~*~*~Tujhko Bhi Yaad Aayenge~*~*~

by pankshivam on February 08, 2009, 11:49:11 PM
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pankshivam
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Ye gali, ye raste zindagi k tujhe bhi yaad aayenge,
Aaya tha ek musafir kehkar ye ashk bahayenge...

Kah na saka apne labzo me kuch mai tujhse kabhi,
Tere hotho ke vo manzar, muskurakar bhi meri dastan sunayenge...

Aalam hoga bechaini ka, mai bhi dur rah jaunga tujhse ,
Milekar ye shikayat na karna, jb baki sare arman reh jayenge....

Na de pau tujhe koi nishani to fikr na kar,
Aayegi mera pata puchate kabhi, jb mere kadamo ke nishan reh jayenge...

Mai rahunga har pal teri sanso se wakif,
Mere labz kal jab teri zuban pe aayenge...

Kiya na kabhi maine wafaon ka vada tujhse,
Toh kis tarah tere hoth mujhpe bewafayi ka ilzam lagayenge...

Aaj ja raha hun ruthkar tanhayi me fir se,
Ummid na hogi ab utni, k meri kabr pe in askon ke phool mujhe manayenge...
~Pank~


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Pooja
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«Reply #1 on: February 08, 2009, 11:55:50 PM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

wah wah wah kaya baat hai Pank ji..... bahoot khoob!!
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pankshivam
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«Reply #2 on: February 09, 2009, 12:04:27 AM »
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

wah wah wah kaya baat hai Pank ji..... bahoot khoob!!
Shukriya Poojaji
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #3 on: February 09, 2009, 06:39:27 AM »
wah wha. seriously tareef k kabil. bahoot khoob Pank.
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pankshivam
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«Reply #4 on: February 09, 2009, 06:53:48 AM »
wah wha. seriously tareef k kabil. bahoot khoob Pank.
Shukriya Sophiji
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rawattanha
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«Reply #5 on: February 09, 2009, 07:18:20 AM »
wah :clap:wah :clap:wah wah Applause :clap:wah bhai wah Clapping Smiley

nice work  pank ji.
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pankshivam
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«Reply #6 on: February 09, 2009, 07:35:56 AM »
wah Applause wah Applause wah wah Applause Applause wah bhai wah Clapping Smiley

nice work  pank ji.
Shukriya Tanhaji
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Roja
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«Reply #7 on: February 09, 2009, 07:49:34 AM »
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Very good... Pank ji bahut umda likha aapne. Thumbs UP
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pankshivam
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«Reply #8 on: February 09, 2009, 07:56:25 AM »
Applause Applause Applause

Very good... Pank ji bahut umda likha aapne. Thumbs UP
Shukriya Rojaji
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salil2002
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«Reply #9 on: February 09, 2009, 08:23:49 AM »

Ye gali ye raste zindagi tujhko bhi yaad aayenge,
Aaya tha ek musafir kehkar ye ashk bahayenge...

Na de pau tujhe koi nishani to fikr na kar,
Aayegi mera pata puchate huye kabhi, aaise mere kadamo ke nishan reh jayenge...

Kah na saka apne labzo me kuch mai tujhse kabhi,
Tere hotho ke vo manzar, rokar bhi meri dastan sunayenge...

Aalam hoga bechaini ka, mai bhi dur rah jaunga tujhse us pal,
Milegi to shikayat na karna, ke baki tere arman reh jayenge....

Mai rahunga har pal teri sanso se wakif,
Mere labz kal jab teri zuban pe aayenge...

Kiya na kabhi maine vafao ka vada tujhse,
Toh kis tarah tere hoth mujhpe bewafayi ka ilzam lagayenge...

Aaj ja raha hun ruthkar tanhayi me fir se,
Na aaunga vapas jab meri kabr pe tere asko ke phool mujhe manayenge...
~Pank~



bahut hi touching lines hai pank bhai lekin agar font size thoda chhota kar dete toh achcha rehta


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abdulqadeer
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«Reply #10 on: February 09, 2009, 08:26:43 AM »
Bahoth qoob janab !! bahoth hi acha likha hai apne !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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pankshivam
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«Reply #11 on: February 09, 2009, 08:58:44 AM »
bahut hi touching lines hai pank bhai lekin agar font size thoda chhota kar dete toh achcha rehta



Shukriya SalilBhai
Font Size Chhoti Kar Raha hun oki
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pankshivam
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«Reply #12 on: February 09, 2009, 08:59:44 AM »
Bahoth qoob janab !! bahoth hi acha likha hai apne !!

Qadeer Toopchi
Shukriya Qadeer Sahab
Aapne Meri Post Pe Likha Uske Liye Sukrgujar hun
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #13 on: February 09, 2009, 09:22:27 AM »
Bohat Khoob ek behtareen peshkash Shivam.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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pankshivam
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«Reply #14 on: February 09, 2009, 09:41:32 AM »
Wah Wah Shivam Sahab Kya Khoob Andaz.e.Bayaan Hai
Bohat Hi Umda Likha Hai Aapne Maza Aa Gaya
Khaskar Ye Lines To Dil Mein Utar Gayi Bohat Khoob Keep It Up.
Shukriya Shihab Sahab
Ye Line Mere Liye Bhi Bahoot Kareeb hai
Bohat Khoob ek behtareen peshkash Shivam.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Shukriya Ghayel Sahab
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