~*~*~Tujhko Bhi Yaad Aayenge~*~*~

by pankshivam on February 08, 2009, 11:49:11 PM
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«Reply #15 on: February 09, 2009, 05:03:11 PM »
  Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause  jab mujse koi puchega ke yoindia pe apka fav poet kaun hai toh Pank jee apka hi naam honthon pe ayega...wah kamal ka likte ho mere bhai...jiss din yeh Rahim apke jaise koi peshkash kar paega uss din hi apne aap ko ek lekhak bulaega...



ek din uss bewaffa se hum takraenge,
jante hai hum uss din hamesha ke liye marjaenge,
par dard ke nishan zarur dejayega Rahim uss bewaffa ko,
par uske baad hum bhi sirf ek bewaffa hi kehlaenge...
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«Reply #16 on: February 09, 2009, 06:23:34 PM »
  Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause  jab mujse koi puchega ke yoindia pe apka fav poet kaun hai toh Pank jee apka hi naam honthon pe ayega...wah kamal ka likte ho mere bhai...jiss din yeh Rahim apke jaise koi peshkash kar paega uss din hi apne aap ko ek lekhak bulaega...



ek din uss bewaffa se hum takraenge,
jante hai hum uss din hamesha ke liye marjaenge,
par dard ke nishan zarur dejayega Rahim uss bewaffa ko,
par uske baad hum bhi sirf ek bewaffa hi kehlaenge...

Shukriya Rahim Bhai
Mere liye ye bahoot jyada hai...
Bahoot khoob Likha
Last ki do lines Bahhot Achhi Likhi hai
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«Reply #17 on: February 10, 2009, 06:11:37 PM »
Shukriya Pank jee... sach bol raha hoon ke hume apki likhi hui shayarian bahaut pasand hai...dil se padte hai hum aur saanson se samajte hai...likte rahiye...


tere saath rehke jeete jee hi marjaunga,
marte marte main tujhe tod jaunga,
kaun kehte bewaffai bhulai nahin jati,
vaada raha iss duniya main jeeke hi tujhe bhulaunga...

tujhe mita kar hi hum tootjaenge,
tujhe todkar hi hum jee jayenge,
mat karna rahem ki umeed humse ae bewaffa,
tujhe dard dekar hi toh hum khushi payenge...
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pankshivam
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«Reply #18 on: February 11, 2009, 06:33:23 PM »
Shukriya Rahim
Aapne Bahoot khoob likha is bar bhi

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Pooja
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«Reply #19 on: February 11, 2009, 06:35:17 PM »
wah kaya baat hai... bahoot khoob DH JI!!
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dead heart
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«Reply #20 on: February 13, 2009, 05:33:12 AM »
Shukriya Rahim
Aapne Bahoot khoob likha is bar bhi

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wah kaya baat hai... bahoot khoob DH JI!!

bahaut bahaut shukriya apka Pooja jee aur Pank jee....ap dono yoindia pe mere fav riters hai aur ap logon ne humari tariff karke hume bahaut acha feel karaya hai...thnx!!!
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«Reply #21 on: May 13, 2009, 11:51:37 PM »
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #22 on: August 25, 2009, 09:31:54 PM »
Bahut khoob Shivam Ji
N Good response Rahim Ji
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pankshivam
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«Reply #23 on: December 19, 2009, 10:18:28 AM »
Thanks Rahul, Thanks Rajeshji
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