Tu Hi Bata Main Kaya Karu....

by Pooja on February 21, 2006, 07:36:58 PM
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Ashaq hai, Tarap hai, main hu aor yah tanha raat
Tu hi bata main kaya karu….
Dil se na jaaye, ek pal ko bhi tera khayal
Tu hi bata main kaya karu….
Band karty hi ankhon ko, tere chune ka ho jo ahsaas
Tu hi bata main kaya karu…..
Bardati saanso mai, chadar ki silwate jab ho hatho mai
Tu hi bata main kaya karu…..
Ashaq ankhon mai, Tarap saanson mai aor main in Tanhan raato mai
Tu hi bata mai kaya karu…….
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niraj_191
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«Reply #1 on: February 22, 2006, 06:59:21 AM »
nice pooja...

hal jab raton main behal ho jaye
tanhayee ko apna hal-e-dil sunaya karo

jab kisi ka khayal dil jalaye
apne aansoon ko khud hi pi jaya karo

aankh bandh kar ke bhi koi samne aaye
khuli aankho se so jaya karo

tanha raton me koi khub sataye
yoindia me apna dard bataya karo
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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: February 22, 2006, 06:02:36 PM »
Thanks Niraj.. shayad is se acha jawab is poem ka ho hi nahi sakta tha. Bahoot hi acha likha hai apne!!

Tanhaion mai Yoindia ka hi to sahara hai
Mill jaaty hai sangi sathi, bahal jaata dil hamara hai

Khayal unke, shabad ban kar bahne lagty hai
Log kahty hai, Pooja tumne yah kaya likh dala hai

Khuli ankh ka sona, kaise sikhein yah pooja
Khuli ankhon mai ashaq aor band ankhon mai chehra wo matwala hai

Tanha raton mai, jab yandein satane lagati hai is dil ko
Rahta kahan phir yoindia aor apna koi vichara hai!!!!
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #3 on: February 22, 2006, 06:06:43 PM »
WOW.....Pooja ji.......majid bhai and niraj.......bahoot khoob......
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Pooja
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«Reply #4 on: February 22, 2006, 07:05:12 PM »
Thanks BD ji...app bhi likhaty kuch to aor acha lagta!!!

Bahoot khoob majid ji, bahoot hi acha likha hai apne….ek koshish meri bhi, shayad apko pasand aye!!!

Apni ruswai mai, tera chahra jab najar ayya
Chup rahne ke siwaye, nahi kuch aor najar ayya

Nind aaye to bas bhir koi sawera na ho
Her raat issi dua ko, humne hai dohraya

Sham atti hai mere angan mai, roj thaki thaki jaise
Uske na anne ka, gum shayd isko bhi hai, ho ayya

Her baat suni, her baat mani uski, ek sajdein ki tarah
Uski khushiyion mai, apna her jakham mai bhool ayya

Kuch pal jo usne hai meri zindagi ko mahkaya
Utna hi ab in ankhon ne hai ashaqo ko barsaya

Ek waqat tha jab chaha in ankhon ne sirf tujko dekhun
Kis tarah dekhun tuje, Ajj, tune yah nahi abhi batlaya

Tu mera kuch bhi nahi, aor mai tere siwaye kisi ki nahi
Na badla kuch bhi, waqat ne to mujko bahoot samjhaya!!!!
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niraj_191
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«Reply #5 on: February 23, 2006, 07:39:29 AM »
thanks majid and bd

g8 work by all.....
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niraj_191
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«Reply #6 on: February 23, 2006, 07:41:48 AM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
Thanks Niraj.. shayad is se acha jawab is poem ka ho hi nahi sakta tha. Bahoot hi acha likha hai apne!!

Tanhaion mai Yoindia ka hi to sahara hai
Mill jaaty hai sangi sathi, bahal jaata dil hamara hai

Khayal unke, shabad ban kar bahne lagty hai
Log kahty hai, Pooja tumne yah kaya likh dala hai

Khuli ankh ka sona, kaise sikhein yah pooja
Khuli ankhon mai ashaq aor band ankhon mai chehra wo matwala hai

Tanha raton mai, jab yandein satane lagati hai is dil ko
Rahta kahan phir yoindia aor apna koi vichara hai!!!!



wah wah wah kya bat hai, bahoot khub pooja!!!
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vikas2210
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«Reply #7 on: February 23, 2006, 05:24:41 PM »
very nice Pooja ji majid ji, niraj very nie.

koi to kurede mere bharte zakham
ke mujhe kahi zindgi se payar na ho jaye

rula ke tu mujhe hansaya mat kar
kahin mujhe hansi se payar na hojaye

kaya ha meri zindgi mai mat pucho
kahi muje tanhaiyo se payar na ho jaye...
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Pooja
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«Reply #8 on: February 26, 2006, 07:36:08 AM »
Good one majid!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #9 on: March 01, 2006, 03:43:58 PM »
her baat per aa jaye ansoo to kaya karu
lafaz hi jab ban jaye ansoo to kaya karu
Lakh chaha ki kisi ko ansoo na najar ayye
jab zindagi hi ban jaye ansoo, to kaya karu!!
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #10 on: March 01, 2006, 03:53:19 PM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
her baat per aa jaye ansoo to kaya karu
lafaz hi jab ban jaye ansoo to kaya karu
Lakh chaha ki kisi ko ansoo na najar ayye
jab zindagi hi ban jaye ansoo, to kaya karu!!


Ansoon jab bhi aaye Aankhon mein.....
Toh lafzo se inka bayan karo......
Agar Lafz hee bann jaye ansoon.......
Toh mujhe Pyar karo......!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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niraj_191
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«Reply #11 on: March 02, 2006, 07:02:34 AM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
her baat per aa jaye ansoo to kaya karu
lafaz hi jab ban jaye ansoo to kaya karu
Lakh chaha ki kisi ko ansoo na najar ayye
jab zindagi hi ban jaye ansoo, to kaya karu!!



nice words pooja and good reply bd....

dekh kar unke aanso mujhe rona na aaye to me kya karu
dard is dil ka koi samaj na paye to me kya karu
aansu jab dil ki aag me sukh jaye to me kya karu
juban ka hal jab nigahen bhi bayan na kar sake to me kya karu
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Pooja
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«Reply #12 on: March 02, 2006, 03:26:12 PM »
Good Reply Badnaam_Shayar ji!!

Mere ansoo mai mera payar bah gaya
Mili jab tujse najar, yah dil veeran rah gaya
Kis tarah in jakhmo ko chor kar aa jau
kis tarah Yandon se munh morr kar aa jau.....
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Pooja
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«Reply #13 on: March 02, 2006, 03:27:40 PM »
Good one niraj..

Dil, Ansoo, jakham, dard kuch aise kaam kar gaye
mai to rahi wahi, per mujko, mujme hi daffan kar gaye!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #14 on: March 02, 2006, 03:30:20 PM »
Nice wordings Majid.
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