tujhe bhulaane ki koshish... Intezar !

by Intezar on March 06, 2013, 02:00:40 AM
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khud ko teri nisbat se bachaane ki koshish bahut ki
aye yaar humne tujhe bhulaane ki koshish bahut ki

Lahoo se likhi thi har tehreer teri, raakh na huyi
tere har khat ko humne jalaane ki koshish bahut ki

sakht hai asar teri sanso ka, kaise ma’doom kare
in laboN se har naqsh mitaane ki koshish bahut ki

mukammal na huyi kanaaro par taameer ishq ki
humne ret par khwaab sajaane ki koshish bahut ki

phir na khuli aankhe  jo soya uska khwaab lekar
maut ki neend se usne jagaane ki koshish bahut ki

sab talaf hai ye deeda-e-tar baad mere Intezar
ek muddat se unhe ye bataane ki koshish bahut ki…!

Shukriya
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«Reply #1 on: March 06, 2013, 02:13:16 AM »
Waah Waah Waaah...

Bahut Bahut Khooooob Intezaar Ji..

Kya kehne, Har Ashaar Lajawaab

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«Reply #2 on: March 06, 2013, 02:18:21 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: March 06, 2013, 04:47:51 AM »
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waah kyaa baat hai bhaai... bahut bahut khoob likha hai....!!!
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«Reply #4 on: March 06, 2013, 07:21:04 AM »
sukrya
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janaab aapko hum sukriya kahte hain itni khubsurat nagme ke lie

behad khoob aur umda kalaam kahi hai aapne aur yahi to hai aapka kamaal
lajawaab kalaam ji
dili daad aur mubarakbaad--

suna tha ke Intezar ka fal meetha hota hai, janaab aaj to dekh bhi lia humne tongue3

ab se itna Intezar na karwana aap

khus rahie
aate rahie
god bless u dear
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«Reply #5 on: March 06, 2013, 08:41:32 AM »
wah wah
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«Reply #6 on: March 06, 2013, 12:32:42 PM »
ufffffffffffff intezaarrr kya mastam mast gazal likhi hai yaarrr....... ekdum dhamaka...... itne din baad aakar maza aagaya...... man to karta hai har gazal ka reply karun par ab likhne ki aadat hi kho gai...... bas kya kahun yaar bht bht mast likha hai sachhciiiiiiiiiiiii.......
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«Reply #7 on: March 06, 2013, 12:33:55 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob Thumbs UP
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«Reply #8 on: March 06, 2013, 01:06:33 PM »
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Bahut bahut bahut hi khoob. har ek sher khoob the. padhkar bahut achcha laga. meri dili mubarakbad ko qubool kare.
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«Reply #9 on: March 06, 2013, 02:14:23 PM »

khud ko teri nisbat se bachaane ki koshish bahut ki
aye yaar humne tujhe bhulaane ki koshish bahut ki
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Lahoo se likhi thi har tehreer teri, raakh na huyi
tere har khat ko humne jalaane ki koshish bahut ki
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
sakht hai asar teri sanso ka, kaise ma’doom kare
in laboN se har naqsh mitaane ki koshish bahut ki
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
mukammal na huyi kanaaro par taameer ishq ki
humne ret par khwaab sajaane ki koshish bahut ki
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
phir na khuli aankhe  jo soya uska khwaab lekar
maut ki neend se usne jagaane ki koshish bahut ki
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
sab talaf hai ye deeda-e-tar baad mere Intezar
ek muddat se unhe ye bataane ki koshish bahut ki…!
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Shukriya
Intezar !


WONNNNNNNDDDDDDDEEEEEEEEERRRRRRFFFFFFFFFUUUULLLLL LLL!!!
LAJWAB ,,HAR ASHAAR PE DAAD..
EK RAU TO BANTA HAI....
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«Reply #10 on: March 06, 2013, 02:20:37 PM »
Just awesome gazal......... Hazarondaad aur mubarkbaad ....aur ek rau bhi is lajawab kalaam ke liye
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«Reply #11 on: March 06, 2013, 02:26:42 PM »
waah , Intezar saheb.Kya khubsurat kalaam pesh kiya hai.
Tabiat khush kar di. bahut mubarakbaad aur daad.HASAN
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«Reply #12 on: March 06, 2013, 03:47:33 PM »

khud ko teri nisbat se bachaane ki koshish bahut ki
aye yaar humne tujhe bhulaane ki koshish bahut ki

Lahoo se likhi thi har tehreer teri, raakh na huyi
tere har khat ko humne jalaane ki koshish bahut ki

sakht hai asar teri sanso ka, kaise ma’doom kare
in laboN se har naqsh mitaane ki koshish bahut ki

mukammal na huyi kanaaro par taameer ishq ki
humne ret par khwaab sajaane ki koshish bahut ki

phir na khuli aankhe  jo soya uska khwaab lekar
maut ki neend se usne jagaane ki koshish bahut ki

sab talaf hai ye deeda-e-tar baad mere Intezar
ek muddat se unhe ye bataane ki koshish bahut ki…!

Shukriya
Intezar !



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«Reply #13 on: March 06, 2013, 05:19:02 PM »

khud ko teri nisbat se bachaane ki koshish bahut ki
aye yaar humne tujhe bhulaane ki koshish bahut ki

Lahoo se likhi thi har tehreer teri, raakh na huyi
tere har khat ko humne jalaane ki koshish bahut ki

sakht hai asar teri sanso ka, kaise ma’doom kare
in laboN se har naqsh mitaane ki koshish bahut ki

mukammal na huyi kanaaro par taameer ishq ki
humne ret par khwaab sajaane ki koshish bahut ki

phir na khuli aankhe  jo soya uska khwaab lekar
maut ki neend se usne jagaane ki koshish bahut ki

sab talaf hai ye deeda-e-tar baad mere Intezar
ek muddat se unhe ye bataane ki koshish bahut ki…!

Shukriya
Intezar !



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«Reply #14 on: March 06, 2013, 06:45:31 PM »
वाह बहोत खूब
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