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<>*Tu nahin to*<>

Tu nahin to zindagi mein aur kya reh jayega
Na main rahungi na mera wajud hi nazar aayega
Tere dum se chal rahi hain saansein o sanam
Tu na raha to ye dum apne aap hi nikal jayega
Tu nahin to..........

Tere karan hai saji, meri bindiya ye kangana
Tu hai jabtak maine paya hai ye rup rang apna
Ye roz naye rang mein sajna roz yun itrana
Ye saaj shringaaar sab kuch yun hi bikhar jayega
Tu nahin to........

Har shaks uthayega ungli, har nazar tarashegi badan
Mera uthna, baithna, baatein karna bhi jurm kehlayega
Tere bina sab taane denge ,ilzaam se mujhe sajayenge
Har taraf bas aansuon ka ek sailaab hi reh jayega
Tu nahin to........


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Re: <>*Tu nahin to*<>

«Reply #1 on: October 25, 2010, 06:53:45 AM »

bahut bahut khoob sarkaar... jawaab nahi aapka... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne.. mujhse achcha to nahi ban paaya .. par jaisa bhi bana post kar diya.. ajkal kuch jang sa lag gaya hai meri lekhni me... kuch banta hi nahi hai...

na kar aisi baatein main tera hoon tera hi rahunga,
banaya hai tujhe maine apna main tera apna hi rahunga,
na hoga kabhi ki main jaaun tujhse duur ek pal ke liye,
jana bhi pada agar to main jald hi laut ke aaunga,
o sanam, main tera hoon, bas tera hi banke rahunga....

pyaar mera jhoota nahi ki bas naam ke liye saath hoon main,
tujhe maana hai apna umra bhar ke liye tere saath hoon main,
tera sajna sawanra mere naam se hai ye maaloom hai mujhe,
tujhe sajaake hamesha rakhne ke liye tere sath rahunga,
o sanam, main tera hoon, bas tera hi banke rahunga....

kyun sochti bhi hai ki tujhpe zamane ki nazar padegi,
tu meri hain hamesha mere dil me chhupke rahegi,
main tujhpe nazar na padne dunga kabhi kisi bala ki,
main tujhe hamesha apne dil me chhupaake rakhunga,
o sanam, main tera hoon, bas tera hi banke rahunga....


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Re: <>*Tu nahin to*<>

«Reply #2 on: October 25, 2010, 07:25:00 AM »

superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb likha hai ji aapne ...bht bht mast..yunhilikhte rahiye koi jung nahin laga aapki kalam ko......


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Re: <>*Tu nahin to*<>

«Reply #3 on: October 25, 2010, 07:33:42 AM »

sabne bahot hi khoobsurat andaz me likha hai.....

keep writing...


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«Reply #4 on: October 25, 2010, 05:16:47 PM »

kya baat hai Kasak ji... aaj pyaar aur dard dono najar aaya aapme bahut hi khoob bahut hi badhiya likha hai waise to har line badhiya likhi hai aapne but last para amazing dear... aur ek gunaah karne ki izaaazat de dijiye agar ho sake to... first para ki 4th line mein ghut jaayega ki jagah agar aap NIKAL jayega kar sake to waise aap ki marzi hai main change karne waala kaun hota hun...
phir ek baar kahenge ki aapne bahut bahut achha likh aise hi likhte rehiye...

Intezar !


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Re: <>*Tu nahin to*<>

«Reply #5 on: October 25, 2010, 05:20:02 PM »

aur aap kapil bhai kya baat hai kya khubsurat jawaab diya hai aapne bahut khoob... yunhi bas humesha saath rahiye sabke, yahi chaahenge... bahut badhiya !

Intezar !

log kehte hain ki lag gayi hai Jang unki kalam ko, shayad wo
jaante nahin ki kalam chalti hai unki talwaar se bhi tez !

Intezar !


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Re: <>*Tu nahin to*<>

«Reply #6 on: October 25, 2010, 05:33:56 PM »

intezar ji kar diya jo aapne chnge karne kaha tha..and thnx k apne itna pasand kiya ise......


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Re: <>*Tu nahin to*<>

«Reply #7 on: October 25, 2010, 05:45:43 PM »

thanks aap ke liye bhi Kasak ji...

Intezar !


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Re: <>*Tu nahin to*<>

«Reply #8 on: October 25, 2010, 07:39:54 PM »

Bahut khoob kasak ji..


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Re: <>*Tu nahin to*<>

«Reply #9 on: October 26, 2010, 11:26:04 AM »

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 25, 2010, 04:25:44 AM

di hansti bolti shayri hi aap ki achi lagti hai
matlab mai ye nahi kahta ki ye buri hai magar aap ki fitrat aap ki jo aadat hai usme mujhe wo kasak hi achi lagi hai aaj tak jo sirf khush rahe ,,,,,,,,,,, ye sansarik dakiyanusi baaton ko karne wali kasak mujhe achi nahi lagti ,,, meri di ke mann me ek bhi aisi koi kasak baki nahi honi chahiye


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«Reply #10 on: October 26, 2010, 02:30:46 PM »

mast hai re........... Applause

Tu nahi tou ye mehfil koi mehfil nahi
Tu nahi tou ye mausam bhi koi mausam nahi....

Tere bina mera mann nahi lagta kahin bhee
Tera hona he hai mere liye tou jannat hai.....

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 25, 2010, 04:25:44 AM


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Re: <>*Tu nahin to*<>

«Reply #11 on: October 27, 2010, 09:29:34 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji... par mujhe apne writing me kuch touch missing sa lag raha hai...!!!

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 25, 2010, 07:25:00 AM

superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb likha hai ji aapne ...bht bht mast..yunhilikhte rahiye koi jung nahin laga aapki kalam ko......


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Re: <>*Tu nahin to*<>

«Reply #12 on: October 27, 2010, 09:30:00 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya...!!!

Quote from: samir_bc on October 25, 2010, 07:33:42 AM

sabne bahot hi khoobsurat andaz me likha hai.....

keep writing...


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Re: <>*Tu nahin to*<>

«Reply #13 on: October 27, 2010, 09:30:40 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya Bhai...!!!

Quote from: Intezar on October 25, 2010, 05:20:02 PM


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Re: <>*Tu nahin to*<>

«Reply #14 on: October 27, 2010, 09:32:35 AM »

bahut khoob likha hai Koyal...!!!

Quote from: KOYAL46 on October 26, 2010, 02:30:46 PM

Tu nahi tou ye mehfil koi mehfil nahi
Tu nahi tou ye mausam bhi koi mausam nahi....

Tere bina mera mann nahi lagta kahin bhee
Tera hona he hai mere liye tou jannat hai.....


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