Tujhpar Aitbaar Kuch Zyaada Kiya "Khwaish"

by khwaish on September 03, 2011, 10:22:30 AM
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Dushman Ko Dushmani Ka Yeh Sila Do
Bas Usse Apni Nazron Se Giira Do
                     ~Ehsaan~

Har Kadam Par Tere Saath Chalne Ka Iraada Kiya
Kabhi Door Naa Ho Paayenge Ek Aisa Waada Kiya

Yehi Raha Humein Afsos Umarbhar Ka Eh Dost!!!!
Kya Humne Tujhpar Aitbaar Kuch Zyaada Kiya???

Tujhse Door Rehkar Tujhe Bhool Hi Jaayenge Hum!!!
Yeh Sochkar Hi Humne Apna Dard Aadha Kiya

Tujhse Haath Milaakar Hum Bhi Apni Raah Chal Padhe
Yakeenan Humne Tujhpar Apna Aitbaar Kuch Zyaada Kiya

              ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: September 03, 2011, 10:30:27 AM »
Quote from: khwaish on September 03, 2011, 10:22:30 AM
Dushman Ko Dushmani Ka Yeh Sila Do
Bas Usse Apni Nazron Se Giira Do
                     ~Ehsaan~

Har Kadam Par Tere Saath Chalne Ka Iraada Kiya
Kabhi Door Naa Ho Paayenge Ek Aisa Waada Kiya

Yehi Raha Humein Afsos Umarbhar Ka Eh Dost!!!!
Kya Humne Tujhpar Aitbaar Kuch Zyaada Kiya???

Tujhse Door Rehkar Tujhe Bhool Hi Jaayenge Hum!!!
Yeh Sochkar Hi Humne Apna Dard Aadha Kiya

Tujhse Haath Milaakar Hum Bhi Apni Raah Chal Padhe
Yakeenan Humne Tujhpar Apna Aitbaar Kuch Zyaada Kiya

              ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


bahut khoob


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«Reply #2 on: September 03, 2011, 10:48:09 AM »
Isi ko kahte hai kad ke anusar Shayri.
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«Reply #3 on: September 03, 2011, 10:50:05 AM »
Quote from: mkv on September 03, 2011, 10:48:09 AM
Isi ko kahte hai kad ke anusar Shayri.
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ji main aapka Comment samjha nahi..zara samjhaiye??
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«Reply #4 on: September 03, 2011, 10:51:42 AM »
Quote from: Sheba on September 03, 2011, 10:30:27 AM

bahut khoob


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Aapka Shukriya Sheba jiiii
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«Reply #5 on: September 03, 2011, 11:00:47 AM »
Khwahish ji
In the world of Yoindia " U R Umda Shayar" Maine apki Umda shayri ke liye aisa kaha.
Mai to chota sa sipahi hoo aur aap senapati jaise. mai appe koi comment nahi kar sakta. Ha Vah Vah to kar hi sakta hu.
Shukriya
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«Reply #6 on: September 03, 2011, 11:39:06 AM »
Quote from: mkv on September 03, 2011, 11:00:47 AM
Khwahish ji
In the world of Yoindia " U R Umda Shayar" Maine apki Umda shayri ke liye aisa kaha.
Mai to chota sa sipahi hoo aur aap senapati jaise. mai appe koi comment nahi kar sakta. Ha Vah Vah to kar hi sakta hu.
Shukriya

Mkv Ji, plzzz aisa na kahe..aapne jo izzat-bakshi hai main uske bilkul laayak nahi balki main yeh kahunga ke main Umda to door ki baat hai Main Shayar bhi nahi hoon..bas Jazbaaton ko lafzon mein utaarne ki koshish karta rehta hoon,aap jaise doston ki baudalat likhta rehta hoon..Aapka tehhhhhhh dilllll se shukriya..aur haan Yahan Hum Sab Senapati Hi Hai Koi Sipahi nahi tongue3
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«Reply #7 on: September 03, 2011, 11:50:18 AM »
Thank u khwahish ji.
"i could make u understand" is a great achievement. Bus apse yahi chahta hu ki meri hauslaafjai karte rahe, jab mai kuch likhta hu aur aap comment karte hai to bahut accha lagta hai.
Itna yaad rakhiye apne mujhe dost kaha hai ye mere liye badi cheez hai.
regards
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«Reply #8 on: September 03, 2011, 11:55:03 AM »
Kya baat hai Khwaish dost..
Haan uss par aitbaar kuch zyada kiya..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #9 on: September 03, 2011, 12:12:24 PM »
Khwaish ki ehsaaso ki kya tareef karu...
ki har lafz khud apni tareef bayan karta hai... Usual Smile

bahut hi khoob aur umda khwaish bhai.... Usual Smile Usual Smile

dhero daad ish nazm pe...
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«Reply #10 on: September 03, 2011, 12:51:39 PM »
Quote from: mkv on September 03, 2011, 11:50:18 AM
Thank u khwahish ji.
"i could make u understand" is a great achievement. Bus apse yahi chahta hu ki meri hauslaafjai karte rahe, jab mai kuch likhta hu aur aap comment karte hai to bahut accha lagta hai.
Itna yaad rakhiye apne mujhe dost kaha hai ye mere liye badi cheez hai.
regards

Mkv ji Aap Yakeenan Mere Dost Hai Aur main Aaenda Zaroor Aapka Likha padhta Rahunga..Aapka Bahut bahut shukriya mere bhai icon_flower
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«Reply #11 on: September 03, 2011, 03:48:56 PM »

 Wah ji Wah!

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«Reply #12 on: September 03, 2011, 03:51:55 PM »
BAhut BAhut Khoob Khwaish Ji Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: September 04, 2011, 05:32:38 AM »
Quote from: khwaish on September 03, 2011, 10:22:30 AM
Dushman Ko Dushmani Ka Yeh Sila Do
Bas Usse Apni Nazron Se Giira Do
                     ~Ehsaan~

Har Kadam Par Tere Saath Chalne Ka Iraada Kiya
Kabhi Door Naa Ho Paayenge Ek Aisa Waada Kiya

Yehi Raha Humein Afsos Umarbhar Ka Eh Dost!!!!
Kya Humne Tujhpar Aitbaar Kuch Zyaada Kiya???

Tujhse Door Rehkar Tujhe Bhool Hi Jaayenge Hum!!!
Yeh Sochkar Hi Humne Apna Dard Aadha Kiya

Tujhse Haath Milaakar Hum Bhi Apni Raah Chal Padhe
Yakeenan Humne Tujhpar Apna Aitbaar Kuch Zyaada Kiya

              ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

Bohat Khoob Mere Bhai,.

Humne Use Appna Humraah Chunaa "Azeem,.
Jo Tareekiyon Mein Safar Nahi Karte,.

-Azeem-
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«Reply #14 on: September 04, 2011, 09:10:59 AM »
Quote from: -Rahim- on September 03, 2011, 11:55:03 AM
Kya baat hai Khwaish dost..
Haan uss par aitbaar kuch zyada kiya..
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Khush rahiye..!

Aapka Humesha Ki Tarah Bahut Bahut Shukriya Bhai Rahim icon_flower
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