~~"TU KISS JAHAAN ME KHO GAYA"~~

by k.shael on February 12, 2009, 10:58:30 AM
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«Reply #1 on: February 12, 2009, 10:59:01 AM »
Tu to chala gaya hai lekin yaqenn nahi aata ki ye
Mere saath kya se kya ho gaya…

Ham to rote rahenge ta-umar beete dino ki yaad me
Hasna to hothon ke liye gunaah ho gaya…

Sitara ek toota falak se au raise kho gaya, jaise daaman
Me laga daag ashqon se dho gaya…

Ek jaljala aaya aisa meri zindagi me ki sahil pe aake
Meri kashti ko doobo gaya...

Aab to jam-e-mehfil me gujregi zindagi apni tu to
Jaane kiss jahaan me kho gaya…

Shally.
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Talat
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«Reply #2 on: February 12, 2009, 11:03:06 AM »
Bohot Khoob Shally
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«Reply #3 on: February 12, 2009, 11:09:00 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on February 12, 2009, 11:03:06 AM
Bohot Khoob Shally

Shukriya Celmira Dear,

Aacha lagta agar aap bhi kuch likhti

Shally.
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«Reply #4 on: February 12, 2009, 11:12:52 AM »
Bahoth qoob shally acha din ba din dard paida hota ja raha hai shayari me apki !! Waise jo bhi apse aisa kar gaya uska afsos na karo wo ayega eak din !! kaise ayega niche ashar me padlo !!

Uska takkabor kissi din is qadar toot jayega !!
aaj tumhe thukrane wala kal gutno ke bal ayega !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #5 on: February 12, 2009, 11:14:16 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on February 12, 2009, 10:59:01 AM
Tu to chala gaya hai lekin yaqenn nahi aata ki ye
Mere saath kya se kya ho gaya…

Ham to rote rahenge ta-umar beete dino ki yaad me
Hasna to hothon ke liye gunaah ho gaya…

Sitara ek toota falak se au raise kho gaya, jaise daaman
Me laga daag ashqon se dho gaya…

Ek jaljala aaya aisa meri zindagi me ki sahil pe aake
Meri kashti ko doobo gaya...

Aab to jam-e-mehfil me gujregi zindagi apni tu to
Jaane kiss jahaan me kho gaya…

Shally.

Bohat Khoob shally as Qadeer said u are really writing well in Dard section.  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Dard itna bayaan kar, ke tera dil sam_bhel jaye
Itna na bayaan kar, ke mera dum nikal jaye

                             -SG-
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«Reply #6 on: February 12, 2009, 11:16:56 AM »
Quote from: abdulqadeer on February 12, 2009, 11:12:52 AM
Bahoth qoob shally acha din ba din dard paida hota ja raha hai shayari me apki !! Waise jo bhi apse aisa kar gaya uska afsos na karo wo ayega eak din !! kaise ayega niche ashar me padlo !!

Uska takkabor kissi din is qadar toot jayega !!
aaj tumhe thukrane wala kal gutno ke bal ayega !!

Qadeer Toopchi

Ise kehte hain dil_jale ke dil se nikli hui DUA  DOH
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«Reply #7 on: February 12, 2009, 11:17:13 AM »
Quote from: abdulqadeer on February 12, 2009, 11:12:52 AM
Bahoth qoob shally acha din ba din dard paida hota ja raha hai shayari me apki !! Waise jo bhi apse aisa kar gaya uska afsos na karo wo ayega eak din !! kaise ayega niche ashar me padlo !!

Uska takkabor kissi din is qadar toot jayega !!
aaj tumhe thukrane wala kal gutno ke bal ayega !!

Qadeer Toopchi

Shukriya Qadeer Ji,

Ki aapne apna keemti waqt diya,

Aur aapki 2 lines bahut hi aachi hai,


Shally.
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«Reply #8 on: February 12, 2009, 11:28:29 AM »
waah shally...very nice lines...and good presentation... Applause  Applause
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«Reply #9 on: February 12, 2009, 11:32:46 AM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on February 12, 2009, 11:14:16 AM
Dard itna bayaan kar, ke tera dil sam_bhel jaye
Itna na bayaan kar, ke mera dum nikal jaye

                             -SG-

Yaar sajid do line ke ashar ka tuition dedo yaar !! kya kamal ka mutala karte ho yaar sajid tum do line me !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #10 on: February 12, 2009, 02:16:17 PM »
waah waah Shally Behna, Kya Khoob Likha Hai,.

Ek Din Zaroor Aayega,.
Khuda Tujhe Teri Khushiyaan Lautaayega,.

Khush Raho, Aabaad Raho,.
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«Reply #11 on: February 12, 2009, 05:01:11 PM »
Bahut khoobsurat bayan hai shally.. Keep writing..


Tere Dard Ke Sailaab Ka Ehsaas Hai Mujhe Bhi Dost,
Dua Hai Tu Tair Aaye Inki Khamosh Toofani Lehron Se...


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«Reply #12 on: February 13, 2009, 07:22:33 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on February 12, 2009, 10:59:01 AM
Tu to chala gaya hai lekin yaqenn nahi aata ki ye
Mere saath kya se kya ho gaya…

Ham to rote rahenge ta-umar beete dino ki yaad me
Hasna to hothon ke liye gunaah ho gaya…

Sitara ek toota falak se au raise kho gaya, jaise daaman
Me laga daag ashqon se dho gaya…

Ek jaljala aaya aisa meri zindagi me ki sahil pe aake
Meri kashti ko doobo gaya...

Aab to jam-e-mehfil me gujregi zindagi apni tu to
Jaane kiss jahaan me kho gaya…

Shally.

WAH SHALLY , BAHUT HI KHOOB

JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #13 on: February 13, 2009, 01:56:53 PM »
Quote from: angel4u on February 12, 2009, 05:01:11 PM
Bahut khoobsurat bayan hai shally.. Keep writing..


Tere Dard Ke Sailaab Ka Ehsaas Hai Mujhe Bhi Dost,
Dua Hai Tu Na Tair Aaye Inki Khamosh Toofani Lehron Se...


Ameen

NA TAIR AAYE... Feared.
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«Reply #14 on: February 13, 2009, 04:37:04 PM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on February 13, 2009, 01:56:53 PM
NA TAIR AAYE... Feared.

Oops. sorry...
corrected..
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