Tujh ko paa kar bhi kho diya humne...!!

by Talat on February 01, 2007, 11:35:28 AM
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Samajh kar bhi na samajh paaye tujhe hum
Jaane anjaane tera dil dukha diya humne

Tune to sada rakha tha palkon par saja kar
Khud ko us muqaam se gira diya humne

Mohabbat ek naam hai aitemaad ka, lekin
Mohabbat ko apni ruswa kar diya humne

Lafzon ke zakhm bharte nahin hain kabhi
Phir bhi kyun tujhe yoon zakhm diya humne

Umr bhar ka yeh dukh dil main basa liya
Tujh ko paa kar bhi aaj kho diya humne
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Shikha12
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«Reply #1 on: February 01, 2007, 12:59:23 PM »
Bahut hi khoob Talat... =D>

Aaj mood kuch aisa hi hai.. sad5 toh, Kuch line main bhi likh deti hoon yahan...


Ruswaii ka kuch darr bhi tha,
Kuch thi kamzori haalaat ki…
Chaha tumhe bata doon magar,
Zubaan ne saath nibhaaya nahin...

Tu nazar mey meri raha sanam,
Magar Dil se ek faaslaa liye…
Tamaam umr meri guzar gayii,
Tujhe paa kar bhi paayaa nahin…
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(Baaki phir kabhi........)
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #2 on: February 01, 2007, 01:54:53 PM »
bohat achhe Talat N shikha... nice posts !!!
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Talat
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«Reply #3 on: February 02, 2007, 06:15:40 PM »
Thanks Shikha and Jeet...Very nice Shikha !
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nikki
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«Reply #4 on: February 02, 2007, 06:29:39 PM »
wonderfull Talat n Shikha sis...

kissi ko paane ki chahat mein
apne dil ko jala liya humne

woh kissi aur ki kismat tha
magar na jaane fir bhi kyun
usko paane ki umeed rakhi
aur apne seene mein har gum ko chupa liya humne
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angel4u
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«Reply #5 on: February 02, 2007, 09:09:30 PM »
Beautiful shikhaji talat ji, and nikki...
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angel4u
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«Reply #6 on: February 02, 2007, 09:13:39 PM »
gamke samundar ko seene mein chhupa ke rakha hai humne,
kismat ki lakeeron se jhagad kar chaha hai unhe,
pata hai ulajh jayegi hamari mohabbat in lakeeron mein,
phir bhi na jane kyon itni shiddat se chaha hai unhe...
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«Reply #7 on: February 03, 2007, 04:22:11 AM »
bahut khoob Talat ..Shikha ..Angle ...and Nikki ... Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: February 03, 2007, 12:39:23 PM »
bahut good Talat, shikha, nikki n angel

sare ki saari kudiya hi hai kyuna in kudiyon ke beech main ek munda bhi kuch likhu



tujh ko paaker bhi kho diya maine
jaan ker bhi ye gunah kiya maine

zindaghi bewajah si ban gayi hai ab
ghum ko aagosh me apni le liya maine

tere pyar-wo-wafa ke kabil  nahi ye dil mera
is liye tere raaste se khud ko hata liya maine

umer bher ka ye dukh dil me basa liya
tujh ko paa ker bhi kho diya maine
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angel4u
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«Reply #9 on: February 03, 2007, 05:08:54 PM »
ye dekh ke ek gaana yaad aata hai...
munda kamaal.. oye munda kamaal...
Kidding tongue3

Lovely writing...
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #10 on: February 03, 2007, 06:31:12 PM »
very  nice Talat...........  Shikha......  Angel......   sabhi ne  accha likha........
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Talat
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«Reply #11 on: February 03, 2007, 07:26:54 PM »
Thanks Nikki, Angel, Ranju, Sam, and Waheed....! Usual Smile

Aur bohot achcha kudiyon - Nikki and Angel...and munde Sam Winking
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angel4u
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«Reply #12 on: February 03, 2007, 08:04:45 PM »
Thanks talat ji :oops:
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salil2002
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«Reply #13 on: February 04, 2007, 05:21:26 PM »
nice creation frm u talat.................

saath hoon tere par door hone ka ehsaas hai......................
samandar main rehta hoon par phir bhi bujhti nahi ye pyaas hai........
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Talat
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«Reply #14 on: February 04, 2007, 05:32:34 PM »
Thank You Salil :D ...thats was nice !!

Pyaas bujhti nahin ankhon ki, har pal dekhne ko tarsen
Tujh ko karen har pal yaad, har raat toot kar barsen !!
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