe aab na rahi koi khwahish na rahi koi chahat...


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Re: *_^ Tu door huva mujhse ki aab paas bhi nahi lagta *_^

«Reply #1 on: August 18, 2010, 09:41:28 AM »

wah


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Re: *_^ Tu door huva mujhse ki aab paas bhi nahi lagta *_^

«Reply #2 on: August 18, 2010, 10:18:47 AM »

good one nice tried ranchoo....
kahin bhatkav sa laga mujhe kuchh lines me par overall bahut badhiya he~lage raho ..likhte raho ..khush raho


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Re: *_^ Tu door huva mujhse ki aab paas bhi nahi lagta *_^

«Reply #3 on: August 18, 2010, 10:35:44 AM »

sukriya abhi, main tum logo ki tarah likh nahi sakata kyon ki mujhe itana sab samjh me nahi aata hai par fir bhi koshish kar leta hu dost.


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Re: *_^ Tu door huva mujhse ki aab paas bhi nahi lagta *_^

«Reply #4 on: August 19, 2010, 05:51:45 AM »

mere dost koshish karne se to bhagwan bhi milta he or ham to zammen ke paththar he koshish karoge to aap asmaan bhi ho jaoge~


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Re: *_^ Tu door huva mujhse ki aab paas bhi nahi lagta *_^

«Reply #5 on: August 19, 2010, 06:15:09 AM »

rancho ji mast likha hai re.......and mujhe ye dekh k itni khushi ho rahi hai k aap likh rahe ho...
jise shayri se itni chidh thi aaj wo likh raha hai........

ohhhhhhhh wowwwwwww.......mast re


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Re: *_^ Tu door huva mujhse ki aab paas bhi nahi lagta *_^

«Reply #6 on: August 19, 2010, 06:24:32 AM »

SUKRIYA ANAMIKA JI, HA KYA KARUN AAP SAB LOGO KO LIKHATE DEKH KAR MERA BHI KUCHH MAN KIYA TO LIKH LIYA... BAKI TO MUJHE NA SHABDO KA GYAN HAI AUR NA HI USAKI KOI SAMAJ, JAISE AAP SAB LOG LIKH LETE HO...


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Re: *_^ Tu door huva mujhse ki aab paas bhi nahi lagta *_^

«Reply #7 on: August 19, 2010, 06:52:37 AM »

Laga mujhe sangat ka asar hota hai.....

RDI... tame saras lakhva laagya chho...

Yu na ho tu maayoos aai mere dost
Mausam hamesha ek sa nahee rehta

Baharein phir lautengi samajh le
Chahat kay beej tu fir se bo le....

Quote from: Rancho-D-Idiot on August 17, 2010, 08:29:10 AM


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Re: *_^ Tu door huva mujhse ki aab paas bhi nahi lagta *_^

«Reply #8 on: August 19, 2010, 07:01:40 AM »

HA TARI VAAT TO SACHI CHHE KOYAL..

JEVI SANGAT EVI RANGAT...

PAN AA VAAT SAV SACHI NATHI

Aaj arse baad jab suni teri awaaz,
To laga ki mere bahut pass hai tu..

Ho gayi dil me ek meethi si halchal,
Jab hosh aaya, Aur paya to mahesu huva,
Ki kabhi naa puri hone wali aas hai tu..


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