tu haan tu........

by smruti on July 29, 2011, 09:04:28 AM
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meri saans hai tu,
meri dil bhi hai tu,
aane wale har pal har kal
bas tu haan tu........

ek aas hai jo jalta hai,
tujhse milne ko marta hai,
par tu to nahi hai meri raahon par
phir bhi dikhe kyun har aah mein tu haan tu...............

jine ki koi wajah de,
aasun ko koi jagah de,
ruhu bhi awaj de rahi,
palt ke waapas aaja jahan bhi hai tu haan tu.....
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Sanjeev kash
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«Reply #1 on: July 29, 2011, 09:49:48 AM »
Good Smruti Ji
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sbechain
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«Reply #2 on: August 03, 2011, 06:53:30 PM »
Quote from: smruti on July 29, 2011, 09:04:28 AM
meri saans hai tu,
meri dil bhi hai tu,
aane wale har pal har kal
bas tu haan tu........

ek aas hai jo jalta hai,
tujhse milne ko marta hai,
par tu to nahi hai meri raahon par
phir bhi dikhe kyun har aah mein tu haan tu...............

jine ki koi wajah de,
aasun ko koi jagah de,
ruhu bhi awaj de rahi,
palt ke waapas aaja jahan bhi hai tu haan tu.....

good
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«Reply #3 on: August 04, 2011, 04:31:21 AM »
bht achcha likha h...ek flow hai tumhare likhne me..padhne me maza aaya.....keep writing
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