Tujh ko haq hai, ki, saath soye lagaa seeney sey!

by abdbundeli on September 05, 2008, 06:57:58 AM

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angel4u

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«Reply #15 on: September 07, 2008, 12:29:09 PM »

Quote from: abdbundeli on September 07, 2008, 07:49:13 AM

angel4u,
Oh! I'm sorry! What's happened? How are you!!
You've beautiful visionary eyes, that speak a lot:
There is, of course, a tinge of pain over there:
That 'waiting fairy thing' seems has a plot!!
- abd bundeli

I am speechless regarding your descriptions,
Dont know what to say on your obligations,
There is someone who cant just understand your pains,
Thats the reason why eyes have to make pretentions...


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abdbundeli

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Re: Tujh ko haq hai, ki, saath soye lagaa seeney sey!

«Reply #16 on: September 07, 2008, 12:58:52 PM »

angel4uji,
Let's hope, events shall change for good, pretty soon;
And then, you'll find, you're both back into your past:
Where, moonlit nights shall find you coupled soon;
Under the rain-bow colours and twinkling skies!!
- abd bundeli


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angel4u

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Re: Tujh ko haq hai, ki, saath soye lagaa seeney sey!

«Reply #17 on: September 07, 2008, 01:11:25 PM »

Thanks for your wishes that i needed so much,
As the only thing i crave my past in future so much,
But i know things cant change pretty soon,
Lets hope it to happen but only if God loves me so much...


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abdbundeli

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Re: Tujh ko haq hai, ki, saath soye lagaa seeney sey!

«Reply #18 on: September 07, 2008, 02:44:55 PM »

angel4u ji,
God loves all loving hearts and lovely minds!
HIS KINDNESS knows no bounds: pours limitless love!!
Your eyes see lovely things midst pining pains:
That 'fairy-babe', proves well, you're just a dove!!
- abd bundeli


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angel4u

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Re: Tujh ko haq hai, ki, saath soye lagaa seeney sey!

«Reply #19 on: September 08, 2008, 02:45:49 PM »

wonderful..
I know God does love me but doesnt want my happiness,
I am drowning in tears as the day passes,
when he didnt wanted me to be with my love,
why he showed me dreams which had no ends...


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Muhammed

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Re: Tujh ko haq hai, ki, saath soye lagaa seeney sey!

«Reply #20 on: September 09, 2008, 05:02:56 AM »

abd babu...aur aap Angel jee aapka naam To Maloom Nahi..

aap k English Lines meri kuch samaz me naa ati hai..maafi chahta hun par muje english nahi aati...aap agar ise hindi urdu me likhate to mere liye asani hoti..khair koi bat nahi lekin sub log aap jaise nahi ho sakte jo asaani se samaz sake..maafi chahta hun.


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abdbundeli

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Re: Tujh ko haq hai, ki, saath soye lagaa seeney sey!

«Reply #21 on: September 09, 2008, 05:50:21 AM »

Muhammed sa'b,
Ramadaan/Ramzaan kaa, 'rozoun' kaa, maheenaa hai: is liye 'jo lafz' aap ko nagawaar hotey hain, mein unhain isteymaal mein naheen laa rahaa hoon! Iseeliye Urdu/Hindi key saath, English key alfazoun kaa bhi sahaaraa leynaa parh rahaa hai! Koshish karoongaa, aap ko takleef na ho!
-abd bundeli


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abdbundeli

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Re: Tujh ko haq hai, ki, saath soye lagaa seeney sey!

«Reply #22 on: September 09, 2008, 06:12:12 AM »

angel4u ji,
Woh sab kee khushee chaahtaa hai, aapkee bhi, haan!
Us key yahaan ho deir bhaley, par naheen andheir!
Aayeygee qayaamat, koyi hazaar saal ba'ad ;
Par sabra sey, qabroun mein hain, jannat key liye log:
Haalaanki, dozakhoun kaa dar bhi, sir pai hai sawaar!
Kartey hain ishq jo, unhain rakhtaa hai Khudaa yaad:
Pahloo mein bithaataa hai, bazm-e-hashra mein, apney!
Sab hogaa theek-thaak, 'abd', hai dahar kaa feir!!
- abd bundeli


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Muhammed

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Re: Tujh ko haq hai, ki, saath soye lagaa seeney sey!

«Reply #23 on: September 09, 2008, 06:49:47 AM »

abd babu jo Lafz " Ramdaan " hai sahih Hai Lekin " Ramjaan " Hai aap ne Likha Hai maafi chahta hun aap ko arabic huroof ka Itna pakka Ilm To na hoga aakhir shayar jo Thehre..
To Bata dun Ki..arabic Mei " Ram"d"aan " Istemal hua huroof "DAAD" ya "DVAAD"
Farsi Urdu " Ram"z"aan " Nahi Ki " Jaan " yahaan Istemal Hua Urdu k qaayede Mutabeeq "ZVAAD" ya "ZAAD".
Matlub RA M ZAA N..na ki Jaa N

Maaf karna abd babu..Islaah wajeeb thi To kar di.

Aur Maf Krna Angel Jee

Thread par is Tarhaa Guftgu ki Jo Ki Maine


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abdbundeli

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Re: Tujh ko haq hai, ki, saath soye lagaa seeney sey!

«Reply #24 on: September 09, 2008, 08:19:40 AM »

Muhammed sa'b,
Meyree 'maatrubhaashhaa' Hindi hai, aur us mein eik hi 'j' hotaa hai, iseeliye 'j' sey miltee-jultee Urdu kee chhah (06) 'dwaniyoun' ko samajhney mein, kabhi-kabhaar, mujh sey chook ho jaatee hai; isee sey 'Ramzaan' ko 'Ramjaan' likh gayaa thaa, sudhaarey dey rahaa hoon! Shukriyaa!
- abd bundeli


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angel4u

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Re: Tujh ko haq hai, ki, saath soye lagaa seeney sey!

«Reply #25 on: September 09, 2008, 03:06:08 PM »

Ye kya hogaya...............


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abdbundeli

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Re: Tujh ko haq hai, ki, saath soye lagaa seeney sey!

«Reply #26 on: September 10, 2008, 03:23:00 AM »

angel4u ji,
Kuchh naheen! mashwirah thaa ustaadee!
Aur, ustaad to, hotey hi hain ustaad barhey!!
Ham to aashiq hain adab key bahut hi maamoolee;
Adab-e-Urdu key to hain saikrhoun ustaad barhey!!
- abd bundeli


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angel4u

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Re: Tujh ko haq hai, ki, saath soye lagaa seeney sey!

«Reply #27 on: September 10, 2008, 01:52:41 PM »

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
aisi baat hai...


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RAUF RAHI

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Re: Tujh ko haq hai, ki, saath soye lagaa seeney sey!

«Reply #28 on: September 12, 2008, 05:13:36 PM »

YU NA MUJHKO DEKH TERA DIL PEGAL JA -E GA
MERE ASOOVOOSE TERA DAMAAN PEGAL JA-E GA


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abdbundeli

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Re: Tujh ko haq hai, ki, saath soye lagaa seeney sey!

«Reply #29 on: September 12, 2008, 05:32:47 PM »

RAUF RAHI ji,
Deykhney deejiye us but ko, rokiye na usey:
Nazar jalaatee hai, marham bhi lagaa deytee hai!
Yeh bhi hotaa hai kabhi, raah-e-zeest mein, ae 'abd',
Chashm tar, khwaab mein, sotey ko jagaa deytee hai!!
- abd bundeli